Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer first, then give one clear reason with a linking word. Use correct grammar and fewer repetitions. Avoid long confusing clauses.

Ví dụ: No, I don't walk a lot. I prefer staying at home and usually travel by car because it's faster and more comfortable for me.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unrelated remarks and correct tense and vocabulary.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't walk regularly when I was a child. Instead, my friends and I played games outside in the yard or went to the playground for fun.

Gợi ý: Give a clear reason first and then add a specific supporting detail or result using linking words. Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar, and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: People like to walk in parks because they are peaceful and free from traffic. Also, parks have lots of greenery which improves air quality, helping walkers feel relaxed and refreshed.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then use linking words to give specific reasons or details. Correct articles and plural forms, and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk on a beach because I have never explored one before. I would enjoy walking along the sand, listening to the waves, and discovering shells and coastal plants.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear past-tense sentence saying where you went, then add two specific details about the place using linking words. Use correct tense and cleaner sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Lately I went to a botanical park. It has many different plants and flowers, and I enjoyed seeing several kinds of birds and small animals while walking there.

× No, I don't. I like to stay at home and even though if you are go anywhere, I like to go on a vehicle and it's still now I don't walk a lot but sometime it's happened.

✓ No, I don't. I like to stay at home, and if I need to go anywhere, I prefer to go by vehicle, so I still don't walk a lot, although sometimes I do.

Sentence contains incorrect conjunction 'even though if' and ungrammatical verb forms. Combined ideas without proper punctuation. Use 'if' alone for conditionals, 'prefer to go by vehicle' for natural phrasing, and 'although' for contrast. Use present simple for habitual actions and 'sometimes I do' for occasional occurrences. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 16 and 26.

× How far is Italy? What? I didn't, but yeah, we'll go outside for a fun and enjoying and playing games, that's kind of thing. We are dead board for a walk. We tend to go and I don't. I didn't go any.

✓ How far is Italy? Sorry, I didn't understand. When I was a child, we used to go outside for fun to enjoy playing games. We were bored with walking. We tended to go out, but I did not go much.

Mixed tenses and incorrect pronouns: 'we'll' (will) is wrong for past habitual actions; use 'used to' or 'when I was a child' and past forms. 'Enjoying' needs an infinitive or gerund phrase 'to enjoy playing games' or 'for enjoying' is unnatural. 'Dead board' is incorrect; 'bored' is correct. 'I didn't go any' is ungrammatical; use 'I did not go much.' Grammar Problem Type IDs: 5, 12, 26.

× Because park is the most peaceful area and there is no vehicle and no disturbance. No one disturb them. So it's a their loss of greenery. So we we got oxygen phrase oxygen. So it's make us so phrase and.

✓ Because the park is a peaceful place with few vehicles and little disturbance. No one disturbs us there. It is their green space, so we get fresh air and oxygen, which makes us feel relaxed.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'park' when speaking generally about a specific place. 'No one disturb them' lacks third-person singular verb agreement: use 'disturbs' and correct pronoun to 'us' or 'people.' 'Loss of greenery' was unclear; 'green space' fits. 'We got oxygen' should be 'we get oxygen' or 'we get fresh air.' Use present simple for general truths. Fix sentence fragments and combine ideas coherently. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 17, 27, 11.

× If I had the chance I would like to go long walk for a beach because I never explore beach area before so I like to walk in a beach areas to explore uh every new things like a river, sand.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk on a beach because I have never explored a beach area before. I would like to walk along the shore to explore new things like rivers and sand.

Use conditional correctly: 'If I had the chance, I would like to...' For English collocations use 'take a walk' and preposition 'on a beach' or 'along the shore.' Use present perfect 'I have never explored' for experiences up to now. Use singular 'a beach area' and plural 'new things.' Also correct articles and word order. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 7, 22, 11.

× Hmm. Lately I want, you know, park, uh, it's called botanical park where it's lots of different kind of plants and flowers there and lots of animals. We explore that things.

✓ Lately I went to a park called the Botanical Park, which has many different kinds of plants, flowers, and animals. We explored those things.

Use past tense 'went' for a recent completed action. Use the definite article 'the Botanical Park' when naming a specific place. 'Lots of different kind of' should be 'many different kinds of.' Use past tense 'explored' and plural pronoun 'those' to refer back to plural nouns. Clean up filler words and sentence fragments. Grammar Problem Type IDs: 6, 22, 26.