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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

My favorite food is western steak. I always like it cooked in medium rare. I just like the tender texture.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

When I was young, I really like lollies and candies, like chocolates. I know it's bad for teeth, but I really like those.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think in China we have different traditions and customs about food in different times of the year. For example, in UH, during Spring Festival, we need to make and eat dumplings for reunion dinner.

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Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰,但可更自然和具体。注意时态和搭配(例如说“I prefer steak cooked medium-rare”或“I like it medium-rare”),避免重复(不要两次表达相同原因)。可以补充少量细节如口味、烹饪方式或场合来丰富内容,并使用连接词让句子更连贯。保持答案在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: I prefer Western-style steak, especially cooked medium-rare because it stays tender and juicy. I also enjoy a simple seasoning of salt and pepper, and sometimes a bit of garlic butter for extra flavor. I usually order it at a nice restaurant for special occasions.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 内容直接但语法和时态需要调整(用过去时)。避免口语重复,增加一两个具体例子或场景(例如最喜欢的糖果或节日吃糖果的记忆),并用连接词(for example, because)使表达更有条理。控制句数,不超过5句。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved sweets, especially chocolate bars and gummy candies. For example, I remember saving pocket money to buy a particular chocolate every weekend. I knew it wasn't healthy and sometimes got cavities, but I couldn't resist the taste.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答有用但有两个问题:一是句子中有拼写/词语错误(“UH”应明确或删除),二是可更具体说明其他季节性饮食差异并用连词连接例子。建议先给主题句,再用1–2个具体例子(如中秋节吃月饼、端午节吃粽子),并说明原因或习俗意义。

Ví dụ: Yes, we definitely eat different foods at different times of the year in China. For example, during the Spring Festival families make and eat dumplings together as a symbol of reunion, while at the Dragon Boat Festival people eat zongzi, which are sticky rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves. These foods are linked to specific traditions and family gatherings.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× My favorite food is western steak.

My favorite food is Western steak.

“western” 在此用作來源或類別的專有形容詞,應該大寫為 Western(專有形容詞首字母大寫)。這屬於形容詞使用的格式問題,建議記住國家、地區或文化相關的形容詞需大寫。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I always like it cooked in medium rare.

I always like it cooked medium rare.

短語“cooked medium rare”更常見且自然,不需要介詞“in”。使用多餘的介詞屬於冠詞/介詞使用類型錯誤,建議學習常用搭配(collocations),例如“cooked medium rare”,“rare”,“well done”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I just like the tender texture.

I just like its tender texture.

句中指代前文的牛排,應使用所有格代詞“its”來修飾“tender texture”。這是形容詞/代詞搭配問題,建議注意當名詞已被明確指代時用所有格來表示所屬關係。

Present tense issue

× When I was young, I really like lollies and candies, like chocolates.

When I was young, I really liked lollies and candies, like chocolates.

主句時間是過去(When I was young),從句動詞也應使用過去時。原句使用現在時“like”與時間不一致,屬於時態錯誤。建議注意時間狀語與動詞時態一致:過去時間用過去式。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I know it's bad for teeth, but I really like those.

I know it's bad for my teeth, but I really liked them.

1) “teeth” 前通常需要所有格限定,應為“my teeth”。2) 前句講述的是過去喜好(When I was young),因此“like”應改為過去式“liked”;同時代詞“those”指代糖果,換成“them”更自然。這兩項分別屬於冠詞/所有格使用和代詞使用錯誤。建議注意所有格和代詞的一致性及時態一致。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think in China we have different traditions and customs about food in different times of the year.

Yes, I think in China we have different traditions and customs about food at different times of the year.

表示“一年中不同時候”應使用介詞“at”而不是“in”。使用錯誤介詞會影響語意和搭配,自然表達是“at different times of the year”。建議記憶固定搭配,如“at that time/at different times”。

Sentence structure errors

× For example, in UH, during Spring Festival, we need to make and eat dumplings for reunion dinner.

For example, in China, during the Spring Festival, we make and eat dumplings for the reunion dinner.

1) 原句中的“in UH” 不明確且可能是筆誤,假設應為“in China”。2) 動詞“need to make and eat” 表達上不太自然,習慣用一般現在時描述習俗(we make and eat dumplings)。3) 冠詞使用:通常說“the Spring Festival”和“the reunion dinner”。這些屬於句子結構與冠詞使用錯誤。建議:描述習俗時用一般現在時,注意冠詞和地點名詞的準確性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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