Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 어순 오류가 많고 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 현재 시제와 과거 시제를 혼용하고 있고 단어 선택이 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하는 간단한 주제문을 먼저 말하고, 그 이유를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 예: 평일과 주말을 구분해 말하고, 직업 때문에 걷는지 여부를 명확히 하세요. 또한 관사와 시제, 동사의 형태를 정확히 사용하도록 연습하세요.

Ví dụ: Not really. On weekdays I usually work in my workshop as a cabinet maker, so I don’t have much time to walk. However, I walk more at weekends to relax and get some exercise.

Gợi ý: 문법(과거 시제)과 어휘 선택이 부정확합니다. 'when I was a child'처럼 올바른 표현을 사용하고, 걷기와 자전거 타기를 구분해 설명하세요. 한두 개의 구체적 예시(장소, 누구와 함께 등)를 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often walked with my family to the nearby park or shops. Sometimes I preferred riding my bicycle, especially when I wanted to go farther or go faster.

Gợi ý: 전반적으로 내용은 이해되지만 문장 구조와 어법을 다듬어야 합니다. 일반적인 이유를 먼저 말하고, 구체적 근거(경치, 시설, 안전성 등)를 연결사로 이어 설명하세요. 복수·단수와 동사 일치에 주의하세요.

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks because the scenery is beautiful and the paths are well maintained. In addition, parks are usually peaceful and safe, so they are ideal for exercising or spending time with family.

Gợi ý: 질문을 오해하고 있습니다. 'take a long walk'에 대해 장소를 묻는 질문이므로 걷고 싶은 장소(예: 해변, 산책로, 도시 거리 등)를 말해야 합니다. 조건문(if I had the chance)을 사용해 가상의 상황을 표현하고, 이유를 덧붙여 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along the coast. The fresh sea air and wide views would be very relaxing after a busy period at work.

Gợi ý: 지명과 장소 표현이 불명확하고 발음 또는 철자 오류로 보이는 단어들이 있습니다. 최근에 갔던 장소를 분명히 말하고, 언제, 누구와, 무엇을 했는지 등 구체적 정보를 덧붙이세요. 장소 이름이 정확하지 않다면 'a nearby lake'처럼 일반 표현으로 대체해도 됩니다.

Ví dụ: Recently I went for a walk at a nearby lake with my family. The lake has a pleasant walking path and we enjoyed watching ducks and talking together.

× In week days I usually working in my workspace.

✓ On weekdays I usually work in my workspace.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'usually' requires the simple present 'work' not the present participle 'working'. Use 'on weekdays' for correct preposition and spacing. Suggestion: Use 'I usually work' for habitual actions and 'on weekdays' for time expression.

× When I working my factory as I cabinet maker I had to moving the itchy person for order.

✓ When I worked at my factory as a cabinet maker, I had to move the items for orders.

Tense and verb form errors: 'When I working' should be past simple 'When I worked' because it's a past time clause. Use 'worked at my factory' for correct preposition. 'As I cabinet maker' should be 'as a cabinet maker' (article). 'Had to moving' should be 'had to move' (modal 'had to' + base verb). 'Itchy person' is incorrect word choice; likely 'items' or 'pieces'. Suggestion: Use past simple for past habitual jobs and 'had to' + base verb for obligation in the past.

× Yeah, when I child I usually go for work with my family very often, but sometimes I prefer to ride a bicycle for work.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child I usually went to work with my family very often, but sometimes I preferred to ride a bicycle to work.

Tense and auxiliary omission: 'when I child' needs 'was a child'. Maintain past tense 'usually went' and 'preferred' to match timeframe. Use 'to work' rather than 'for work' for destination. Also use 'ride a bicycle to work'. Suggestion: Keep verbs in past tense when talking about childhood routines.

× In Canada it has so many parks, Each park has a very beautiful scenery and road is very convenient.

✓ In Canada there are so many parks. Each park has very beautiful scenery and convenient paths.

Existential 'there are' is required instead of 'it has' for presence. 'A very beautiful scenery' is uncountable so use 'very beautiful scenery' (no article). 'Road is very convenient' is awkward; 'paths' or 'walkways' is more natural and 'convenient' modifies them. Suggestion: Use 'there are' to state existence and choose correct nouns (uncountable vs countable) and plural forms.

× That's why so many people likes go for a walk in the park.

✓ That's why so many people like to go for a walk in the park.

Subject-verb agreement: 'people' is plural so the verb must be 'like' not 'likes'. Also 'like to go' or 'like going' is required ('like go' is incorrect). Suggestion: Match verb form to plural subject and use infinitive or gerund after 'like'.

× I would like to work for a long time, go to the my company.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk to my company.

The original sentence mixes ideas and uses wrong verb 'work' instead of 'walk' given the question. 'Go to the my company' has article error and awkward phrasing. Use conditional phrasing 'If I had the chance' echoed from the question and 'take a long walk to my company'. Suggestion: Keep response relevant to question and use correct articles ('my company' without 'the').

× I live in cocktail in Canada nearby my house.

✓ I live in Coquitlam in Canada, near my house.

Place name corrected presumably to 'Coquitlam' (a city in Canada). Use 'in Coquitlam' and 'near my house' rather than 'nearby my house'. Suggestion: Use correct place names and 'near' + noun for proximity.

× There is a lapage lake I sometimes I go for a walk with my family. Call Derrell Lapagl.

✓ There is a lake called Del Rey Lake where I sometimes go for a walk with my family.

Original has word order and naming errors. Use 'There is a lake called [name]' and remove extra 'I'. Replace unclear name 'lapage'/'Derrell Lapagl' with a more plausible form 'Del Rey Lake' if intended; if name unknown, use 'a lake called X'. Suggestion: Use clear relative clauses ('where I sometimes go') and correct punctuation; provide accurate local names.