Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Говорите более непосредственно и грамотно: начните с короткого прямого ответа на вопрос, затем добавьте 1–2 поддерживающих предложения с конкретикой. Избегайте повторов («Honestly», «To be honest») и исправьте ошибки (например, «I don't walk a lot», «I have a sedentary lifestyle»). Укажите конкретную частоту или пример прогулки вместо расплывчатых фраз.

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't walk very much because I have a sedentary job and spend most of the day at my computer. However, when I have free time on weekends I usually go for a long walk in the park for about an hour to stay active.

Gợi ý: Дайте чёткий основной ответ и подкрепите его конкретным воспоминанием. Исправьте грамматику и порядок слов (например, «I spent time outside every day»). Используйте связку для плавного перехода к примеру («For example», «I remember that»).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I spent time outside almost every day with my close friends. For example, we often explored the local river near our village, where we would play and look for small animals.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо и логично: начните с причины, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных эффекта. Исправьте лексику и грамматику («people enjoy walking», «trees provide fresh air», «improve your mood»). Используйте связку («Also», «Moreover») и завершайте предложение ясно.

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks mainly because of the natural environment — trees and plants provide fresh air and a pleasant atmosphere. Moreover, walking in a park can reduce stress and improve your mood, making it easier to relax.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте кратко и насыщенно: начните с прямого ответа («I would like to walk in…»), затем приведите 1–2 конкретных причин. Уточняйте слова (use «street food», «sights», «activities»), избегайте общих фраз («interesting actions»).

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in Shanghai because the city has many vibrant neighborhoods and famous street food. I would explore the old streets, try local dishes, and visit historical sights along the way.

Gợi ý: Давайте ясный ответ в прошедшем времени: начните с «Last time I went for a walk…». Уберите тавтологию («I remember» дважды), используйте корректную грамматику («we were walking along our street», «a local shop that sold art»). Добавьте одну деталь о впечатлении.

Ví dụ: Last time I went for a walk I was with my mother and we walked along our street. We stopped at a small local shop that sold many pieces of art, and I enjoyed looking at the paintings and handmade crafts.

× Honestly. To be honest, I don't work a lot because I have a sitting lifestyle and I just sit every day or and work on my computer. But if I have a lot of leisure time, I think that I do walk a lot. But now I have only 1000.

✓ To be honest, I don't walk a lot because I have a sedentary lifestyle and I sit every day and work on my computer. If I had a lot of leisure time, I would walk a lot, but right now I only walk about 1,000 steps.

The student used awkward sentence fragments and incorrect verbs ('work a lot' instead of 'walk a lot') and mixed tenses and conjunctions. Use clear clauses: present habitual action with simple present ('I don't walk a lot') and conditional with past tense in the if-clause ('If I had...') and conditional modal ('I would walk'). Replace 'sitting lifestyle' with 'sedentary lifestyle' and correct 'only 1000' to a complete measure ('only walk about 1,000 steps'). Suggestions: combine fragments into full sentences, match tense in conditional sentences, and choose accurate vocabulary.

× Of course, I every day spend time outside with my close friends and I remember that we visited and explored our local river which located in my village.

✓ Of course, I spent time outside every day with my close friends, and I remember that we visited and explored the local river that is located in my village.

Word order and quantifier placement are incorrect ('I every day spend' should be 'I spent time every day'). The sentence mixes past tense and missing relative pronoun and verb ('which located' should be 'that is located' or 'which is located'). Use correct past simple ('spent') for habitual past actions and correct relative clause structure. Suggestions: place adverbs of frequency (every day) after the verb or after the object, and include the verb 'is' in relative clauses.

× I think people keen on walking in parks because there are a lot of trees which can provide fresh air. Also I can add that when you go and walking in parks, your emotional and moods will.

✓ I think people are keen on walking in parks because there are a lot of trees that provide fresh air. I would add that when you go walking in parks, your emotions and mood improve.

Missing auxiliary verb in 'people keen' (needs 'are') and incorrect relative clause ('which can provide' is acceptable but 'that provide' is more natural). The phrase 'go and walking' is ungrammatical; use either 'go walking' or 'walk'. 'Your emotional and moods will' is incomplete and mixes countable/uncountable forms; correct to 'your emotions and mood improve' or 'your emotional state will improve'. Suggestions: include the correct form of 'be' with adjectives (are keen), use consistent verb forms for activities ('go walking'), and ensure parallel nouns ('emotions and mood').

× So if I had a chance, I would like to take a long journey in Shanghai, because I think that there are a lot of interesting streets with thrilling foods, and I want to try a lot of interesting actions in this.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in Shanghai, because I think there are many interesting streets with exciting foods, and I want to try many interesting activities there.

'If I had a chance' is acceptable but 'the chance' is more natural. 'Take a long journey' conflicts with the question about a long walk; 'long walk' fits context. 'Thrilling foods' is odd; use 'exciting foods'. 'Try a lot of interesting actions in this' is ungrammatical—use 'try many interesting activities there'. Modal 'would like' is correct; adjust surrounding nouns and prepositions. Suggestions: match your nouns to the context (walk vs journey), choose collocations like 'exciting foods' and 'activities', and use appropriate locational words like 'there'.

× I remember that last walking was with my mother and we we were walking on our street and I remember that we visited one local shop with a lot of art.

✓ I remember that my last walk was with my mother; we were walking on our street and we visited a local shop that had a lot of art.

'Last walking' is incorrect; use 'my last walk'. The student repeated 'we' twice. Past continuous 'we were walking' is fine, but mixing tenses with 'visited' is okay if referring to a completed action; ensure consistency. 'One local shop' is unnatural; use 'a local shop' and clarify with 'that had a lot of art'. Suggestions: use correct noun forms ('walk' not 'walking') for events, avoid word repetition, and choose natural determiners ('a local shop').