Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid unrelated fragments, and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and possessive errors (e.g., “my friends”). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — I walk a lot in my spare time. For example, I usually take a 30-minute walk after work because it helps me relax and clear my mind. I also sometimes walk with my friends at the weekend, which makes it enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently for childhood descriptions and give a clear reason or example. Start with a direct past-tense topic sentence, then add a linked detail (e.g., because…). Avoid contradictory statements without explanation.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child because my father enjoyed long walks. For instance, we used to walk to the park every Sunday, which encouraged me to be active even though I could be lazy at other times.

Gợi ý: Give a concise, grammatical answer with clear linking words and concrete reasons. Use countable/uncountable correctly and avoid vague phrases like “invoke.” Provide 2–3 specific benefits (e.g., fresh air, scenery, safety).

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the environment is peaceful and safe. In addition, parks have fresh air, nice trees and flowers, and pleasant paths, so walkers can relax and enjoy the scenery.

Gợi ý: Be specific about what you mean (e.g., distance or route) and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear conditional sentence, then explain why and give one detail. Avoid unclear numbers like “20” without units.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk around the historic part of my city because I enjoy old architecture. For example, I would plan a 10–15 kilometer route that passes museums, parks and riverfront areas.

Gợi ý: Use past simple with clear time expressions and be more specific about where you went and what made it enjoyable. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (e.g., because, so) to explain.

Ví dụ: I went for a long walk with a friend today in the city centre. We visited a park and then walked along the river, which was lovely because the weather was warm and we had time to chat.

× Yes, I work a lot, I like walking.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot; I like walking.

The student used 'work a lot' which changes meaning; context asks about walking frequency so 'I walk a lot' is present simple to state habitual action. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join independent clauses. Ensure verb reflects the activity asked about.

× I always walk when I have time.

✓ I always walk when I have time.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses present simple correctly to describe habitual action when time is available.

× It helps me relax and enjoy my time sometimes.

✓ It sometimes helps me relax and enjoy my time.

Adverb placement: 'sometimes' is more natural before the main verb phrase here. Placing it earlier clarifies frequency. Also 'enjoy my time' is acceptable but could be 'enjoy myself' for a more idiomatic expression.

× I have always my friends.

✓ I have always been with my friends.

Original lacks proper verb structure. To express continuous association use 'have always been with my friends' or 'I've always had friends.' The phrase 'have always my friends' is ungrammatical because possession needs proper word order and auxiliary for continuous aspect.

× Yes, I often go outside.

✓ Yes, I often went outside.

Question asked about childhood ('when you were a child'), so past simple tense should be used to describe habitual actions in the past: 'I often went outside.'

× My father likes walking so much. I think me too.

✓ My father liked walking so much. I think so did I.

Tense should match the childhood frame: change 'likes' to 'liked.' 'I think me too' is ungrammatical; use 'I think so did I' or 'I did too.'

× Also I was a lazy child, but now I'm not lazy and I try to walk a lot.

✓ Also, I was a lazy child, but now I'm not lazy and I try to walk a lot.

Sentence is mostly correct; add a comma after 'Also' for natural rhythm. Tenses correctly contrast past (was) with present (I'm not lazy). Maintain present simple 'I try' for habitual action.

× I think it's very comfortable place for walk.

✓ I think it's a very comfortable place to walk.

Missing article 'a' before 'very comfortable place' and incorrect preposition/infinitive: use 'to walk' after 'place' to indicate purpose. 'Comfortable' modifies 'place' so structure should be 'a very comfortable place to walk.'

× There are a lot of beautiful plants, trees, maybe sometimes we can see mountains there.

✓ There are a lot of beautiful plants and trees; sometimes we can even see mountains there.

Add conjunction 'and' between 'plants' and 'trees.' 'Maybe sometimes' is redundant; choose 'sometimes' or 'even' for emphasis. Use semicolon or conjunction to join clauses. Maintain plural nouns correctly.

× So invoke really good place.

✓ So it's really an enjoyable place.

Original 'So invoke really good place' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is that parks are pleasant; 'it's really an enjoyable place' or 'parks are really nice places' conveys this clearly.

× I think I would like to take a long walk around my city.

✓ I think I would like to take a long walk around my city.

This sentence is correct as a hypothetical preference using 'would like.' No change needed.

× I want to go around 20.

✓ I want to walk about 20 kilometers.

Original lacks unit after number; 'go around 20' is unclear. Specify unit and verb: 'walk about 20 kilometers' or 'walk around 20 miles' depending on intended measure.

× I think it's really crazy and excited idea.

✓ I think it's a really crazy and exciting idea.

Use correct adjective 'exciting' (not 'excited') to describe the idea. Also include article 'a' before 'really.' Adjectives should describe the noun 'idea.'

× I was walking with my friend today all day.

✓ I walked with my friend all day today.

Use simple past 'walked' for completed action earlier today. Word order 'all day today' is more natural. 'Was walking' could be past continuous but simple past is concise and appropriate.

× I think it was amazing and funny walk.

✓ I think it was an amazing and fun walk.

Need article 'an' before the noun 'amazing and fun walk.' Use 'fun' instead of 'funny' because 'funny' implies humorous; 'fun' describes enjoyment.

× I really like about this day.

✓ I really liked this day.

Wrong use of preposition 'about.' To express enjoyment of the day, say 'I really liked this day' (past) or 'I really like this day' (if speaking in present). Match tense to context (walk was today so past is acceptable). 'Liked' removes unnecessary preposition.