Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Focus on correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., "go for a walk", "near my house").

Ví dụ: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually go for a walk in the evenings because it helps me relax and keeps me fit. For example, I often walk to the National Park near my house, where I enjoy the fresh air and quiet paths.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use past tense accurately. Begin with a clear statement (e.g., "Yes, I often did") then give a specific example and a reason. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and avoid vague phrases like "I don't remember certainly."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often played outside as a child. For example, in winter I used to play football and volleyball with my friends, which was fun and kept us active because we spent hours running and socializing.

Gợi ý: Structure the answer: make a clear main idea then two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct collocations ("go for a walk", "fresh air", "listen to birds"). Keep it concise and avoid awkward phrasing like "helps to relax for you."

Ví dụ: People like walking in parks because the environment is peaceful and the air is fresh. Also, you can listen to birds and see wildlife, which makes walking relaxing and a good way to reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer to the hypothetical question ("I'd like to..."), then give one or two clear reasons using linking words. Correct grammar: "I am a big fan", "located near the capital city", "the environment is beautiful". Avoid repetitive fragments.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk in the National Park near my hometown. I enjoy going there with close friends because the scenery is beautiful and the trails are peaceful, which makes it perfect for a long walk.

Gợi ý: Answer the past question with a specific recent example. Use past simple tense ("I went"). Avoid unrelated self-descriptions and repetition. Provide one sentence about where you went and one short reason or detail. Remove fillers like "umm."

Ví dụ: I went for a walk in the National Park last evening. I try to go on time because I prefer not to keep my friends waiting, and we walked for about an hour along the riverside trail.

× I often go to outside for a walking, especially in the evening, because it helps, because it's useful for our body.

✓ I often go outside for a walk, especially in the evening, because it helps and is good for our body.

Use the preposition 'outside' without 'to' in this context; 'go outside' is correct. Use the noun 'a walk' instead of 'a walking'. Combine clauses with 'and' to avoid repetition. Also use 'is good for' rather than 'useful for' for natural phrasing.

× When I borrow it in my house, uh, after that I am, I go to the near my, uh, go to the National Park near my house.

✓ When I finish my work at home, I go to the National Park near my house.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and unclear verbs ('borrow it'). Replace with a clear subject and verb: 'finish my work at home'. Remove unnecessary filler words and correct word order: 'the National Park near my house.'

× Honestly, I don't remember certainly, but when I was a child go to the winter outside with my friends for playing football and volleyball with other children.

✓ Honestly, I don't remember for sure, but when I was a child I used to go outside in winter with my friends to play football and volleyball with other children.

Use 'used to' or the past tense to describe habitual past actions. Correct preposition: 'in winter'. Use the infinitive 'to play' rather than 'for playing'. Also replace 'certainly' with 'for sure' for natural speech.

× This activity very useful for us and interesting time for.

✓ These activities were very useful for us and gave us interesting times.

The sentence lacks a verb; add 'were' for past reference. Use plural 'activities' to match context. 'Interesting time for' is incomplete; replace with 'gave us interesting times' for clarity.

× Well, in my opinion many people go to the park for a walking because their environment is very good and you can breathe from fresh air.

✓ Well, in my opinion many people go to the park for a walk because the environment is very good and you can breathe fresh air.

Use 'for a walk' not 'for a walking'. Say 'the environment' not 'their environment' when referring to the park's surroundings. Use 'breathe fresh air' without 'from'.

× After that you can listen lovely sounds from the birds and you can see some animal.

✓ You can listen to the lovely sounds of birds and see some animals.

Use the verb phrase 'listen to' not 'listen'. Use 'the lovely sounds of birds' rather than 'from the birds'. Use plural 'animals' or 'an animal' depending on meaning; plural fits better. Also avoid 'after that' which is unnecessary.

× It helps to relax for you.

✓ It helps you relax.

Use the verb-object order 'helps you relax' instead of 'helps to relax for you'. The original places 'for you' incorrectly; remove it for natural phrasing.

× I am big fan of walking outside, especially with my close friends.

✓ I am a big fan of walking outside, especially with my close friends.

Missing article 'a' before 'big fan'. This is an article/preposition type error (article required).

× We often go to the National Park. It's located capital city, uh, in our country and there because there is very environment, beautiful and near my house and.

✓ We often go to the National Park. It's located near the capital city of our country, and the environment there is very beautiful and close to my house.

Correct word order and prepositions: 'located near the capital city' and 'of our country'. 'Environment' needs an adjective order: 'very beautiful environment' or 'the environment there is very beautiful'. Remove extra fillers and complete the sentence.

× I am responsible person so I never late for a walking because I don't like someone waiting me to walking.

✓ I am a responsible person so I am never late for a walk because I don't like making someone wait for me.

Add article 'a' with 'responsible person'. Use 'am never late' or 'never late' with correct verb. Use 'a walk' not 'a walking'. Use the gerund phrase 'making someone wait for me' rather than 'someone waiting me to walking'.

× I always try to go there for at this at the time.

✓ I always try to get there at the scheduled time.

The original has misplaced prepositions and redundant words. Use 'get there' or 'arrive' and 'at the scheduled time' for clarity. This fixes the awkward phrase and preposition errors.

× Umm so that's it.

✓ So that's it.

Remove filler 'Umm' for a cleaner sentence. The original is a spoken filler but for written correction simply 'So that's it.'