Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えをもっと自然で端的にし、明確なトピック文と具体的な理由を加えてください。また、文法と語順を整え、不要な重複を避けましょう。例："My favourite food is Japanese food" と言った後で、なぜ好きか（味、思い出、頻度）を1〜2文で説明します。

Ví dụ: My favourite food is Japanese cuisine, especially sushi and ramen. I often eat ramen because its warm broth and rich flavors are comforting, and sushi appeals to me for its fresh taste and variety.

Gợi ý: 過去と現在を比較する形で、文法を正しく使って答えを整理してください。"didn't change" を使うなら過去形と現在形を明確に分け、具体的な例や理由を付け加えると良いです。語彙の選択（"lemon" は料理か好物の文脈で説明が必要）にも注意してください。

Ví dụ: My tastes haven't changed much since I was young; I still enjoy sushi. I also liked citrus flavors like lemon, especially in desserts and dressings, which is why I still choose them sometimes.

Gợi ý: 季節ごとの違いを明確に述べ、文法（主語と動詞の一致、不要な語の除去）を直してください。リンク語（"in winter" → "during winter" や "in the winter"）を使い、具体例を1〜2つ挙げると説得力が上がります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In the winter I often eat ramen and other warm dishes to stay warm. In the summer I prefer lighter meals like salads or cold noodles.

Gợi ý: 簡潔で良いですが、理由や短い補足を加えると評価が上がります。なぜ変わらないのか、具体的な理由（思い出、家族の影響、味の好みなど）を1文で付け加えてください。

Ví dụ: No, it hasn't changed because I grew up eating Japanese food with my family, and I still enjoy the same flavors and dishes.

× My favorite food is Japanese food. I like sushi or ramen as I often eat ramen.

✓ My favorite food is Japanese. I like sushi and ramen, and I often eat ramen.

'Japanese food' is acceptable but 'Japanese' as an adjective noun is more natural here. Use 'and' instead of 'or' to list items you like. Also connect the clauses with 'and' to show the relationship: 'I like sushi and ramen, and I often eat ramen.' This improves clarity and corrects awkward coordination.

× Actually I didn't change my liking so I like.

✓ Actually my tastes haven't changed, so I still like them.

Original sentence mixes past negative 'didn't change' with present 'I like' and ends abruptly. Use present perfect 'haven't changed' to show a state continuing to now. Use 'tastes' or 'preferences' instead of 'liking', and 'still like them' to refer back to foods.

× I still like sushi or lemon.

✓ I still like sushi and ramen.

The student likely meant 'ramen' not 'lemon'. Also use 'and' to list foods the student still likes. Ensure pronoun or noun references are consistent; here replacing the incorrect noun corrects meaning.

× Yes, I do. When I I'm in winter I often eats ramen or warm food.

✓ Yes, I do. In winter I often eat ramen or other warm foods.

Remove redundant words 'When I I'm'. Use time expression 'In winter' at the start. Use base form 'eat' (not 'eats') to agree with subject 'I'. Use 'other warm foods' to be natural and plural.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, it hasn't.

The question is 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?' The correct short negative answer uses 'it' as the subject referring to 'your favourite food': 'No, it hasn't.' Using 'I haven't' incorrectly implies the student themself hasn't changed. Use 'it hasn't' to match the question's subject.