Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid unrelated fragments. Use one or two supporting details linked by a simple connector.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite regularly. For example, I walk for about 30 minutes every morning to relieve stress and stay healthy, which helps me focus during the day.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give clearer specific details. Begin with a direct past-tense statement, then add one or two specific reasons or memories connected with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went outdoors as a child. I was very curious, so I used to explore the neighborhood looking for interesting things and play with other children in nearby homes.

Gợi ý: Clarify the main reason and use correct vocabulary (walk, not work). Use linking words to give an example. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks because the green space is relaxing and social. For example, many people bring their dogs and chat with neighbors while they walk.

Gợi ý: Use the second conditional correctly (would) and avoid repetition. State the preference, then give two concise reasons with linking words.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the mountains because I could breathe fresh air and enjoy scenic views, which makes hiking both relaxing and energizing.

Gợi ý: Be precise and avoid filler words. Use correct past tense and quantifiers (an hour). Mention one or two specific things you explored for clarity.

Ví dụ: I went for a walk in Yuan Cheng Park in Kaohsiung two days ago. I walked for about an hour and enjoyed exploring the local markets and coastal views.

× Yes, I work a lot every days.

✓ Yes, I work a lot every day.

The plural form 'days' is incorrect with 'every'; use singular 'day'. Also 'work a lot' is fine. Suggestion: use 'every day' for habitual actions.

× For examples, I walk around 30 minutes in every morning to relieve the stress and make my body healthier to.

✓ For example, I walk around 30 minutes every morning to relieve stress and make my body healthier.

Use 'for example' not 'for examples'. 'Every morning' not 'in every morning'. Do not add 'to' at the end. 'Relieve stress' is more natural without 'the'. Use 'walk around 30 minutes' -> better 'walk for around 30 minutes' but corrected to concise form.

× Applies the conditions that we will.

✓ This sentence is unclear; likely intended: 'That depends on the situation.'

Original is ungrammatical. 'Applies the conditions that we will' has wrong verb form and unclear subject. Provide a clear alternative that fits context.

× Yes, when I was a child, I often go outside to have a walk because I was have a curi curiosities to seek for the funny things and it is often since that I was in every neighborhood's home to to play.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I often went outside for a walk because I had curiosities and wanted to look for interesting things; I often played in every neighborhood.

Mix of tenses: use past tense 'went' and 'had' for childhood. 'Have a curi curiosities' is ungrammatical; use 'had curiosities' or 'was curious'. 'Seek for' should be 'look for' or 'search for'. Remove duplicate 'to'. Possessive 'neighborhood's home' incorrect; use 'neighborhood' or 'neighboring homes'.

× I think people like to work in parks because parks is a good environment to make every people together to relieve their stress and for example it is often seen people take their dogs in the parks to make some funny things together.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because parks are a good environment for people to get together, relieve stress, and, for example, you often see people bringing their dogs to the parks to have fun together.

Use 'walk' not 'work'. 'Parks are' (plural agreement). 'Environment for people' not 'to make every people together'. 'Relieve their stress' -> 'relieve stress' or 'relieve their stress'. 'It is often seen people take their dogs' -> 'you often see people bringing their dogs'. Prepositions adjusted: 'in the parks' -> 'to the parks' or 'in parks'.

× If I had the chance to take a long walk, I will choose the high mountains because I think it is a good way to breathe the fresh air and sometimes you can also feels good when you walk to go hiking and it is good.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would choose the high mountains because I think it is a good way to breathe fresh air, and sometimes you also feel good when you go hiking.

In a hypothetical conditional, use 'would' not 'will'. 'Breathe the fresh air' -> 'breathe fresh air'. 'Feels' should be 'feel' (subject 'you'). 'Walk to go hiking' is redundant; use 'go hiking'. Remove extra 'it is good'.

× I went to Yuan Cheng Kaohsiung cities about two days ago, and I walked about 1 hours to walk around the the area, so I think I thought it is very funny and uh, good things for me to explore some new things.

✓ I went to Yuan Cheng, Kaohsiung, about two days ago, and I walked for about one hour around the area, so I thought it was very enjoyable and a good way for me to explore new things.

Use commas for place names. '1 hours' -> 'one hour' (singular). Use 'for about one hour' with 'walked for'. Remove duplicate 'the'. Use past tense consistently: 'I thought it was'. 'Funny' is wrong word choice here; use 'enjoyable'. Avoid filler 'uh'.