Keys— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, remove hesitations and redundancy, and add one specific detail about why you carry keys. Use one linking phrase if needed.

Ví dụ: I usually carry a small key chain because I need keys for my house and bicycle. For example, I keep a key for my front door and a bike lock on the same ring, so I never have to search for them.

Gợi ý: Avoid unclear idioms and long confusing sentences. Give a direct answer first, then one clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: No, I have never lost my keys. I always double-check my bag before leaving because losing them makes me anxious, so I keep an extra key at home in case of emergency.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repetition. Answer directly then give one or two specific habits that prevent locking out. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often forget my keys. To avoid that, I keep an extra key with a family member and always hang my keys on a hook by the door, so I can grab them before I leave.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar. Start with a direct statement, then give two clear conditions (when it's ok and when it's not). Avoid unrelated phrases (e.g., 'leave our kids'). Use linking words like 'if' and 'however'.

Ví dụ: It can be a good idea if you trust your neighbour. If you have a strong relationship and can rely on them in emergencies, leaving a spare key is convenient; however, you should not do this if you do not know the neighbour well or you have doubts about their reliability.

× I have a small key chain and I carry, uh, it, uh, with me because I always need them.

✓ I have a small key chain and I carry it with me because I always need it.

The sentence uses mismatched pronouns: 'it' refers to 'key chain' (singular), but 'them' (plural) is used later. Use a singular pronoun 'it' to match the singular noun 'key chain'. Remove filler hesitations for clarity. Suggestion: identify the noun's number and use the matching pronoun.'

× Although I have a memory like a thief, I never locked myself out because I get unnecessary stress, so I always check before I go out. I prefer to have a extra keychain with me.

✓ Although I have a memory like a sieve, I have never locked myself out because I get unnecessary stress, so I always check before I go out. I prefer to have an extra key chain with me.

Mixed tenses and incorrect article: 'never locked' (simple past) conflicts with present relevance; use present perfect 'have never locked' for experiences up to now. 'Memory like a thief' is an odd metaphor; 'memory like a sieve' is common if meaning forgetfulness. Also 'a extra' should be 'an extra' because 'extra' begins with a vowel sound. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences and correct the article before vowel sounds.'

× I never locked myself out because I get unnecessary stress, I may get panic so I always carry extra keychain with me and also I sometimes give this keychain to my loved ones because I don't like to. To locked myself out.

✓ I have never locked myself out because I get unnecessary stress and may panic, so I always carry an extra key chain with me. I also sometimes give this key chain to my loved ones because I don't want to lock myself out.

Use present perfect 'have never locked' for past actions relevant now. 'May get panic' is incorrect; use 'may panic'. Article 'an extra' is needed before vowel sound 'extra'. Broken sentence 'I don't like to. To locked myself out.' should be corrected to 'I don't want to lock myself out.' Also ensure verb form 'lock' not 'locked'. Suggestion: combine clauses with conjunctions and use correct verb forms.'

× It's really depends on our communication and relationship.

✓ It really depends on our communication and relationship.

The dummy subject 'it' with verb should be 'depends' (third person singular). 'It's depends' is ungrammatical because 'is' and 'depends' both act as verbs; remove 'is' contraction. Suggestion: use either 'It really depends' or 'This really depends'.

× When we are close to each other and we have a strong bond and we can rely on them, it's a better method because we sometimes have a emergency cases.

✓ When we are close to each other and have a strong bond and can rely on one another, it is a better option because sometimes we have emergency situations.

Pronoun 'them' is unclear when subject is 'we'; use 'one another' or 'each other'. 'A emergency cases' has article and number errors: use plural 'emergency situations' or singular 'an emergency situation'. 'Method' is odd here; 'option' fits better. Suggestion: match pronouns to subjects and ensure correct article-number agreement.'

× So it's wisely unreasonable if we don't know about the personality traits and their behavior is not really reasonable for us to. Leave our kids with our neighbors.

✓ So it would be unwise if we don't know their personality traits or if their behavior seems unreliable; we should not leave our kids with such neighbors.

'Wisely unreasonable' is a contradictory and awkward phrase; use 'would be unwise'. Sentence fragments and incorrect punctuation split 'to. Leave' incorrectly. 'Not really reasonable for us to' is awkward; rephrase to clear modal meaning. Suggestion: use concise adjectives ('unwise', 'unreliable') and complete sentence structure.