Walking— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并分成主题句和支持细节，避免重复（如“take subway”/“take bus”重复结构）并使用衔接词使句子更自然。可以把原因和具体情境分别表达，句子不要太长，控制在3–4句内。

Ví dụ: Not really. I usually take the subway or the bus because my campus and the city are quite spread out. I only walk short distances, for example from my dorm to my classroom. When I have free time I sometimes choose to walk for exercise.

Gợi ý: 注意时态一致和发音/书写错误（如“take took”、“will take take”），并尽量给出具体细节如路线或感受，使用连接词如“and”、“also”、“so”。控制在3句内，避免结尾残句。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I used to walk to school every morning, which took me about 30 minutes each way. In the evenings my parents and I would take long walks around the nearby park, which felt relaxing and helped us talk about our day.

Gợi ý: 内容要更准确、用词要恰当（如“seedways”“fried share”不合适），并提供具体原因和连接词。可以给出两到三个清晰理由并用例子支撑。句子不要冗长或重复。

Ví dụ: People enjoy walking in parks because the scenery is pleasant, with leafy trees and colorful flowers. Parks also offer fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere that reduces stress. In addition, many people like to take photos there to keep happy memories.

Gợi ý: 简明地表明偏好并用恰当时态说明地点和原因，避免混用时态和重复表达（如“that took an hour, an hour”）。使用连贯表达说明具体活动或感受。

Ví dụ: I would choose a national park on the outskirts of my city, about an hour from the center. The park has beautiful scenery—forests and wildflowers—so I could relax and escape city noise. I would probably walk along the trails and sit by a lake to unwind.

Gợi ý: 避免无关或混乱的开头（如“He wants to be here”），注意时态一致与语法（如“we go”应为“we went”），并具体说明时间、地点和活动。用2–3句清晰描述经历和感受。

Ví dụ: Recently I went to the small park near my home. After dinner my parents and I went for a long walk and played badminton together. The exercise and fresh air helped me relax.

× To be honest I don't walk a lot and I prefer to take subway or take bus to go outside and in the universities I only take short walk when I walk from dorm to the classroom.

✓ To be honest, I don't walk a lot and I prefer to take the subway or the bus to go out, and at university I only take short walks when I walk from the dorm to the classroom.

句子中存在时态和名词单复数、冠词及介词使用问题。需使用現在時描述習慣（I don't walk / I prefer），並將“subway”與“bus”前加定冠詞“the”；“go outside”更自然為“go out”；“in the universities”應為“at university”或“at the university”；“take short walk”應為複數“take short walks”；“dorm”前加定冠詞“the”。建議注意英語中表習慣用現在時、以及定冠詞與名詞單複數的一致。

× Definitely yes. When I was a kid I always walked to school every morning and that take took me about 30 minutes walk and also I will take take a long walk just around the park with my parents after dinner and.

✓ Definitely yes. When I was a kid I always walked to school every morning and that took me about a 30-minute walk. I also used to take long walks around the park with my parents after dinner.

此句涉及過去時用法和冗餘重複詞。描述過去習慣應用過去時（walked, took, used to take）。“that take took”是重複錯誤，應為“that took me about a 30-minute walk”或更自然的表達“that took me about 30 minutes”。“I will take take”在描述過去習慣應改為“I used to take”或“I also took”。建議注意過去時態一致和刪除重複詞。

× Because they are full of beautiful seedways like leafy trees or dynamic flowers and people also can enjoy the fried share and that will make them relax.

✓ Because they are full of beautiful pathways with leafy trees and colorful flowers, and people can also enjoy the fresh air, which helps them relax.

原句有詞彙錯誤與形容詞使用不當：“seedways”應為“pathways”或“sidewalks”；“dynamic flowers”不自然，改為“colorful flowers”；“fried share”顯然是拼寫/詞彙錯誤，應為“fresh air”；“that will make them relax”用法不自然，改為“which helps them relax”。建議學習常用名詞搭配（pathways/trees/flowers）及固定短語（fresh air, helps relax）。

× And second, they can also take some snaps and that's really good memories for for them.

✓ Secondly, they can also take some photos, and that's really good memories for them.

原句有重複詞“for for”以及非正式用法“snaps”（可接受但考試語境下用“photos”更正式）。“And second”改為“Secondly”或“In addition”更符合連接詞用法。建議避免重複，選用更正式詞彙。

× I may choose the natural park on the outskirts of my city and that took an hour, an hour from the city center and that's National Park has beautiful sceneries like leafy trees, dynamic flowers and I can enjoy myself there.

✓ I would choose a natural park on the outskirts of my city; it takes about an hour from the city center. That national park has beautiful scenery like leafy trees and colorful flowers, and I can enjoy myself there.

此句時態與動詞形式不一致。問題句混用“may choose”與過去式“took”，應根據假設語氣改為“would choose”或保持現在時“I may choose... it takes about an hour”。“sceneries”用法不當，應為不可數名詞“scenery”。“dynamic flowers”改為“colorful flowers”。建議注意假設句中情態動詞與時態一致，以及不可數名詞的正確使用。

× He wants to be here, but I went to the park just nearby my home and after dinner I, with my parents go there for a long walk and we play some tight exercise like playing badminton and that really make me calm down.

✓ He wanted to be here, but I went to the park near my home. After dinner, my parents and I went there for a long walk, and we did some light exercise like playing badminton, which really helped me calm down.

句中時態混亂與詞彙錯誤。原句有現在時“go/play/make”與過去時“went”混用，描述過去經歷應全部使用過去時（wanted, went, went, did, helped）。“just nearby my home”應為“near my home”；“I, with my parents”語序不自然，改為“my parents and I”；“tight exercise”拼寫/用詞錯誤，應為“light exercise”；“that really make me calm down”主謂不一致且時態錯誤，改為“which really helped me calm down”。建議保持時態一致並使用常見搭配（light exercise, my parents and I）。