Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating 'walk' and streamline: e.g., mention exact routine and purpose.

Ví dụ: Not really. I usually commute to work by scooter, so I don’t walk much during the week. However, I try to walk for 30–60 minutes on weekend mornings to get exercise and fresh air.

Gợi ý: Good content and a clear example. Improve coherence by using a linking phrase and one concise detail about activities or frequency to make it more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. As a child I often played outdoors; for example, my friends and I would walk to the nearby mountainside or open fields a few times a week to play games and explore nature.

Gợi ý: Correct small errors and combine ideas smoothly. Use linking words (for example, moreover) and give one specific reason or example to support your view.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because they are peaceful and bring you closer to nature. Moreover, in crowded cities parks offer a quiet place for exercise and relaxation, away from traffic and noise.

Gợi ý: Strong clear answer with reasons. Improve fluency by linking reasons and adding a brief specific image or duration to make it more engaging.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal path. Walking by the sea for a few hours would help me relax, reduce stress, and give my legs a good workout.

Gợi ý: Fix tense and awkward phrase ('while working there' is unclear). Use a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add two specific details (what you saw, how long).

Ví dụ: Last weekend I went for a short walk on a mountain trail near my house. The trail offered nice views and fresh air, and I spent about an hour enjoying the peaceful atmosphere.

× I don't walk a lot during weekends because I usually commute by scooter for work.

✓ I don't walk a lot on weekends because I usually commute to work by scooter.

Use of preposition with time: 'during weekends' is less natural than 'on weekends' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Also word order 'commute to work by scooter' is more idiomatic than 'commute by scooter for work' (sentence structure/style). Replace 'during' with 'on' and change word order for clarity.

× Lately I went for a walk on a short mountain trail near my house last weekend.

✓ I went for a walk on a short mountain trail near my house last weekend.

Redundant time adverb 'Lately' conflicts with specific past time 'last weekend' (tense/time reference error; Past tense issue ID 5). Remove 'Lately' so the sentence correctly places the action in the past with 'last weekend'.

× The trail has nice views and fresh air, and I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere while working there.

✓ The trail has nice views and fresh air, and I enjoyed the peaceful atmosphere while walking there.

Tense inconsistency: speaker refers to a past walk ('last weekend') so 'enjoy' and 'working' should be in the past tense and use correct verb: 'enjoyed' and 'walking'. 'Working there' is incorrect verb choice and meaning (incorrect use of verb form ID 10/8). Change to 'enjoyed' and 'walking' to match past context and intended meaning.