Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and avoid filler words (uh). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "my father drops me off"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely walk because I usually drive or my father drops me off to college. However, I do go for short walks in the morning for exercise and fresh air, which helps me start the day feeling refreshed.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid incorrect word forms (e.g., "unwent ourselves" is wrong) and tense consistency. Use linking words like "and" or "which" to show result. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I often went for morning walks with my grandmother at about 5 a.m., which I loved. The fresh air and quiet streets made me feel relaxed for the whole day, and those walks were one of my favorite childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons with correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases ("their society", "wife for the fresh air") and filler sounds. Use linking words like "because", "so", or "and" to connect ideas. Provide a short concluding phrase if needed.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they offer greenery and cleaner air compared with busy streets. The trees and flowers create a pleasant atmosphere, and parks usually have safe paths for walking, so people can relax and exercise comfortably.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence, add one specific reason and correct tense/use of phrases (e.g., "If I ever got the chance"). Avoid repetition of "chance" and keep it concise. Use linking words such as "because" or "and" to add a reason why.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk around the Taj Mahal because I want to admire its famous architecture up close. I haven't visited yet, so walking there with my family would be a memorable experience.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating when and where you walked, then give one or two specific details. Correct awkward phrases ("in nailing the fresh air") and grammar ("I went for a walk today with my brother"). Avoid redundancy and use linking words like "so" or "and" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I usually walk in the mornings, and today I went for a walk at about 6:00 with my brother. We walked in the nearest park, had a good conversation, and enjoyed the fresh air, which helped us feel relaxed.

× I don't walk much as I can drive myself.

✓ I don't walk much because I can drive myself.

The sentence used 'as' in a causal sense which is acceptable but can be ambiguous; however the main issue is clarity rather than grammar. Keep causal conjunctions consistent; 'because' is clearer here. No verb agreement error present but improving conjunction usage clarifies meaning.

× So whenever I need to travel to my college or for outing I drive myself or my father drop me out.

✓ So whenever I need to travel to my college or go out, I drive myself or my father drops me off.

The clause 'my father drop me out' has a subject-verb agreement error: with singular subject 'my father' the verb must be 'drops' (third person singular). Also 'drop me out' is incorrect collocation; the correct phrasal verb is 'drop me off'. Additionally 'for outing' is unnatural; use 'go out'.

× So it's not uh really when I need to travel I do it just for walking in the morning.

✓ It is not like that; when I need to travel I do it, and I only walk in the morning.

The original sentence is run-on and unclear. Rewriting splits ideas into clearer clauses and fixes awkward phrasing 'do it just for walking' to 'I only walk in the morning'. This addresses sentence structure and clarity.

× We used to go there at around 5:00 in the morning and had a great time inhaling the fresh air and unwent ourselves and it gives us relaxation for the whole day and it used to be the best time of my life.

✓ We used to go there at around 5:00 in the morning and had a great time inhaling the fresh air and unwinding; it gave us relaxation for the whole day and used to be the best time of my life.

Several tense inconsistencies: 'had' and 'gives' conflict; events in the past should use past tense 'gave'. 'Unwent' is not a correct past participle; the correct verb is 'unwind' with past participle 'unwound', but here 'unwinding' or 'unwinding ourselves' is natural. Also combine clauses to avoid repetition. Correct past tense usage keeps narrative consistent.

× I think people prefer to go for walks in the park rather than their society because the park contains the greenery and the wife for the fresh air.

✓ I think people prefer to go for walks in the park rather than in their housing society because the park has greenery and wide open spaces for fresh air.

Several word choice and adjective issues: 'their society' is unclear — 'housing society' or 'neighborhood' fits better. 'Contains the greenery' is awkward; use 'has greenery'. 'the wife for the fresh air' is likely a typo for 'wide' or 'space'; correct to 'wide open spaces'. Use appropriate nouns and adjectives for natural English.

× It contains the ornamental trees and plants that provides a positive vibe and also, uh, people think that walking on the ground.

✓ It contains ornamental trees and plants that provide a positive vibe, and people also enjoy walking there.

Subject-verb agreement: 'trees and plants' is plural, so the verb should be 'provide' not 'provides'. Also 'people think that walking on the ground' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'people also enjoy walking there' for clarity and correct verb usage.

× If ever got a chance, I would like to have a walk around Taj Mahal.

✓ If I ever get a chance, I would like to take a walk around the Taj Mahal.

Missing subject 'I' in the conditional clause and tense mismatch: use 'If I ever get a chance' (present simple) for a real conditional leading to 'would like'. Also 'have a walk' is less natural than 'take a walk', and include the definite article 'the' before 'Taj Mahal'.

× I hadn't got a chance to visit there yet.

✓ I haven't had a chance to visit there yet.

The original uses past perfect 'hadn't got' which is incorrect with 'yet' and the implied present relevance. Use present perfect 'haven't had' to indicate up to now. Also 'visit there' is acceptable but 'visit it' or 'visit the Taj Mahal' is more natural.

× So in future if I got a chance I would love to walk there and see its architecture with my family and friends.

✓ So in the future if I get a chance, I would love to walk there and see its architecture with my family and friends.

Mismatch of tenses in the conditional: 'if I got a chance' (past) should align with 'would love' which is fine, but for a realistic future possibility use 'if I get a chance'. Also add 'the' before 'future'.

× As I'm a morning person and I go for a walk regularly in the morning at around 6:00.

✓ I'm a morning person and I go for a walk regularly at around 6:00 in the morning.

Redundant phrasing 'in the morning' twice; streamline to one placement. Tense is fine; this corrects word order for naturalness.

× So yes, today itself I went for a walk with my brother.

✓ Yes, I went for a walk with my brother today.

Word order in English typically places time expressions either at the beginning or end; 'today itself' is unnatural. Placing 'today' at the end is natural. Tense 'went' correctly indicates past.

× We went to the nearest park and had a great conversation in nailing the fresh air and relaxing ourselves.

✓ We went to the nearest park and had a great conversation while inhaling the fresh air and relaxing.

'Nailing the fresh air' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'inhaling'. Use 'while inhaling' to indicate simultaneous actions. 'Relaxing ourselves' is awkward; simply 'relaxing' is more natural. This fixes verb choice and participle usage.