Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence about how often you walk, then give one or two short supporting details. Avoid hesitations, irrelevant facts and grammar errors (e.g., tense and articles). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I prefer walking for short trips because I moved here recently and I find it quicker than using public transport. However, I might buy a car in the future if I need to travel longer distances.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear statement about your childhood habit, then add specific activities and a brief reason. Remove repetitions and filler words; use past tense consistently and link ideas with 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went outside as a child because I played with friends and often went shopping with my family. Going outdoors made me feel refreshed and peaceful, and I enjoyed watching nature while playing.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion and follow with two specific reasons. Use correct nouns and articles ('individuals' or 'people', 'the fresh air', 'nature') and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I think people like walking in parks because it helps them feel relaxed and peaceful. Also, the fresh air and presence of trees and flowers make parks pleasant places to reconnect with nature.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with the place you would choose and a brief reason. Use conditional form correctly ('I would like to') and give one specific detail about the location or activity. Avoid fragmented sentences and tense mistakes.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Yamagata prefecture in Japan because I enjoyed climbing its green, steep mountains when I lived there. The scenery and fresh air make it ideal for long hikes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear past-time answer: state where you walked and how long it took, then add one concise detail about why or how often. Avoid unfinished sentences and fillers; use past simple consistently.

Ví dụ: Yesterday I walked to my daughter's kindergarten, which takes about 15 minutes from our house. She attends school three times a week, so I often walk there when I take her.

× Definitely, I always want to go everywhere. That's why I don't have a car because I moved here from just South of in Germany in 2023.

✓ Definitely, I like to go everywhere. That's why I don't have a car; I moved here from the south of Germany in 2023.

Original sentence has awkward phrasing and word order. 'I always want to go everywhere' is better as 'I like to go everywhere.' 'Just South of in Germany' mixes prepositions and word order; correct phrase is 'the south of Germany.' Also two clauses with 'because' created redundancy; use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity. Suggestion: simplify expressions, use correct preposition 'of' with region and proper noun capitalization.'},{