Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp căn bản (thì động từ, danh động từ), phát âm và lựa chọn từ vựng phù hợp; trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi bổ sung 1-2 câu giải thích. Tránh lỗi như dùng 'didn't' khi muốn nói thói quen hiện tại, và dùng 'eels' thay cho 'vehicles'. Sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hợp lý và chỉnh ngữ thứ tự từ để câu rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: I don't walk much because I find it boring and tiring. Instead, I usually use motorbikes or cars because they are faster and more convenient for long distances.

Gợi ý: Sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho thói quen trong quá khứ và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng; tránh lặp từ và sửa trật tự từ. Thêm cụ thể về tần suất và hoạt động để làm câu đầy đủ, dùng liên từ như 'and' hoặc 'after' để nối ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child. I used to walk to school with my neighbours, and after classes we frequently went to the park to play sports like badminton and football.

Gợi ý: Làm rõ ý chính trước rồi bổ sung lý do cụ thể; tránh từ sai nghĩa ('plate','cheese') và loại bỏ tiếng ấp úng. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g. 'trees', 'fresh air', 'paths') và liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để kết nối ý.

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because there are trees, fresh air and safe paths for exercise. I also enjoy going to the park to play sports and relax with my friends.

Gợi ý: Trả lời giả thiết cần dùng cấu trúc câu điều kiện (second conditional) và nói rõ địa điểm; sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề 'If I had the chance...' rồi giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và kết thúc bằng kết quả/ý nghĩa.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal trail with my friends because the scenery would be relaxing and it would be good exercise for my health.

Gợi ý: Dùng thì hiện tại hoàn thành hoặc hiện tại đơn phù hợp, viết rõ thời gian gần đây với cụm từ như 'lately' hoặc 'recently'. Sửa lỗi động từ (go walking), tránh tên không rõ ('Tom'), và làm câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất và hoạt động trong công viên.

Ví dụ: Lately I have been going to the park with my family, usually after studying in the evenings. We walk together to relax and enjoy the fresh air.

× No, I didn't like walk because I think it's very boring and tired.

✓ No, I don't like walking because I think it's very boring and tiring.

The student mixed past and present tenses. Use present simple 'don't like' to match 'I think' and 'walking' as the gerund after 'like'. Also use adjective 'boring' for something that causes boredom and 'tiring' for something that causes tiredness.

× I prefer eels change spots such as motorbike and car because it's more fast and convenience.

✓ I prefer other ways of getting around, such as motorbikes and cars, because they are faster and more convenient.

Incorrect word choices and pronoun use: 'eels change spots' is meaningless. Use 'other ways of getting around'. Use plural nouns 'motorbikes and cars' and plural agreement 'they are faster and more convenient'.

× I can't go long.

✓ I can't walk for long distances.

The original is vague. Provide clear structure: 'walk for long distances' expresses inability to walk far.

× Yes, since my childhood, I also working with my neighborhood go to school.

✓ Yes. Since my childhood, I also walked with my neighbors to go to school.

Tense and verb form errors: 'working' is wrong; use past tense 'walked' to match 'since my childhood'. Use plural 'neighbors' and correct infinitive phrase 'to go to school'.

× Moreover, after studying time, we often walking go to the park to play sport, just at badminton in football to relax and win.

✓ Moreover, after studying, we often walked to the park to play sports, such as badminton and football, to relax and have fun.

Mix of forms: use past tense 'walked'. 'Play sport' should be 'play sports' and list examples correctly. 'Win' likely intended as 'have fun' or 'relax'—clarified as 'have fun'.

× In park, which is a plate, have many cheese and pitchful white uh, there is a natural environment, so many people prefer walking to do exercise in play sport.

✓ In the park, which is a pleasant place, there is a natural environment, so many people prefer walking or doing exercises and playing sports there.

Numerous word choice and preposition errors: add definite article 'the park', replace nonsense phrases with 'pleasant place', use 'there is' for existence, and correct verb forms 'walking or doing exercises and playing sports'. Use preposition 'there' for location.

× I also often go to park to play with my friend.

✓ I also often go to the park to play with my friends.

Add definite article 'the'. Use plural 'friends' if speaking generally; if singular, 'my friend' requires 'a' or 'the'. Use consistent preposition 'to the park'.

× I always didn't like working because it's very tired and bored, but if I had a change, I will try to walk a long walk with my friend.

✓ I usually don't like working because it is tiring and boring, but if I had the chance, I would try to take a long walk with my friend.

Tense and modal errors: use present simple 'don't like' and adjectives 'tiring'/'boring'. Conditional requires 'if I had the chance' with result 'I would try'. 'Take a long walk' is the natural phrase.

× This challenge with me to do exercise improve my health.

✓ This challenge would help me exercise and improve my health.

Original word order is incorrect. Use 'would help me' for conditional and parallel verbs 'exercise and improve'.

× Currently, I often go to the park to walking with my family, especially after studying Tom.

✓ Lately, I have often gone to the park to walk with my family, especially after studying.

Use present perfect 'have gone' for recent actions. Use 'walk' (base) after 'to'. Remove unclear name 'Tom' unless intended; if it's a person's name, clarify 'Tom'.

× I still spend a little time to working from my house to park to relax in and wind marvel.

✓ I still spend a little time walking from my house to the park to relax and unwind.

Use 'walking from my house to the park'. 'To working' is incorrect. Use verbs 'relax and unwind' for intended meaning. Remove unclear 'wind marvel'.