Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise, correct tense consistency, and use a linking phrase to add a specific detail. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add duration and distance as supporting detail. Avoid repeating approximate words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk regularly in the mornings. I usually spend about 25 to 30 minutes in the park, covering roughly two to three kilometres, which helps me wake up and feel energetic for the day.

Gợi ý: Use correct past tense and clearer wording. Give a direct topic sentence about childhood habit, then contrast with present using a linking word (However/Now). Correct grammar: 'I used to run a lot' instead of 'I was run a lot.' Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really; when I was a child I preferred running to walking because I enjoyed playing active games. However, now I prefer walking for exercise and relaxation.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear reason, use linking words and be more specific about advantages of parks. Remove filler words and correct article usage: 'the those' is incorrect. Provide one or two concrete reasons.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the paths are safe and the environment is peaceful. In addition, parks have greenery and fresh air, which makes walking more enjoyable than walking near busy roads or inside cramped neighbourhoods.

Gợi ý: Use the correct conditional form ('If I had the opportunity') and give clear, relevant reasons. Avoid irrelevant or unclear points (e.g. 'Shin Chan character' needs explanation). Mention specific places or features in Japan you'd like to walk in and why.

Ví dụ: If I had the opportunity, I would take a long walk in Japan, especially in Kyoto, because I want to see the temples, traditional streets and seasonal scenery. I also enjoy Japanese culture and would like to explore it on foot.

Gợi ý: Begin with a topic sentence about your usual habit, then use a linking word to mention the recent walk. Add a small specific detail about the recent walk to make the answer more informative.

Ví dụ: I usually walk in the local park, and yesterday I went there with some friends. We walked for about half an hour and chatted while enjoying the evening breeze.

× Yes, usually in the morning I go to the park and walk around 25 to 30 minutes approximately.

✓ Yes, usually in the morning I go to the park and walk for around 25 to 30 minutes.

Use of 'walk around 25 to 30 minutes' is unidiomatic. English uses 'walk for [duration]'. Also remove 'approximately' when 'around' is used; keep one. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× I walked two to three kilometers a day.

✓ I walk two to three kilometers a day.

Sentence uses past tense 'walked' but context is habitual present (general routine), so use present simple 'walk'. This aligns tense with previous sentence describing usual habits.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

'to have a walk' is awkward; native speakers say 'for a walk'. The tense (past) is correct because question asks about childhood. Change prepositional phrase for natural collocation.

× Well, when I was a child I did not prefer to walk, but I remember that I was run a lot.

✓ Well, when I was a child I did not prefer to walk, but I remember that I ran a lot.

After 'I remember that' we need past simple 'ran', not passive 'was run'. 'Was run' is incorrect here; use active past 'ran' to describe habitual past action.

× But nowadays I prefer only walking.

✓ But nowadays I prefer only walking.

This sentence is grammatical; no change needed. It uses present simple to express current preference. Consider stylistic alternatives like 'I only prefer walking' but original is acceptable.

× Actually, parks are the those places where we can walk comfortably.

✓ Actually, parks are the places where we can walk comfortably.

Contains redundant article 'the those'. Remove 'the' before 'those' or simply use 'the places' or 'those places'. 'Parks are the places' is natural. Also 'parks' plural matches 'places' plural.

× However, at homes or other areas it is so difficult to walk.

✓ However, at home or in other areas it is very difficult to walk.

Use singular 'home' with 'at home'. Use preposition 'in other areas'. Replace 'so' with 'very' for formality. This corrects preposition and collocation issues (IDs 8 and 11) but primary fix shown.

× If I will get the opportunity, definitely in Japan because firstly the Shin Chan character I love there and I want to explore more through working.

✓ If I get the opportunity, I would definitely go to Japan because I love the character Shin-chan and I want to explore more work opportunities there.

Conditionals: do not use 'will' after 'if' in a real/unreal conditional; use present simple 'get'. For the result clause, use 'would' (polite hypothetical) or 'will' depending on certainty; here 'would' suits. Also fix word order: 'I love the character Shin-chan' and clarify 'explore more through working' to 'explore more work opportunities' for natural English.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

The question uses 'lately' with past simple; 'lately' commonly pairs with present perfect. To use past simple, replace 'lately' with 'recently'. Alternatively, use present perfect: 'Where have you gone for a walk lately?'. This correction matches past simple form 'did'.

× I usually walk in the park and yesterday I went with some of my friends.

✓ I usually walk in the park, and yesterday I went with some of my friends.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. Tenses are appropriate: present simple for habit and past simple for specific past event.