Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?
Thí sinh
No, I don't always bring a lot of kids with myself because I think one key is enough to open the door I need.
Giám khảo
Have you ever lost your keys?
Thí sinh
Yes, because I'm not a very tidy person, so sometimes I lose my kids somewhere and I didn't find it.
Giám khảo
Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?
Thí sinh
No, I don't often forget the kids and knock myself out because my kids are always in my pocket and I usually. Put the keys from it.
Giám khảo
Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?
Thí sinh
I think that depends on the relationship with neighbor. If I am familiar with them, I think it's a good idea.
Do you always bring a lot of keys with you?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 用词和语法要准确,注意把 "kids"(孩子)改为 "keys"(钥匙),并保持句子简洁自然。回答开头应直接回应问题,然后提供一到两句支持细节即可,避免不必要重复。可以用连接词(例如 because, so)来衔接原因。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry many keys. I only bring the one I need because it opens my flat and I prefer to travel light.
Have you ever lost your keys?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意用词和时态:把“kids”改为“keys”,并用过去时或现在完成时更自然。先直接回答(Yes),然后给出具体情境和结果,使用连接词(for example, once, so)增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, once I left my keys on a café table and didn't notice until I got home, so I had to go back and ask the staff if they had found them.
Do you often forget the keys and lock yourself out?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 修正词汇和表达错误(kids→keys,knock myself out→lock myself out)。保持句子完整,避免断句,说明习惯或方法(例如把钥匙放在哪儿)来解释为什么不常忘记。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often lock myself out because I always keep my keys in my front pocket and check for them before leaving the house.
Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答结构良好但可更具体。先给出总体观点,然后说明具体条件或例子来支持你的看法,使用连接词(however, if, because)使论述更连贯。
Ví dụ: It depends on how well you know the neighbour. If I trust them and we help each other, I would leave a spare key with them because it's convenient in an emergency.
× No, I don't always bring a lot of kids with myself because I think one key is enough to open the door I need.
✓ No, I don't always bring a lot of keys with me because I think one key is enough to open the door I need.
原句将“keys”(钥匙)误写为“kids”(孩子),且使用了不自然的短语“with myself”。应使用“keys”并用宾格短语“with me”。建议:注意拼写和常用搭配,‘with me’用于表示随身携带。
× Yes, because I'm not a very tidy person, so sometimes I lose my kids somewhere and I didn't find it.
✓ Yes, because I'm not a very tidy person, so sometimes I lose my keys somewhere and I don't find them.
原句中同样将“keys”写成“kids”,并且代词搭配错误:钥匙为复数,用‘them’指代;时态应保持一般现在(习惯动作),因此用“don't find”。建议:复数名词用复数代词,描述习惯动作用一般现在时。
× No, I don't often forget the kids and knock myself out because my kids are always in my pocket and I usually. Put the keys from it.
✓ No, I don't often forget the keys and lock myself out because my keys are always in my pocket and I usually put them there.
原句多个问题:再次把“keys”误作“kids”;短语“knock myself out”意思不对,正确为“lock myself out”(把自己锁在外面);句子被错误断句并且代词和介词使用不当,应为“put them there”。建议:使用固定搭配‘l ock myself out’,保持句子连贯,代词与先行词数一致。
× I think that depends on the relationship with neighbor. If I am familiar with them, I think it's a good idea.
✓ I think that depends on the relationship with a neighbour. If I am familiar with them, I think it's a good idea.
原句缺少冠词和拼写美式/英式差异:应为“a neighbour”(与邻居的关系)或“the neighbour”视语境而定。另外“neighbor”拼写为美式,题目用英式“neighbour”也可接受。建议:在可数名词前使用适当冠词,注意英美拼写一致性。