Reading— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and tense errors, and add one specific detail to support your preference. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially fiction. For example, I read a novel every week when I have free time because it helps me relax and improves my vocabulary.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar. Give a clear topic sentence, explain the reason briefly with correct tense and vocabulary, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect reason and consequence.

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on paper because long periods looking at a screen give me headaches and eye strain. Therefore, I find printed books more comfortable for long reading sessions.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer structure: state when you need to read carefully, then give a brief reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases like "it just take away" and use linking words such as "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: I need to read carefully in noisy or crowded places because background noise easily distracts me. For instance, when I'm on public transport I focus harder and sometimes use earphones to concentrate.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and use clearer reasons and vocabulary. State your preference, then explain briefly with a specific example or result. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the plot and remember key details. For example, when I read a novel slowly I can recall characters and events much better than if I skimmed it.

× Yes, I love to read story books or any type of books when I am alone at any time. I just used to study and read a book daily.

✓ Yes, I love reading story books or any type of book when I am alone. I used to study and read a book daily.

Use the gerund 'reading' after 'love' (verb + -ing). Also 'type of books' should be 'type of book' for general reference; 'at any time' is redundant and can be removed for clarity. 'I just used to' is awkward—'I used to' correctly expresses a past habit.

× I always prefer to read on paper because when I stuck at the screen of at long long time it seems my I am fail headache and also I I pain that's why I always prefer it.

✓ I always prefer to read on paper because when I am stuck at a screen for a long time, I get a headache and feel pain, so I prefer paper.

Correct present tense form 'am stuck' (be + past participle) and use 'get' for experiencing a headache. Remove incorrect repeated words and fix word order. Use 'for a long time' to express duration. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear clause connections.

× When I'm in a crowded place or busy place, at that time I need to concentrate more 'cause that time I cannot take my concentration, it just take away. So yeah.

✓ When I'm in a crowded or busy place, I need to concentrate more because my concentration is easily taken away.

Avoid repetition ('at that time') and fix awkward phrasing. Use noun phrase 'crowded or busy place' and the passive-like expression 'my concentration is taken away' or active 'noise takes my concentration away'. Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause' for correctness.

× I always prefer detailed reading, not scanning because I think if I scan the novel or something then it does not remain my brain and I can't understand the whole things or whole story of the topics.

✓ I always prefer detailed reading, not scanning, because if I scan a novel or something, it does not stay in my memory and I can't understand the whole story.

Use consistent present tense: 'prefer' and 'think' are present. Replace 'remain my brain' with 'stay in my memory'. Use singular 'a novel' or 'a text' and 'the whole story' for clarity. Remove redundant words ('whole things', 'of the topics').