Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles) and avoid vague endings. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk every day for about 30 minutes. I find it helps me relax and clear my mind, especially after work. For example, I usually stroll around my neighborhood park where the paths are quiet and shaded.

Gợi ý: Correct tense usage and avoid repetition. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and add a specific memory to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked in the neighborhood gardens when I was a child, especially in the green areas near my house. For instance, I remember exploring flower beds with my friends and sometimes racing along the paths after school.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence variety. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons linked with linking words (for example, because, therefore). Avoid repeating the same idea in similar words.

Ví dụ: People often walk in parks because it feels therapeutic and reduces stress. For example, the fresh air and greenery help you clear your mind, and therefore many people feel more energetic and happier after a walk.

Gợi ý: Use proper conditional form and complete sentences. Begin with a concise topic sentence using the second conditional for hypothetical situations, then add specific details about the place and why you would enjoy it.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a beautiful tree-lined street. I would enjoy the shade and the peaceful atmosphere, and I might stop at a café to rest and watch people go by.

Gợi ý: Use past tense correctly and combine short fragments into full sentences. Provide a specific detail about when or what you did to make the answer more complete.

Ví dụ: Recently I went for a walk in my garden. I enjoyed looking at the flowers and trees, and I felt relaxed after spending about 20 minutes walking among the plants.

× Yes, I like to walk every day for 30 minutes. This make me feel relaxed and clear my mind. It's a kind of.

✓ Yes, I like to walk every day for 30 minutes. This makes me feel relaxed and clears my mind. It's a kind of therapy.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'This' is singular so verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). 'Clear my mind' must agree with subject: use 'clears my mind'. Also the sentence 'It's a kind of' is incomplete; add the noun 'therapy' to complete the idea. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subjects and finish incomplete phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed walking in the gardens, especially the green areas. I also love loved running with my friends.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed walking in the gardens, especially the green areas. I also loved running with my friends.

Mixed tense: the speaker sets the timeframe in the past ('was a child', 'enjoyed'), so 'love' should be past tense 'loved'. Remove the extra 'love'. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same past timeframe when describing past habits. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Because of walking is kind of therapy. When you walk you clear your mind and feel relax. This make you feel good. It's very important to practice this habit.

✓ Walking is a kind of therapy. When you walk, you clear your mind and feel relaxed. This makes you feel good. It's very important to practice this habit.

'Because of walking is' mixes 'because of' with a clause; use either 'Because walking is...' or simply 'Walking is...'. 'Feel relax' is incorrect adjective form; use past participle 'relaxed' to describe feeling. 'This make' needs third person singular 'makes'. Suggestion: choose correct clause introducers and use correct adjective/verb forms and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× If I have a chance to walk through. Beautiful street with the trees on its sides. I will love that and enjoy.

✓ If I had a chance to walk through a beautiful street lined with trees on both sides, I would love that and enjoy it.

Conditional form: the question asked a hypothetical past/future preference, so use the second conditional 'If I had... I would...'. Sentences are fragmented; combine into one complete sentence and use 'lined with trees' or 'with trees on both sides'. Add 'it' after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: use proper conditional forms and complete sentences. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× I went to walk. At my garden I enjoy looking for flowers and trees and feels relaxed.

✓ I went for a walk. In my garden I enjoy looking at the flowers and trees and feel relaxed.

Wrong verb phrase: say 'went for a walk' not 'went to walk'. Tense consistency: the question asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' so 'I went for a walk' is past; keep following clause consistent or separate past and general present: here use present 'I enjoy' for habitual enjoyment, so make verbs agree: 'feel' (not 'feels') after 'I'. Use 'looking at' rather than 'looking for' if you mean observing. Suggestion: choose correct verb collocations and keep subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 26