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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?

Thí sinh

No, I don't because I have just one key to blink. That is my home key, so I always bring just one key.

Giám khảo

Have you ever lost your keys?

Thí sinh

Yes I have, but I have a lot of keys of my home so. I can.

Giám khảo

Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?

Thí sinh

No I don't because I always break my key by myself and I have never forget to bring my keys before.

Giám khảo

Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?

Thí sinh

I don't think so because my neighbors are kind of strangers and I think in my opinion that is not good. I dare to leave your keys with the neighbor.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的ですが、不自然な表現("one key to blink")と冗長さがあります。回答はシンプルに保ち、トピック文の後に短い補足を入れると良いです。例えば「I usually carry only my house key」など、自然な語句と理由をつけてください。また文は最大5文に留め、つなぎ言葉(because, so)を適切に使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually carry only my house key. I don't need more keys because all my other locks are digital or rarely used, so one key is enough.

Have you ever lost your keys?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 意味が不明瞭で一貫性が欠けています("I have a lot of keys of my home so. I can.")。まず直接に答え(Yes/No)を述べ、いつどのように失くしたか、結果や対策を具体的に説明してください。接続詞で文をつなぎ、詳細は具体的に示しましょう(例: lost them once at a café, had to call a locksmith)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Once I lost my keys at a café last year, and I had to call a locksmith to get back into my flat, so now I keep a spare with a relative.

Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 文が論理的でなく矛盾("I always break my key by myself" vs not forgetting)や文法ミスがあります。まず簡潔に答え、その後理由や習慣を明確に述べてください。過去形/現在完了の使い分けや主語一致に注意し、不要な情報は避けましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I don't often forget my keys. I always put them on a hook near the door, so I can check them quickly before leaving.

Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 意見は示されていますが、表現が冗長で混乱しています("I think in my opinion"や"I dare to leave your keys")。まず明確に意見を述べ、理由を一つか二つの具体例で支えてください(信頼性や安全性など)。丁寧な表現を使い、発言は自分に関するものにしてください。

Ví dụ: I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour unless you know them well. It could be risky, so I prefer giving a spare to a close friend or using a lockbox instead.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the past participle form

× No, I don't because I have just one key to blink.

No, I don't because I only have one key to lock/unlock.

The phrase 'to blink' is incorrect; likely intended meaning is 'to lock' or 'to unlock'. Also 'have just one' is natural but 'only have one' is clearer. Use correct verb 'lock'/'unlock' instead of 'blink'. Suggestion: Use 'only have one key' and the verb 'lock' or 'unlock' to express purpose.

Singular and plural issue

× That is my home key, so I always bring just one key.

That is my house key, so I always bring just one key.

'Home key' is understandable but 'house key' is more natural English. No plural issue in meaning; change improves register. Suggestion: Prefer 'house key' or 'house keys' depending on number; keep singular 'one key'.

Article errors

× Yes I have, but I have a lot of keys of my home so. I can.

Yes, I have, but I have a lot of keys for my home, so I can.

Awkward phrasing 'keys of my home' should be 'keys for my home'. Missing comma after 'Yes'. The fragment 'so. I can.' should be combined into 'so I can'. Suggestion: Use 'keys for my home' and combine clauses into one sentence.

Past tense issue

× No I don't because I always break my key by myself and I have never forget to bring my keys before.

No, I don't because I always make a spare key myself and I have never forgotten to bring my keys before.

'Always break my key by myself' is incorrect meaning; likely 'make a spare key' or 'make a copy' is intended. 'Have never forget' is wrong: after 'have' use past participle 'forgotten'. Also punctuation: comma after 'No'. Suggestion: Use 'make a spare key' and 'have never forgotten' for present perfect.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I don't think so because my neighbors are kind of strangers and I think in my opinion that is not good. I dare to leave your keys with the neighbor.

I don't think so because my neighbors are mostly strangers, and in my opinion that is not a good idea. I wouldn't dare to leave my keys with a neighbor.

Redundant 'I think in my opinion' should be simplified. 'Kind of strangers' is informal; 'mostly strangers' is clearer. 'I dare to leave your keys' uses wrong pronoun and modal; should be 'I wouldn't dare to leave my keys' to express reluctance. Suggestion: Use 'in my opinion', avoid redundancy, use 'wouldn't dare' and correct possessive pronoun 'my' rather than 'your'.

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