Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок, нелогичные фразы и лишняя информация. Нужно: 1) исправить грамматику (например, «I work a lot» → «I walk a lot»), 2) избегать противоречивых деталей (20° below 0 — непонятно), 3) использовать связку и короткое объяснение причины. Практикуйте простые, прямые предложения (1–3 предложения).

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite often, especially when the weather is nice. I usually walk with my friends because it helps me relax and catch up with them.

Gợi ý: Ответ неестественен и содержит неправильные слова («obtain enough fresher», «when you walk after»). Структурируйте ответ: тема + причина + короткий пример. Используйте связки (for example, because, so). Проверьте порядок слов и времена (used to).

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go for walks often as a child because my parents believed fresh air was healthy. For example, we would go to the nearby park every weekend with my family.

Gợi ý: Повторения и неточные выражения («obtain fresh air», «atmospheric place») делают ответ менее естественным. Сформируйте тему, конкретные причины и пример, используйте связки (because, for instance, moreover). Замените прямые переводы на естественные фразы (fresh air, peaceful atmosphere).

Ví dụ: I think people enjoy walking in parks because they offer fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, parks have many trees and quiet paths, which makes them ideal for relaxing or exercising.

Gợi ý: Ответ в целом понятен, но содержит лишние и немного неуместные детали (bicycling/horse riding vs walking) и повторы. Улучшите связность: тема → причина → конкретный пример. Используйте подходящие лексические единицы и избегайте перечислений без связок.

Ví dụ: I would like to take a long walk in a forest with my friends because it feels peaceful and scenic. For example, we could follow trails, stop for a picnic by a stream, and enjoy the natural surroundings.

Gợi ý: Неправильное использование времён и наречий («Last time I usually go») снижает ясность. Следуйте структуре: короткий ответ о недавнем событии (past tense) + причина/деталь. Укажите конкретное момент и одно-два подробных описания.

Ví dụ: Recently I went for a walk to Gorky Park, which is near my home. I went there with friends because it has nice paths and places to sit and talk.

× Of course, I work a lot when the weather is sunny and the temperature is about 20° below 0 and I like spend time with my friends outside.

✓ Of course, I walk a lot when the weather is sunny and the temperature is about 20° below zero, and I like to spend time with my friends outside.

The student used 'work a lot' which does not match the question about walking; 'walk' is the correct verb in present simple for habitual actions. 'Like spend' is missing the infinitive marker 'to' after 'like'. Use '20° below zero' instead of '20° below 0' for natural English. Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestions: Use present simple for habits (I walk), use 'like to + verb' or 'like + verb-ing' (I like to spend / I like spending). Use 'below zero' for temperature.

× Yes, because it is really important to obtain enough fresher when you walk after. Sitting at home and I usually do it with my family and friends.

✓ Yes, because it was really important to get enough fresh air when you went for walks as a child. I usually did it with my family and friends instead of sitting at home.

The question asks about childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Is' should be 'was'; 'obtain' is formal and awkward here — 'get' is more natural; 'fresher' is incorrect; use 'fresh air'. 'When you walk after' is ungrammatical — express as 'when you went for walks'. The sentence 'Sitting at home and I usually do it...' lacks structure and tense consistency; rewrite to 'I usually did it... instead of sitting at home.' Suggestions: Match tense to time reference (past for childhood), use natural collocations ('get fresh air', 'go for a walk'), ensure complete clause structure.

× I reckon people like walking in parks because we want to obtain fresh air and we love walking. There are a lot of trees and. This is the atmospheric place.

✓ I reckon people like walking in parks because they want to get fresh air and they enjoy walking. There are a lot of trees, and it is a pleasant atmosphere.

Pronoun consistency: use 'they' to refer to people in general. 'Obtain fresh air' is formal; 'get fresh air' is natural. 'Love walking' can be 'enjoy walking' for variety. 'There are a lot of trees and.' is a sentence fragment; combine clauses. 'This is the atmospheric place' is unnatural — use 'it is a pleasant atmosphere' or 'it has a pleasant atmosphere.' Suggestions: Maintain pronoun consistency, avoid sentence fragments, use natural collocations ('get fresh air', 'pleasant atmosphere').

× I want to take a long walk in the forest with my friends. In my opinion, it is the best place for bicycling or riding a horse because there you can find a lot of entertaining places. There you can have a picnic or play on the playground.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in the forest with my friends. In my opinion, it is the best place for cycling or horseback riding because you can find many interesting spots there. You can have a picnic or play on the playground.

Question uses hypothetical 'if you had the chance', so conditional 'would like' is more appropriate than 'want'. 'Bicycling' is acceptable but 'cycling' is more common; 'riding a horse' is better expressed as 'horseback riding'. 'A lot of entertaining places' is awkward; use 'many interesting spots'. Maintain natural word order: place adverbials ('there') usually follow the noun phrase. Suggestions: Use conditional forms for hypotheticals ('I would like'), prefer natural collocations ('horseback riding', 'interesting spots').

× Last time I usually go for a walk to the Gorky Park. It is located near my home and it is the best place for walking with my friends and family.

✓ Recently I usually went for a walk to Gorky Park. It is located near my home, and it is the best place for walking with my friends and family.

The question 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' asks about recent past, so 'went' (past) is needed rather than 'go'. 'Last time I usually...' mixes past reference with 'usually' awkwardly; 'recently I usually went' clarifies repeated recent actions. 'The Gorky Park' — park names typically omit the definite article: 'Gorky Park'. Suggestions: Match tense to 'lately' (use past or present perfect), avoid combining 'last time' and 'usually'; use the park name without 'the'.