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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like reading?

Thí sinh

Definitely yes. I'm a big fan of reading because my major is Chinese literature, so in my spare time I prefer to read some famous novels.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Thí sinh

Personally speaking, I prefer to read on my phone because I think it is more convenient and affordable. You know, sometimes you need to spend too much money in buying some physical books, so I prefer to read on my phone.

Giám khảo

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Thí sinh

Well, to be honest, when I need to prepare for my test or paper, I need to read some books carefully because I need to find the details in the books. But if I just want to have a break, I don't need to.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I prefer skimming my novels because sometimes I just want to relax and arrange myself, and in my spare time I think it's just a way to enjoy myself.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.5

Part 1

Do you like reading?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且直接,但可进一步丰富細節並使用連接詞以顯示邏輯性。可以簡短說明喜歡閱讀的原因、閱讀的類型或最近讀過的一本書,並避免重複。嘗試把句子控制在最多五句內,並在陳述後加一兩句具體例子來支撑觀點。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love reading because I study Chinese literature and enjoy exploring different narrative styles. For example, I recently read Cao Xueqin's Dream of the Red Chamber, which impressed me with its detailed character development and cultural insights. Reading novels helps me relax and also informs my academic work.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答有明確立場,但表達略顯口語化與重複(例如多次強調“prefer”與“you know”)。建議用一兩句具體對比紙質與電子閱讀的優缺點,並用連接詞(however, because, therefore)使語句更連貫。注意控制句子數量與簡潔性。

Ví dụ: I prefer reading on my phone because it is more convenient and cheaper. For instance, I can carry dozens of books in one device and buy ebooks at lower prices, which saves both space and money.

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答清楚但語言有些重複與冗長,可用更精練的句子並加入連接詞(for example, while, because)來強化對比。同時給出一個具體例子說明“仔細閱讀”時會做哪些事情(如做筆記、標註重點)。

Ví dụ: I read carefully when preparing for exams or writing papers because I need to identify specific details and evidence. For example, I underline key passages and take notes to make sure I can cite them later, while I skim light fiction when relaxing.

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答表達了偏好,但語句不夠精確且有語法小問題(例如“arrange myself”不自然)。建議明確說明為何選擇略讀(例如節省時間、把握情節)並用一兩個連接詞連接原因與例子,避免冗長。

Ví dụ: I prefer skimming novels because I often read for relaxation and want to get the main ideas quickly. For example, I skim chapters to follow the plot and only read passages in detail when a scene interests me.

Ngữ pháp

22:Article errors

× Definitely yes. I'm a big fan of reading because my major is Chinese literature, so in my spare time I prefer to read some famous novels.

Definitely yes. I'm a big fan of reading because my major is Chinese literature, so in my spare time I prefer to read famous novels.

句中“read some famous novels”中的“some”在此处多余。英语中当泛指一类事物或表达爱好时,通常直接用名词复数而不用“some”。建议去掉“some”,使表达更自然。

11:Incorrect use of prepositions

× Personally speaking, I prefer to read on my phone because I think it is more convenient and affordable.

Personally speaking, I prefer reading on my phone because I think it is more convenient and affordable.

动词短语搭配更自然:在偏好表达中,常用动名词(reading)而不是不定式或带介词结构的动词短语。此外原句语法并无严重错误,但将“prefer to read on my phone”改为“prefer reading on my phone”在口语中更地道。建议使用动名词形式以提高自然度。

14:Incorrect use of quantifiers

× You know, sometimes you need to spend too much money in buying some physical books, so I prefer to read on my phone.

You know, sometimes you need to spend too much money buying physical books, so I prefer to read on my phone.

“spend too much money in buying”是不地道的表达,正确搭配是“spend (too much) money buying ...”。另外“some physical books”在此处泛指实体书,应直接用复数“physical books”而非“some physical books”。建议去掉介词“in”和quantifier“some”。

6:Present tense issue

× Well, to be honest, when I need to prepare for my test or paper, I need to read some books carefully because I need to find the details in the books.

Well, to be honest, when I need to prepare for a test or a paper, I need to read books carefully because I need to find details in them.

重复使用“need to”显得累赘;“my test or paper”可改为不定冠词“a test or a paper”以泛指;“read some books carefully”中“some”可省略,“the details in the books”改为“details in them”更简洁自然。建议减少重复词并使用更简洁的代词。

6:Present tense issue

× But if I just want to have a break, I don't need to.

But if I just want to have a break, I don't need to read carefully.

原句省略了动词短语核心,导致信息不完整。根据上下文,句子应明确表示“不需要仔细阅读”,因此补全谓语“read carefully”。建议在对比句中保持动词结构一致以避免歧义。

8:Verb + -ing form

× To be honest, I prefer skimming my novels because sometimes I just want to relax and arrange myself, and in my spare time I think it's just a way to enjoy myself.

To be honest, I prefer skimming through novels because sometimes I just want to relax and compose myself, and in my spare time I think it's just a way to enjoy myself.

“skimming my novels”可以接受,但“skimming through novels”更常用;“arrange myself”是错误搭配,常用表达为“compose myself”或“relax”。因此替换为“compose myself”。建议使用常见短语以提高表达准确性和地道性。

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