Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
I like garlic steak.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
I like eat delicious grapes candy.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Every season has new food.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短且有语法瑕疵(例如冠词、形容词搭配)。应给出主题句并用一两句具体细节支持,比如为什么喜欢、何时吃或口感。注意使用冠词和更自然的搭配。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is garlic steak. I love it because the garlic adds a rich, savory flavour and the meat is usually tender and juicy. I often order it at a steakhouse when I want a special meal.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 时态和语法错误明显(应使用过去时),句子结构混乱,词汇搭配不自然。应先用一短句回答,再用一两句说明原因或回忆细节,并使用正确时态。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved grape-flavoured candy. I remember buying it after school because it had a sweet, tangy taste and bright purple colour that made it fun to eat.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且泛泛而谈。应先直接回答(是/否),然后用具体例子说明不同季节的食物差异,并用连接词使表达连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I enjoy fresh fruits like watermelon and berries, while in winter I prefer warm dishes such as stews and root vegetables.
× I like garlic steak.
✓ I like garlic steak.
句子本身语法和用词基本正确。若希望更自然,可用形容词修饰(例如 "garlic-flavored steak" 或 "garlic steak" 已可接受)。此处无需更改。
× I like eat delicious grapes candy.
✓ I liked to eat delicious grape candy.
原句时态不一致且动词形式错误。问题有两点:1) 询问的是过去常做的事,应使用过去时,因此将 like 改为 liked;2) 动词 like 后接动词时须使用不定式(to eat)或动名词(eating),但在表示习惯性喜好常用 liked to eat 或 liked eating;3) 单词复数/名词搭配错误:grapes candy 不自然,应改为 grape candy(或 grape-flavored candy)表示葡萄味的糖。建议:使用过去时 liked,动词不定式或动名词,并修正名词短语为 grape candy。
× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
该句为一般现在时,结构正确(疑问句用助动词 do)。无需修改。
× Every season has new food.
✓ Every season has new foods.
原句中 "food" 可接受但在描述种类时用复数更自然,故将其改为复数 foods。根据一般现在时描述常态,时态正确。建议:若指“每个季节都有新鲜的食物/菜肴”,也可改为 "Every season has new dishes."