Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like reading?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like reading, but I prefer electronic reading rather than the paper books because I think it is a convenient way for me. It didn't need to carry out the heavy books.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Thí sinh
I prefer electronic books to paper ones because they are much more convenient and easier to carry. For example, I can store hundreds of titles on my tablet and read on the commute, so I didn't have to bring heavy books with me.
Giám khảo
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Thí sinh
Sometimes if I want to do some research, I will read the paper carefully and find some important topics. But if I want to relax myself, I will read the books fastly and sometimes drop some pages.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, these two ways of reading both important. I will choose different reading in different situation. For example, when I doing research, I read academic paper carefully because I need to understand the methods and diagnose. But if I am reading for relaxation, I prefer.
Do you like reading?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不够自然,有时语法和时态错误,表达有重复。回答应更直接并使用连贯的支持细节。建议简化句子,注意时态和主谓一致,并用连接词自然衔接。具体改进:1) 将冗长句拆成两句以内;2) 把“didn't need to carry out”改为现在时的肯定表达如“I don't need to carry heavy books”;3) 使用连接词如“because”或“so”连接原因与结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading. I prefer e-books to paper ones because they are more convenient, so I don't need to carry heavy books.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但有时态不一致和小的词汇错误。建议保持时态一致(现在时),用更自然的短语替换不地道表达,并尽量用一到两句内完成表达。具体改进:1) 将“on the commute”改为“during my commute”;2) 把“didn't have to”改为现在时“don't have to”;3) 可用连接词“for example”后接简明例子。
Ví dụ: I prefer e-books because they are more convenient and portable. For example, I can store hundreds of titles on my tablet and read during my commute, so I don't have to carry heavy books.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达含混且有语法和词汇错误(如“read the paper”不够具体,“fastly”错误)。建议先用主题句直接回答,再用连接词给出具体场景和原因。改为更精确的词汇,如“scholarly articles”/“relaxation”并使用副词“quickly”。此外避免模糊表达“drop some pages”,可说“skim”或“skip sections”。
Ví dụ: I read carefully when I'm doing research because I need to understand key points and methods. For relaxation, I usually skim books quickly and skip sections that don't interest me.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有多处语法错误与词汇使用不当(如“both important”“when I doing research”“academic paper”“diagnose”“I prefer”未完成)。建议先给出明确偏好或说视情况而定,然后用两个简洁的支持句说明各自场景,注意主谓一致并使用合适词汇如“academic papers”、“analyze”或“understand methods”。避免留下未完成句。
Ví dụ: It depends on my purpose: I use detailed reading for study and scanning for leisure. For example, when I'm doing research I read academic papers carefully to understand methods and analyse results, but for light reading I usually scan chapters to find interesting parts.
× It didn't need to carry out the heavy books.
✓ I didn't need to carry heavy books.
原句时态与主语意图不符。此处谈论过去一次性的结果或一般情况,使用过去时的否定结构“didn't need to”可以,但动词短语应为“carry”原形且不需要“out”。同时“heavy books”前不加冠词更自然。建议保持动词原形并去掉多余词。
× so I didn't have to bring heavy books with me.
✓ so I didn't have to bring heavy books with me.
该句本身语法正确,时态为过去(didn't have to)与上下文描述过去习惯一致,无需修改。仅在整体语篇中确认时态一致即可。
× For example, when I doing research, I read academic paper carefully because I need to understand the methods and diagnose.
✓ For example, when I am doing research, I read academic papers carefully because I need to understand the methods and diagnoses.
1) “when I doing”缺少助动词,应为“when I am doing”(现在进行时的主系结构)。2) “academic paper”应为复数“academic papers”或在前加不定冠词。3) “diagnose”是动词,句中应使用名词“diagnoses”或“diagnosis”。因此需调整为“am doing”、“papers”及“diagnoses/diagnosis”。建议使用“diagnoses”(多项研究要诊断多个问题)或单数“diagnosis”视语义而定。
× I will read the books fastly and sometimes drop some pages.
✓ I will read the books quickly and sometimes skip some pages.
1) “fastly”不是标准副词,应使用“fast”或“quickly”;“read ... fast”也可以,但“quickly”更自然。2) “drop some pages”表达不地道,应改为“skip some pages”(略读、跳过页面)。建议用“quickly”+“skip”。
× In my opinion, these two ways of reading both important.
✓ In my opinion, these two ways of reading are both important.
主语“these two ways of reading”与表语“important”之间缺少系动词“are”。需加上“are”构成完整系表结构。建议始终保证主语和谓语完整配对。
× I will choose different reading in different situation.
✓ I will choose different ways of reading in different situations.
1) “different reading”用法不当,需改为“different ways of reading”或“different types of reading”。2) “situation”应为复数“situations”与“different”配合更自然。同时保持可数名词的形式以符合语义。
× But if I want to relax myself, I will read the books fastly and sometimes drop some pages.
✓ But if I want to relax, I will read books quickly and sometimes skip some pages.
句中存在多处问题:1)“relax myself”在英语中多余,通常用“relax”;2)“the books”不需要定冠词,改为“books”;3)“fastly”非标准副词,改为“quickly”;4)“drop some pages”不地道,改为“skip some pages”。建议简化为“relax”并使用更自然的词组。