Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always like reading. When I was young I will read every week, such as some stories and presents and so on.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer to read on paper because I think. What's scream so long time is bad for bad bad for my eyes and I feel it very tired.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
I need to read carefully when I have a exam and if I have no time I will don't read carefully. It's it's depend on the time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
I perform detail reading because I if I interesting with the stories I will uh, want to read more about. If I scanning the stories I don't.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案要更自然、直接并遵循时态一致性。避免泛泛而谈,给出具体例子并保持句子简洁(不超过5句)。可以先用主题句表明喜好,然后补充具体的阅读材料和频率。注意过去习惯用过去时(used to)或过去完成结构,避免冗词和不必要的短语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I used to read every week when I was a child, mainly storybooks and short novels. Now I read news articles and novels in my free time. Reading helps me relax and learn new vocabulary.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更流畅、语法和词汇准确。说明偏好并给出具体原因,使用连词(because, so, therefore)连接观点和原因,避免重复和词汇错误(screen拼写、表达“眼睛疲劳”要用accurate phrases)。建议一句主题句加一到两句解释。
Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I find screens strain my eyes after a short time. Reading printed books feels more comfortable and allows me to concentrate longer, so I use paper books for novels and screens for short articles.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理并用正确语法表达条件和频率。先给出清晰主题句(什么时候要仔细读),然后用because或when引出原因或例子。避免双重否定和重复(don't read carefully)并用正确时态。
Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when I am preparing for an exam because detailed understanding is essential. However, when I'm short of time, I usually skim texts to get the main ideas.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁明确,并保持连贯。先给出偏好,然后用because解释原因,注意语法(I perform → I prefer; if I am interested; scanning → skimming)。避免填充词(uh)并把句子控制在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because when I'm interested in a story I want to understand characters and plot fully. I only skim articles when I need to find specific information quickly.
× Yes, I always like reading.
✓ Yes, I always like reading.
该句时态正确,使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作“总是喜欢阅读”,无需修改。
× When I was young I will read every week, such as some stories and presents and so on.
✓ When I was young, I would read every week, such as stories and picture books.
原句使用了将来时态“will”与过去时间状语“When I was young”冲突。应使用过去习惯性表达,可用过去常用结构“would”或简单过去“read”。另外“presents”不合语境,可能想说“picture books/story books”,需替换为合适名词。建议用“would”表示过去常做的事情。
× I prefer to read on paper because I think. What's scream so long time is bad for bad bad for my eyes and I feel it very tired.
✓ I prefer to read on paper because I think staring at a screen for a long time is bad for my eyes and makes me feel very tired.
原句中多处问题:时态和时态本身为一般现在时,需用现在时表一般事实;“What's scream so long time”语序和词汇错误,应为“staring at a screen for a long time”;重复的“bad for”多余;“I feel it very tired”是不正确的表达,应改为“makes me feel very tired”。总体应使用一般现在时并调整词序和动词用法。
× I need to read carefully when I have a exam and if I have no time I will don't read carefully. It's it's depend on the time.
✓ I need to read carefully when I have an exam, and if I don't have time I won't read carefully. It depends on the time.
错误包括冠词、否定结构和时态:1) “a exam”冠词错误,元音音素前应为“an exam”;2) “I will don't read”语序和否定错误,正确为“I won't (will not) read”或“I don't read”;3) “It's it's depend”重复且动词形式错误,应为“It depends”。句子需统一使用一般现在时或将来参考,上句使用一般现在时更自然。
× I perform detail reading because I if I interesting with the stories I will uh, want to read more about. If I scanning the stories I don't.
✓ I do detailed reading because if I'm interested in the stories, I want to read more about them. If I scan the stories, I don't.
多个错误:1) “perform detail reading”搭配不自然,应为“do detailed reading”或“read in detail”;2) “if I interesting with the stories”中“interesting”需被动/形容词化并加系动词,应为“if I'm interested in the stories”;3) “I will uh, want to read more about”时态与助动词混乱,改为一般现在“I want to read more about them”;4) “If I scanning the stories I don't”动名词形式错误,应为“If I scan the stories, I don't.” 建议使用正确的动词形式和搭配,保持时态一致,并补全代词“them”。