Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and sentence fragments.

Ví dụ: No, I don't walk a lot. I work long hours at an office, and when I get home I usually feel too tired to go out. For example, after a full day I prefer to rest rather than take a walk in the park.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and add a brief specific detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then support with reasons or examples and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went for walks with my mother when I was a child. We usually walked on weekends because she worked from Monday to Friday, and we liked visiting the small park near our house.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words for coherence and add a specific reason or example to support your point.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the trees and greenery create fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere. For example, a short walk among trees can help reduce stress and improve concentration.

Gợi ý: Use the conditional correctly and avoid repetition. Start with a clear conditional sentence, then give specific sensory details about the place to make the answer vivid.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal road by the beach. I enjoy watching the sea, feeling the sea breeze, and listening to the waves, which makes walking very relaxing.

Gợi ý: Fix tense and sentence structure. Give a clear past or recent activity sentence, explain the reason briefly with a linking word, and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: Lately I have been walking in the nearby park. Because our home is small and crowded, the park is a convenient and peaceful place to get some fresh air.

× No, I don't walk a lot. I usually sit in office when I'm working and when I'm back home I'm usually very tired so I will tend to lie down on my bed inside of take a walk in the park.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot. I usually sit in the office when I'm working and when I get back home I'm usually very tired, so I tend to lie down on my bed instead of taking a walk in the park.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'office' (Article errors, ID 22) and unnatural future 'will tend' used instead of simple present 'tend' (Present tense issue, ID 6). Also incorrect phrase 'inside of take a walk' should be 'instead of taking a walk' with preposition and gerund (Verb + -ing form, ID 8; Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestion: use 'the office' to specify location, use simple present 'tend' for habitual actions, and use 'instead of taking' to contrast actions.

× Yes, when I was a child I always go outside to have a walk with my mom especially on weekend because she need to work on Monday to Friday and we usually went to a park nearby my house.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I always went outside to have a walk with my mom, especially on weekends, because she needed to work from Monday to Friday and we usually went to a park near my house.

Errors: mixing past and present ('I always go' should be past 'I always went') (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'on weekend' needs plural 'on weekends' (Incorrect use of quantifiers/article, ID 14/22). 'she need' should be past 'she needed' for consistency (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'from Monday to Friday' is the correct preposition phrase; 'nearby my house' should be 'near my house' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestion: keep verbs in past when talking about childhood, pluralize 'weekends', use 'needed', and use 'near' for location.

× I think people like to work in parks is because they're full of tree and the air is very fresh, so people can relax and have some calm moments in the park.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because they are full of trees and the air is very fresh, so people can relax and enjoy some calm moments there.

Errors: 'like to work in parks is because' is ungrammatical and redundant (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). 'work' should be 'walk' to match meaning; 'tree' needs plural 'trees' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Repetition 'in the park' changed to 'there' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: use clear clause 'people like to walk in parks because...' and ensure noun plurals and concise phrasing.

× If I have a chance to take a long walk, I would choose a road nearby beach because I love the scenery of sea so I think it's the best best idea for walking by beach.

✓ If I had a chance to take a long walk, I would choose a road near the beach because I love the scenery of the sea, so I think it's the best idea for walking by the beach.

Errors: mixed conditional forms - 'If I have a chance... I would' should be second conditional 'If I had... I would' (Conditional is under Present tense issue, ID 6). 'nearby beach' should be 'near the beach' (Incorrect use of prepositions and article, IDs 11 and 22). 'scenery of sea' needs article 'the sea' and 'best best' is repeated. 'walking by beach' needs 'the beach'. Suggestion: use 'If I had' for hypothetical, include articles 'the' before 'beach' and 'sea', remove duplicate word.

× I usually go for a walk lately in the park because.

✓ I have been going for walks lately in the park because...

Errors: 'usually go for a walk lately' mixes present habitual 'usually' with 'lately' and lacks correct aspect; use present perfect progressive 'have been going' for recent habitual actions (Past tense issue, ID 5 and Present tense issue, ID 6). The sentence also ends abruptly with 'because.' Suggestion: use 'I have been going for walks lately' to indicate recent repeated actions and complete the reason clause.

× There are not enough escape in my house, so we usually choose a close spot to take a walk.

✓ There is not enough space in my house, so we usually choose a nearby spot to take a walk.

Errors: 'escape' is the wrong noun; correct noun is 'space' (Sentence structure/word choice, ID 26). 'There are' should be 'There is' because 'space' is uncountable (Singular and plural issue, ID 1 and There be issue, ID 3). 'a close spot' should be 'a nearby spot' or 'a close-by spot' (Incorrect use of prepositions/adjectives, ID 11/18). Suggestion: use 'There is not enough space' for uncountable noun and 'nearby spot' for location.