Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조와 시제 사용을 개선하세요. 현재 문장은 의미 전달이 불분명하고 문법 오류(부정어 위치, 시제, 동사 형태)가 많습니다. 간결한 주제문으로 바로 답한 뒤, 한두 개의 구체적 이유나 예를 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 논리적으로 연결하고, 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I don't enjoy reading very much. I find long books boring and tiring because I get distracted easily. For example, when I try to read at night I often fall asleep, so I usually prefer listening to audiobooks instead.

Gợi ý: 명확한 시제와 어휘 선택을 연습하세요. 중복 표현(used to, I find I found)과 반복을 줄이고 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요. 연결어(so, because, therefore)를 적절히 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요. 문장 수를 2~4문장으로 유지하고 중복은 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and I can adjust the brightness. For instance, I often read short articles on my phone during breaks, which is faster than carrying a book.

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접 답하는 명확한 주제문을 먼저 말하세요. 'keywords'라는 아이디어는 괜찮지만, 이를 구체적으로 설명하고 예를 들어 언제 상세히 읽어야 하는지 명확히 하세요. 연결어(when, because, while)를 사용해 이유와 상황을 논리적으로 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: You need to read carefully when you're studying for an exam or signing a contract because small details matter. On the other hand, you don't need to be so detailed when skimming news headlines or social media posts.

Gợi ý: 의견을 분명한 주제문으로 제시하고, 스캐닝의 장단점을 구체적으로 설명하세요. 반복되는 단어(really, so I think)와 중복 표현을 줄이고, 연결어(therefore, however)를 사용해 균형 잡힌 답변을 만드세요. 문장은 3문장 내외로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer scanning because it helps me find important information quickly, especially when I'm researching. However, for complex texts like academic papers I use detailed reading to understand the full meaning.

× I absolutely didn't like reading because reading is really boring for me and really tired.

✓ I absolutely don't like reading because reading is really boring to me and makes me really tired.

The student is speaking about a current preference, so present simple should be used instead of past tense 'didn't like'. 'Boring for me' is natural but 'boring to me' is more idiomatic; 'really tired' needs a verb ('makes me') to connect cause and effect. Suggestion: use present simple for current states and include verbs to show cause ('makes me tired').

× So I think I didn't really.

✓ So I don't really think so.

This sentence uses past tense 'didn't' incorrectly and omits the object of 'think'. For expressing present opinion, use present simple 'don't really think so' and include 'so' as the object. Suggestion: reorder into subject + auxiliary + adverb + verb phrase ('I don't really think so').

× But so I every day I didn't reading, yeah.

✓ But I don't read every day, yeah.

The learner used 'didn't reading' which mixes past negation with a present participle. To express habitual action use present simple 'read' and form negative with 'do not/does not'. Suggestion: use 'I don't read every day'.

× I prefer to read on on a screen because screen is more comfortable, really pleasant for me.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because the screen is more comfortable and really pleasant for me.

Double 'on' is a repetition error. 'Screen' as a specific medium in context needs the definite article 'the screen'. Also combine adjectives with 'and'. Suggestion: use 'on a screen' when speaking generally, or 'the screen' when referring to a specific type of screen; here 'the screen' fits the comparison context.

× So I used to like a screen.

✓ So I used to like reading on a screen.

'Used to' is fine for past habits but the sentence lacks the activity 'reading' and repeats 'a screen' awkwardly. If the meaning is a past habit, keep 'used to' and include the verb: 'used to like reading on a screen'. Suggestion: specify the action after 'used to'.

× I find I found it every screen and a short article a lot more often.

✓ I find I read short articles on screens a lot more often.

The original mixes present 'find' with past 'found' and has unclear word order. For current habit use present simple 'find' or just state 'I read... a lot more often.' Suggestion: use consistent tense and clear object placement: 'I read short articles on screens a lot more often.'

× I think need to read carefully is umm what we find.

✓ I think needing to read carefully depends on what we find.

The sentence is ungrammatical: missing subject for 'need' and unclear structure. Use gerund 'needing' or rephrase 'the need to read carefully depends on...'. Suggestion: 'I think the need to read carefully depends on what we find.'

× We found keywords and when not is not key or not has cure.

✓ We look for keywords, and when there aren't any, the text doesn't require careful reading.

The original uses 'we found' (past) inconsistently and unclear pronouns 'not key' and 'not has cure' are incorrect. Replace with clear pronouns and clauses: 'there aren't any' refers to keywords. Suggestion: use 'look for' (present) and 'there aren't any' for absence.

× So I think it is keyword is really important significantly for reading carefully.

✓ So I think keywords are very important for reading carefully.

Redundant and incorrect modifiers 'really important significantly' should be simplified to one adverb such as 'very'. Subject-verb agreement: 'keyword is' should be plural 'keywords are' to match general statement. Suggestion: use concise modifier and correct agreement.

× I really like prefer scanning because scanning is really comfortable for me and really reduce reduce looking for reading.

✓ I really prefer scanning because scanning is comfortable for me and greatly reduces the time spent looking for information while reading.

'Like prefer' is redundant; choose 'prefer'. 'Reduce reduce' is repeated. 'Looking for reading' is unclear—use 'looking for information while reading' or 'searching for information'. Also verb agreement: 'reduces'. Suggestion: avoid redundant words and be specific about what is reduced.

× So I think scanning is really great skills.

✓ So I think scanning is a really great skill.

'Skills' (plural) conflicts with singular article 'a' and with 'scanning' treated as a single skill. Use singular 'skill' or plural without 'a'. Suggestion: 'scanning is a great skill'.

× So I think it is more learning scanning.

✓ So I think it's more about learning to scan.

Original is ungrammatical and vague. Use 'learning to scan' as the infinitive phrase and 'about' to indicate topic. Suggestion: rephrase to 'learning to scan' to express the intended meaning.