Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は明確で内容も実務に結びついていて良いですが、いくつか改善点があります。まず文法と発音上の小さな誤り（"re related"→"related"）を直し、無駄なフレーズを減らしてより自然な流れにしてください。追加情報を付ける場合は、具体的な例（どのような情報が役立つか、どのように参照するか）を一つか二つに絞り、接続詞（for example, so, because）を使って論理的に繋げると効果的です。最大5文以内に収め、過度な繰り返しは避けましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading because it gives me new insights and useful information. For example, I read industry reports and case studies related to my business, and I often review key sections before client meetings to prepare talking points.

Gợi ý: 理由は明確ですが、文の論理が逆転しているように聞こえます（"paper because I can concentrate better if I read on screen"は矛盾）。この部分を修正して原因と結果を明確に示してください。また、"E apps"の表現は不自然なので具体的に"e-books"や"reading apps"と言い換え、接続詞を使って流れを整えましょう。冗長な断片を取り除き、完全な文で答えること。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and avoid distractions. When I read on a screen using e-book or reading apps, I often get tempted to open games or social media, which breaks my focus.

Gợi ý: 基本は良いですが言い回しを自然にし、余分なフィラー（uh）を減らしてください。"prepare meeting"や"read presentation documents or address"は不自然なので、正しい名詞化や語順（prepare for a meeting, read presentation slides or agenda）に直しましょう。具体例を一つ示し、接続詞でつなげると流れが良くなります。

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully when dealing with work documents or reports. For instance, when I prepare for a meeting I carefully review the presentation slides and the agenda so I can speak confidently.

Gợi ý: 答えは適切で状況による違いを明確に示していますが、フィラー（uh）が多いこと、時制と冠詞の誤り（"short time"→"short of time" or "little time"、"a free time"→"free time"）を修正してください。より流暢に聞こえるように接続詞や具体例を少し整え、文を短く簡潔にまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I'm short of time, I usually skim documents or reports at work. However, when I have free time I enjoy reading mystery novels in detail to fully follow the plot.

× If I read books re related to my business, I tend to refer back to it before the meetings.

✓ If I read books related to my business, I tend to refer back to them before meetings.

The original uses 'it' to refer to 'books' (plural) so the pronoun should be 'them'. Also 're' is a typo for 'related' and 'the meetings' is unnatural here; use 'meetings' without 'the' for general reference. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match the number of their antecedents and remove extra articles.

× I like to read on paper because I can concentrate better if I read on screen.

✓ I like to read on paper because I can concentrate better than if I read on a screen.

The original sentence is understandable but sounds comparative and needs clearer structure: compare concentration on paper with concentration on a screen. Use 'a screen' when speaking generally about using a screen. Suggestion: make comparisons explicit and use appropriate articles with countable nouns.

× For example read by E apps.

✓ For example, I read with e-apps.

The fragment lacks a subject and a correct verb phrase. 'read by E apps' is ungrammatical; use 'I read with e-apps' or 'I use e-apps to read'. Also 'e-apps' should be lowercase and hyphenated. Suggestion: include subject and choose correct preposition ('with' or 'using').

× I tend to open other apps such as games or social media.

✓ I tend to open other apps, such as games or social media apps.

Add a comma before 'such as' for clarity and repeat 'apps' to make the category clear. 'Social media' alone can be a mass noun but adding 'apps' clarifies the meaning. Suggestion: use commas with 'such as' and parallel structure.

× I need to read carefully when I have to read work documents or reports.

✓ I need to read carefully when I have to read work documents or reports.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Explanation: articles are correctly omitted because 'work documents or reports' is a general reference. Suggestion: none.

× For example, uh, when I prepare meeting, I read presentation documents or address carefully.

✓ For example, when I prepare for a meeting, I read presentation materials or addresses carefully.

'Prepare meeting' is missing the preposition 'for' and should be 'prepare for a meeting'. 'Presentation documents' is better as 'presentation materials', and 'address' likely means 'an address' or 'addresses'—use plural if general. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal responses. Suggestion: include necessary prepositions and choose appropriate collocations.

× If I have short time, I tend to skim uh, documents or reports uh on my duty.

✓ If I have little time, I tend to skim documents or reports while on duty.

Use 'little time' rather than 'short time'. 'On my duty' is unnatural; use 'while on duty'. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('little time', 'while on duty') and omit fillers.

× However, if I have a free time, I like to read mystery novels in detail.

✓ However, if I have free time, I like to read mystery novels in detail.

Don't use 'a' before 'free time' when speaking generally; say 'free time'. Suggestion: omit the indefinite article with uncountable nouns like 'time' when used generally.