Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
It's too many. But my favorite food is tomato.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young, I like eating chops, Cakes and. Candy, of course. I like milk and some snacks.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, you know, when I got Gro. I chose different foods. Which depends on. My thought.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法错误。首先应直接用一到两句表明喜好,例如“My favourite food is tomatoes.” 其次避免模糊表达(“It's too many” 不合适);可以补充一两条具体原因或描述(口味、做法或场合),并控制在最多五句。建议练习主谓一致和复数形式,以及使用连接词如“because”或“because of”。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is tomatoes because they are fresh and juicy. I especially like them in salads or as part of a pasta sauce, since they add a bright, tangy flavour.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 时态和句子连贯性有问题,应使用过去时(liked)并注意列表的准确性与一致性。避免句子断裂(“and.”),用连接词组织细节,例如用‘for example’或‘such as’给出具体食物,并简短说明原因或记忆。控制句子数量和长度,最多五句。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked eating chops, cakes and candy. For example, I often had sweet cakes and colourful candies as treats after school, and I always drank milk with them.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语法严重错误,难以理解。需要清晰表达季节性饮食变化,使用完整句子并给出具体例子与原因,例如提到夏天吃清凉食物、冬天喝热汤,并用连接词(because, so, therefore)解释原因。避免口头语如“you know”,并改正拼写错误(例如可能想说‘grow’或‘got older’)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods in different seasons. For example, in summer I prefer salads and cold fruits to stay cool, while in winter I often eat hot soups and stews because they keep me warm.
× It's too many.
✓ There are too many.
句子中使用了代词"It"与后面的复数名词不一致。"too many"后通常接复数名词或用作复合表述时需使用复数谓语,正确的存在结构是"There are too many ..."。建议:根据名词的单复数选择主语或使用"there is/there are"结构。例如:"There are too many to choose from."(有太多了,无法选择)。
× But my favorite food is tomato.
✓ But my favorite food is tomatoes.
"tomato"在此表示一种食物类别,应使用复数形式或不定冠词+可数名词单数。原句把类别当单一可数名词使用,需改为复数"tomatoes"或改为泛指结构"a tomato"(表示单个番茄)。建议:谈论喜欢的食物类别时多用复数或不可数表达。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? — When I was young, I like eating chops, Cakes and.
✓ When I was young, I liked eating chops, cakes and candy.
句子开头使用了过去时态问句("did you like"、"were young"),回答应保持过去时一致。原句用了现在时"like",应改为过去时"liked"。另外首字母应小写且不需句中多余大写。建议:叙述过去习惯或偏好时,用过去时(liked/used to)。
× When I was young, I like eating chops, Cakes and. Candy, of course.
✓ When I was young, I liked eating chops, cakes and candy, of course.
原句在标点和大小写上不连贯,句子被错误断开("and."之后又开始"Candy")。应将并列项连成一完整列表,并保持小写一致。建议:列举多个项时用逗号分隔,最后可加"and"连接,并保持一致的大小写和时态。
× I like milk and some snacks.
✓ I liked milk and some snacks.
同样与上下文的过去时不一致。此句原本用于描述过去喜好,应使用过去时"liked"。此外"some snacks"用法正确。建议:保持时态一致性,描述过去偏好用过去时。
× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? — Yes, you know, when I got Gro. I chose different foods. Which depends on. My thought.
✓ Yes, you know, when I grow, I choose different foods, which depends on my preferences.
原句存在时态与表达不当:"when I got Gro"不合语法,可能想说"when I grow"或"when I grow up";另外句子断裂("Which depends on. My thought.")应合并为定语从句并使用名词短语"my preferences"或"my thoughts"更自然。若回答指现在随季节变化,时态应为一般现在时(grow/choose);若指过去则用过去时。建议:根据意图选择正确短语("when I grow up"或"when I was growing up"),并用完整从句:"which depends on my preferences/what I feel."
× I chose different foods. Which depends on. My thought.
✓ I choose different foods, which depends on my mood.
短句"Which depends on. My thought."中断且搭配不当。通常表达原因用从句并接在主句后,且常用搭配为"depends on my mood/preferences"而不是"my thought"。另外如果描述现在习惯应使用一般现在时"choose"而非过去时"chose"。建议:合并为"..., which depends on my mood."并使用一致时态。