Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence stating how much you walk, correct factual/grammar errors, and give concise supporting details (when, why, how long). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. Because I work as a marketing executive and often take photos and videos, I walk about two to three hours a day on workdays. This helps me find good locations and gets me some exercise.

Gợi ý: Answer directly using correct tense (past). Give a clear topic sentence about frequency, then one specific supporting detail with times or people. Use linking words like 'often' or 'usually' and avoid unrelated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. I usually walked with my friends after dinner for about 30 minutes, which helped us relax and chat about our day.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear main reason, then give two specific supporting details (benefit and social aspect). Use appropriate vocabulary (‘fresh air’, ‘trees’, ‘exercise’, ‘relatives’/‘friends’) and linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they can enjoy fresh air and greenery. Also, parks provide space for light exercise and socialising, so many people walk there with family or friends.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear location as the topic sentence, then explain why with specific reasons (scenery, quiet, trees). Use correct conditional phrasing ('If I had the chance') and linking words ('because', 'so'). Avoid filler and finish your thought in one or two supporting sentences.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a tree-lined boulevard in the city centre. I like that area because it combines convenient shops with lots of trees, so the walk would be pleasant and lively.

Gợi ý: Answer in the past tense and be specific about the place and activity. Start with a simple topic sentence naming where you went, then give a short detail (when, how long, who you were with, or why). Avoid irrelevant or unclear words.

Ví dụ: Lately I walked in a district near my workplace in Ho Chi Minh City called Redfoot. I usually walk there during my lunch break because it is quiet and close to the office.

× You know my chaff is a marketing executive and I always do take a photos and video.

✓ You know my chief is a marketing executive and I always take photos and videos.

The sentence has incorrect word choice and pluralization. 'chaff' is likely 'chief' or 'boss' (word choice error, not covered so corrected to 'chief'). 'do take' is unnecessary emphatic auxiliary; simple present 'take' is correct. 'a photos and video' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'photos and videos' without 'a'. Suggestion: use correct noun ('chief' or 'boss'), use simple present 'take', and match articles with plural nouns.

× So in the days I work 8 hour and I work about two and three hours a day.

✓ So on working days I work eight hours, and I work about two to three hours a day doing that.

Tense and time-expression errors and number agreement. Use 'on working days' instead of 'in the days'. '8 hour' should be plural 'eight hours'. 'two and three hours' should be 'two to three hours'. Also clarified 'doing that' to show what the two to three hours refer to. Suggestion: use plural for hour(s) and standard expression 'two to three'.

× When I were trial I really love to go outside to have a work with my friends about UMM.

✓ When I was a child I really loved to go outside to walk with my friends around home.

Multiple errors: 'were' is incorrect past tense of 'be' for singular subject 'I' — should be 'was' (past tense issue). 'trial' likely intended 'child' (word choice). 'really love' should be past 'really loved' to match past time. 'have a work' is incorrect; 'walk' fits the context. 'about UMM' unclear — replaced with 'around home' but keep original meaning when possible. Suggestion: use correct past tense 'was' and past verbs, and use appropriate verbs like 'walk'.

× At night after a dinner I really love hanging out with my friend just for work.

✓ At night after dinner I really loved hanging out with my friends just for fun.

Tense inconsistency: original context past, so use past 'loved'. 'a dinner' should be 'dinner' (article unnecessary). 'my friend' -> 'my friends' to match earlier plural; 'just for work' likely intended 'for fun'. Suggestion: match tense and use correct noun forms and prepositions.

× About 30 minutes and if you really relax.

✓ Usually for about 30 minutes, and then you really feel relaxed.

Fragment sentence lacking clear structure (sentence structure error but mapped to quantifier here because 'About 30 minutes' needs completion). 'if you really relax' unclear; changed to 'you really feel relaxed' for clarity. Suggestion: make complete sentence and choose appropriate verbs to express result.

× There are many reasons but the most reason I think is the because they want to take some breast air in the park.

✓ There are many reasons, but I think the main reason is that they want to breathe some fresh air in the park.

Use of 'the most reason' incorrect — should be 'the main reason' or 'the most important reason' (article/adjective use). 'the because' incorrect conjunction; use 'is that'. 'take some breast air' incorrect words: should be 'breathe fresh air'. Suggestion: use 'the main reason is that' and correct verb 'breathe' and adjective 'fresh'.

× It says many trees and I think people spend time to work around the park with their relatives or with the their friends be a good activities.

✓ There are many trees, and I think people spend time walking around the park with their relatives or friends as a good activity.

'It says many trees' incorrect subject; use 'There are many trees'. 'spend time to work' wrong infinitive; use 'spend time walking'. 'the their friends' duplicate article; remove extra 'the'. 'be a good activities' wrong verb and number; use 'as a good activity' (singular) or 'good activities' (plural) with correct article. Suggestion: use 'spend time walking' and correct articles and noun number agreement.

× The first that's come to my is bad for cities is has a long road and many people work there.

✓ The first thing that comes to my mind about cities is that some have long roads and many people work there.

Multiple grammar issues: 'that's come to my' should be 'that comes to my mind' (subject-verb agreement and idiom). 'is bad for cities' unclear; changed to 'about cities'. 'is has a long road' incorrect combination of verbs; use 'some have long roads'. Suggestion: use correct idiom 'the first thing that comes to my mind' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× And when I have a time, I really want to takes a long work in there because it has many trees and I can.

✓ And when I have time, I really want to take a long walk there because it has many trees and I can relax.

'have a time' should be 'have time' (article unnecessary). 'wants to takes' wrong: 'want to take' (third person singular error and unnecessary 's'). 'a long work' incorrect noun; should be 'a long walk'. Sentence was incomplete 'and I can.' Completed as 'and I can relax.' Suggestion: use 'want to take a long walk' and correct verb forms.

× As I mentioned before, I go to work in Redfoot cities, it's quite near uh, to the district in Ho Chi Minh cities, and this place is really, umm, appreciate for work and I really like to work in there with my TV.

✓ As I mentioned before, I work in Redfoot City; it's quite near the district in Ho Chi Minh City, and this place is really suitable for work, and I really like working there with my team.

Tense and noun errors: 'go to work in' can be 'work in' for habitual. 'Redfoot cities' should be 'Redfoot City' (proper noun singular). 'Ho Chi Minh cities' -> 'Ho Chi Minh City'. 'appreciate for work' incorrect adjective; use 'suitable for work' or 'pleasant for work'. 'work in there' should be 'working there'. 'TV' likely 'team' or 'my job' — corrected to 'team' to make sense. Suggestion: use correct place names, appropriate adjectives, and gerund 'working' for activities.