Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, like) and finish the idea. Also keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I mainly walk when I go to university or when I go out, because my house is too small to walk around. Therefore, most of my daily walking happens outdoors or on campus.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then contrast past and present with clear linking words. Use accurate grammar for tense and avoid trailing off. Be specific about how often or why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. At that time the weather in Bangkok was generally pleasant, but these days air pollution like PM2.5 is much worse, so people are less likely to walk outside.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear reason, then add one or two specific supporting points. Use correct verbs and avoid invented or wrong words (e.g., 'scandal' is incorrect). Keep sentences natural and concise.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because it is relaxing and promotes health. Moreover, walking is accessible to almost everyone, so many see it as an easy way to start a healthier lifestyle.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give concise, specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'in the center of Bangkok', 'does not have much pollution'). Avoid filler sounds.

Ví dụ: I would take a long walk in a central park in Bangkok because the air there feels fresher and there is less traffic. Also, the open space and tree cover make it pleasant for a long stroll.

Gợi ý: Use past tense for a past activity and state the answer directly. Provide one or two clear reasons with correct grammar and fewer hesitations. Be specific about timing if possible.

Ví dụ: Recently I walked around the football fields at my university. I chose that place because it is the largest open area nearby and I enjoy watching other students exercising while I walk.

× I will say that I walk a lot but I will have like the space to walk when I go to the university or go outside my house.

✓ I would say that I walk a lot, but I only have space to walk when I go to university or go outside my house.

The original uses 'will' incorrectly to describe a habitual present action; use 'would say' for a polite statement and present simple for habitual actions. Also 'have like the space' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'only have space'. Use 'go to university' without 'the' in this context.

× My house is really not spacious so I don't have space to walk and the.

✓ My house is really not spacious, so I don't have space to walk at home.

The sentence ends with an unfinished phrase 'and the.' Remove the fragment and complete the thought. Add a prepositional phrase 'at home' for clarity and use a comma before 'so' to join clauses.

× I yes, because when I was young, the uh, weather in Bangkok is quite good, but right now they become quite have a lot of uh, PM 2.5 pollution with it, the pollution that can hurt our lung.

✓ Yes, because when I was young, the weather in Bangkok was quite good, but now there is a lot of PM 2.5 pollution that can hurt our lungs.

Talking about past conditions requires past tense 'was' not present 'is/quite'. 'Right now' requires present tense 'is' and the existential 'there is' to introduce 'a lot of pollution'. 'They become quite have a lot' is ungrammatical; replace with 'there is a lot'. Use plural 'lungs' and remove filler words.

× So I think it can.

✓ So I think it can harm our respiratory health.

The fragment 'it can' is incomplete. Specify the verb and object: 'can harm our respiratory health' clarifies what 'it' can do.

× I think it make people scandal themselves and that is a trend of healthy lifestyle.

✓ I think it makes people feel good about themselves, and it is a trend in a healthy lifestyle.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires 'makes' not 'make'. 'Scandal themselves' is incorrect collocation; use 'feel good about themselves'. Use 'a trend in a healthy lifestyle' for idiomatic phrasing.

× They think that The Walking is the activity that everyone can do.

✓ They think that walking is an activity that everyone can do.

Do not capitalize 'The' or 'Walking' in this context. Use 'walking' as a general noun and 'an activity' rather than 'the activity' for generalization.

× So it is a good beginning of anyone who want to be healthy and fit and firm and take care of their.

✓ So it is a good beginning for anyone who wants to be healthy, fit, and take care of themselves.

Use 'for' not 'of' after 'beginning'. Subject-verb agreement: 'anyone' requires 'wants'. Use 'themselves' as the reflexive pronoun for 'anyone'. Remove redundant adjective 'firm' unless intended; 'fit' suffices.

× It would be a park in the center of the Bangkok.

✓ It would be a park in the center of Bangkok.

Do not use 'the' before city names like 'Bangkok'. Use 'in the center of Bangkok' and remove extra article.

× That park is not contained much pollution because of uh, around there is quite the air, quite flow and uh, there is no cars uh, running by, so the pollution is fine.

✓ That park does not have much pollution because the air around it flows well and there are no cars nearby, so the pollution level is low.

'Is not contained much pollution' is ungrammatical; use 'does not have much pollution'. 'Around there is quite the air, quite flow' should be 'the air around it flows well'. Use plural 'cars' with 'there are' and 'nearby' rather than 'running by'. 'Pollution is fine' is vague; use 'pollution level is low'.

× It would be the, uh, football fields at my university because it is the most, uh, the biggest places that I can walk around the field.

✓ It was the football fields at my university because they were the biggest places where I could walk around the field.

Question asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' so use past tense: 'it was' and 'were' and 'could' for past ability. Use plural agreement 'they were the biggest places' and 'where' to introduce the clause.

× And uh, is also have to, I can see, uh, the activity of other people around that world and is.

✓ Also, I could see other people's activities around the field.

The original has missing subject and auxiliary verbs. Use past tense 'could' for past observation. 'Around that world' is incorrect; likely 'around the field'. Use possessive form 'other people's activities' and remove extraneous fillers.