Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g. "vinegared rice" not "rice difference"), avoid unnecessary filler and keep to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about why you like it (taste, texture, or a favourite type) and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I really like sushi because of its delicate flavours and variety. For example, I enjoy salmon nigiri for its buttery texture and the lightly vinegared rice that balances the fish. Also, I like that sushi is often beautifully presented, which makes eating it a special experience.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitations and incorrect word choices. Give a direct topic sentence, then a short reason and a specific example. Replace vague or odd words like "creepy" with appropriate adjectives (e.g. "crispy"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect cause and effect.

Ví dụ: When I was young I loved fried chicken because my mother often bought it as a treat. The skin was very crispy and the meat was juicy, so it felt like a special comfort food. As a result, I used to ask for it on birthdays and family outings.

Gợi ý: Be more specific and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples of seasonal or occasion-based foods and explain briefly why. Use linking words (for example, "however", "for instance") and avoid awkward phrases like "eat at a dishes."

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In winter I prefer warming soups and stews because they keep me warm, while in summer I eat lighter meals like salads and cold noodles. For special occasions such as birthdays, we often order pizza or fried chicken because it's easy to share with family.

× It's a traditional Japanese dish that consists of rice difference, kind of seafood and salads as well.

✓ It's a traditional Japanese dish that consists of rice, various kinds of seafood, and salad as well.

The phrase 'rice difference' is incorrect and likely intended to mean 'different types of rice' or simply 'rice'. 'Kind of seafood' is awkward; use 'various kinds of seafood' or 'different kinds of seafood'. Also 'salads' is unneeded plural when referring generally; 'salad' is more natural. Use commas to separate list items. Suggestion: say 'rice, various kinds of seafood, and salad.'

× When I was young I was obsessed with fried chicken because my mom often bought it as a treat for me, and I also love it because of its texture.

✓ When I was young I was obsessed with fried chicken because my mom often bought it as a treat for me, and I also loved it because of its texture.

The sentence mixes past ('When I was young', 'was obsessed') with present 'I also love'. Maintain consistent past tense when referring to childhood: change 'love' to 'loved'. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same time frame for clarity.

× It's, uh, very creepy and delicious as well.

✓ It's, uh, very crispy and delicious as well.

The word 'creepy' is incorrect when describing food texture; the intended adjective is likely 'crispy'. 'Crispy' describes a pleasant crunchy texture for fried food. Suggestion: use appropriate sensory adjectives for food (crispy, crunchy, tender).

× On normal day I usually eat home cooked meals that my mom cooks for me, but on special occasions I usually eat at a dishes such as pizza or fried chicken.

✓ On normal days I usually eat home-cooked meals that my mom cooks for me, but on special occasions I usually eat dishes such as pizza or fried chicken.

Several issues: 'On normal day' should be plural 'On normal days' to indicate regular occasions (singular/plural mismatch). 'Home cooked' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective 'home-cooked'. The phrase 'eat at a dishes' is ungrammatical: remove 'at a' and use 'eat dishes such as...' or 'eat foods such as...'. Also 'pizza' and 'fried chicken' are fine as examples. Suggestion: correct plurality and remove incorrect articles.