Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct facts; avoid repetition and grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., "I walk to work every day. My office is 4 kilometers from my home, so I walk both ways and sometimes return for lunch").

Ví dụ: I walk to work every day. My office is about four kilometres from my home, so I usually walk both to and from work, and I sometimes go home for lunch, which means I walk around four times a day.

Gợi ý: Keep the answer fluent and avoid repetition. Use past tense consistently and provide specific routines with linking words. Replace filler sounds and correct plural/singular and time expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved being outdoors as a child. I often played and went for walks in the afternoons and sometimes after dinner, especially in the summer when the weather was nice.

Gợi ý: Organise ideas with clear linking words and correct vocabulary (e.g., "quiet" not "quite"). Give two specific reasons and a brief result. Avoid hesitations and fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because there are many trees and cleaner air, so it feels refreshing. Also, parks are quieter than busy streets, which helps people relax and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Use conditional correctly and keep sentences grammatically accurate. Provide one clear reason why you would choose that place and avoid repetition. Use linking phrase for explanation.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would walk to my hometown, which is about 24 kilometres away, because there is a pleasant pedestrian path and I would enjoy reconnecting with family and familiar scenery.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with past simple and give one specific detail. Avoid filler words and unclear phrasing. State when and how far you walked and why if relevant.

Ví dụ: Recently I went to the city centre for a training course. On that trip I walked about four kilometres in total while moving between the training venue and nearby stops.

× Every day I walk to my work.

✓ Every day I walk to work.

Unnecessary use of the definite article 'my' with 'work' is uncommon in English; 'walk to work' is the idiomatic expression. Keep the present simple for routine actions.

× My work is 4 kilometers away from my home, so I go back home for lunch.

✓ My work is 4 kilometers from my home, so I go back home for lunch.

Use 'X is ... from Y' to express distance; 'away from' is redundant when paired with 'from my home'. 'From my home' alone is clearer and more natural.

× So I make the travel four times a day.

✓ So I make the trip four times a day.

'Make the travel' is unidiomatic. Use 'make the trip' or 'travel four times a day'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× It means I end up work for four kilometers a day.

✓ It means I end up walking four kilometers a day.

The original lacks a verb form; 'end up walking' is the correct phrasal verb and 'for four kilometers' should be 'walking four kilometers'. This fixes sentence structure and verb usage.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

Question uses 'did' (past), so 'go' is correct but 'to have a walk' is unnatural; 'go outside for a walk' is the idiomatic phrase.

× Yes, when I was a child, I used to be a child who really like who, who really liked being outside.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I used to be someone who really liked being outside.

Redundant repetition 'be a child who' and wrong verb form 'like' for past. Use 'used to' with past 'liked' and replace repetition with 'someone' for clarity.

× Every every night, every afternoon I walk.

✓ Every night and every afternoon I walked.

Talking about childhood (past) requires past tense 'walked'. Also remove duplicate 'every'. If speaker means habitual past, use past simple.

× I went outside for walk after dinner, after like breakfast and lunch.

✓ I went outside for a walk after dinner, and sometimes after breakfast and lunch.

Need the article 'a' before 'walk' and better connectors: 'and sometimes' clarifies frequency; use past tense 'went' to match time frame.

× Umm, in parks there are so many trees, so it means we can enjoy the fresh air and we can experience quite moments in park.

✓ Umm, in parks there are many trees, so we can enjoy the fresh air and experience quiet moments in the park.

Remove unnecessary 'so' and 'so many' -> 'many' is fine; use adjective 'quiet' (not 'quite') and include the article 'the' before 'park' for specificity. 'Experience' doesn't need 'we' repeated.

× On the other hand, in busy cities there are so nice pollution.

✓ On the other hand, busy cities have a lot of pollution.

'So nice pollution' is incorrect: 'pollution' is uncountable and negative, so use 'have a lot of pollution' or 'are very polluted'. Avoid 'nice' which conflicts with 'pollution'.

× So parks are parks provide us.

✓ So parks provide us with relief from that.

Original is ungrammatical and incomplete. Use 'provide us with' + noun phrase. 'Relief from that' refers back to pollution/busy cities.

× If I have the chance, I would like to walk to my hometown, which is 24 kilometers away from away from where I live and a very good pedestrian Rd. has constructed to my hometown, so I've really enjoyed.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to walk to my hometown, which is 24 kilometers from where I live; a very good pedestrian road has been built there, so I would really enjoy it.

Conditional sentence needs past tense in the if-clause ('If I had the chance') when using 'would'. Remove duplicate 'away from'. Use '24 kilometers from where I live'. Passive perfect 'has been built' is correct for construction; use 'would really enjoy it' to match conditional.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

In questions about recent past, 'lately' is more often used with present perfect; with 'did' use 'recently'. This keeps tense and meaning consistent.

× Umm, I went to city center to participate training.

✓ Umm, I went to the city center to participate in training.

Add definite article 'the' before 'city center' and include preposition 'in' after 'participate' to form 'participate in training'. Past tense 'went' is correct.

× Umm it was my last time.

✓ Umm, it was the last time.

Use definite article 'the' for 'last time' when referring to a specific final occasion. Past tense 'was' is appropriate.

× It was my very last time to take a long walk.

✓ It was my very last time taking a long walk.

Use gerund 'taking' after 'time' to describe the activity. 'Very last' is acceptable, keep past tense 'was'.

× It was I end up walked for four kilometers in.

✓ I ended up walking four kilometers.

Original mixes tenses and wrong word order. Use past simple 'ended up' + gerund 'walking' and place distance after the verb. Remove unnecessary 'in'.