Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + frequency). Correct grammar (e.g., 'teachers' -> 'a teacher'; 'watch a lot about' -> 'walk a lot and try to reach about'). Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot — I try to reach about 10,000 steps every day because I often walk between the music room and my students' classrooms at school.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use past tense consistently. Replace vague verbs ('working outside') with precise ones ('playing' or 'walking'). Use linking words ('for example', 'also') and give specific details (when, who, where). Keep to 1–3 sentences and avoid fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. For example, every evening my parents took me to walk in the local park, and during holidays we often went hiking in the nearby hills.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a topic sentence and 2–3 clear reasons using linking words ('first', 'second', 'also'). Use correct collocations ('appreciate the flowers and trees', 'get fresh air', 'children can play'). Avoid repetition and hesitations.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks for several reasons. First, they can appreciate the flowers and trees, and second, they can enjoy fresh air; also parks provide a safe place where children can play.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear conditional response ('If I had the chance...'). Use natural adjectives ('beautiful' instead of 'stunning' is okay but ensure correct grammar). Provide 1–2 specific reasons linked with words like 'because' or 'so'. Correct phrasing ('with my friends/partner').

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a large park because it is peaceful and beautiful; I could enjoy the fresh air and do activities like jogging or picnicking with friends.

Gợi ý: Use precise verbs and natural expressions. Say 'went to the mall' and 'looked around the shops' or 'shopped for...'. Replace unclear phrases ('holders', 'fed over the moon') with correct vocabulary ('phone cases' or 'gifts'; 'I was over the moon' or 'I felt very happy'). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yesterday I went to the shopping mall with a friend. We spent about an hour looking around the shops and bought some small gifts, which made me very happy.

× Yes, every day I watch a lot about a 10,000 steps but sometimes I work at the school because I'm a teachers.

✓ Yes, every day I walk a lot, about 10,000 steps, but sometimes I work at the school because I'm a teacher.

The sentence uses 'watch' incorrectly instead of 'walk' (word choice but treated as present tense meaning). Also 'I'm a teachers' has subject-verb/number mismatch: singular 'I' requires singular noun 'teacher'. Use commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'walk' for present habitual action and singular noun 'teacher'.

× I guide my student uh to what between music room and classrooms.

✓ I guide my students, for example between the music room and the classrooms.

Plural is needed: 'student' should be 'students' to agree with general meaning. The phrase 'to what between' is unclear; replace with 'for example between' or 'from the music room to the classrooms'. Ensure plural noun and clearer prepositional phrase.

× Yes, of course I liked working outside.

✓ Yes, of course I liked working outdoors.

'Outside' as an adverb is acceptable but 'outdoors' is more natural in this context. Tense 'liked' correctly indicates past, keep past. Suggest using 'outdoors' for idiomatic expression.

× For example, every evening my parents lead me to walk at the, at the park.

✓ For example, every evening my parents took me for a walk in the park.

Use past form 'took' to match past context. Preposition 'in the park' is idiomatic; 'take someone for a walk' is the correct collocation. Remove redundant 'at the'.

× Uh, sometimes, uh, during the holiday, uh, they lead me to hike.

✓ Sometimes, during the holidays, they took me hiking.

Use past tense 'took' to match 'liked' earlier. 'During the holiday' should be plural 'during the holidays' for general past habits. Use the gerund 'hiking' after 'took me' for natural phrasing.

× There are different reasons people like to walk in pass.

✓ There are different reasons people like to walk in parks.

'pass' is a typo; correct word is 'parks'. Use plural 'parks' to match 'different reasons' and general statement.

× First of all, they like appreciating flower and trees.

✓ First of all, they like appreciating flowers and trees.

Plural nouns 'flowers' and 'trees' are needed to match general plural sense. 'Appreciating' as a gerund is acceptable after 'like' but could also be 'to appreciate'; either is fine. Ensure noun plurality.

× Sometime they always want to give the fresh air from the park.

✓ Sometimes they want to enjoy the fresh air from the park.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Always' conflicts with 'sometimes' so remove 'always'. 'Give the fresh air' is unnatural; people 'enjoy' or 'breathe' fresh air. Use 'enjoy the fresh air' for clarity.

× Sometime, uh, maybe the child may can play at the park.

✓ Sometimes, children can play at the park.

Do not stack modals 'may can'; use one modal or simple verb. Use plural 'children' for general statement. Use 'sometimes' and 'at the park' is acceptable, though 'in the park' is slightly better.

× You had the opportunity. I would like to walk at the park because it's a very stunning.

✓ If I had the opportunity, I would like to walk in the park because it's very beautiful.

The examiner asked a conditional; respond with 'If I had the opportunity' (conditional clause). 'Walk at the park' -> 'walk in the park'. 'A very stunning' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'very beautiful' or 'stunning' without 'a'.

× Sometimes I can catch the fresh air or do the different activities with my partners.

✓ Sometimes I can get fresh air or do different activities with my partners.

'Catch the fresh air' is non-idiomatic; use 'get' or 'breathe'. 'The different activities' should be 'different activities' (no definite article). 'Partners' could be 'friends' or 'partners' depending on meaning.

× Yesterday I went to the shopping mall with my friend.

✓ Yesterday I went to the shopping mall with my friend.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no change needed. Keep past simple 'went' for a completed action.

× We spent an hour to see different shops and then we bought the different holders from their shops so it was fed over the moon.

✓ We spent an hour looking at different shops and then we bought various holders from the shops, so we were over the moon.

Use gerund 'looking at' after 'spent an hour'. 'Different holders' -> 'various holders'. 'From their shops' is unclear; 'from the shops' is better. 'It was fed over the moon' is incorrect; use 'we were over the moon' to express happiness. Ensure subject matches emotion.