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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

It is better to consume healthy foods, so I prefer healthy foods to consume. One of the healthy foods which I like to consume is food. Since it is a steamed food, it is safe to consume and hygienic. No conservatives.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

When I was young I preferred to consume some sugar sugary food items. Umm, I I think most child would like sugary food items. It is.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

No, uh, I mostly eat anything which is available in front of me and my uh, taste preferences. It heavily depends on my taste preferences. Uh, I would eat anything at any time.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. In my childhood days I preferred sugary drinks and dishes, but now what I like the most is spicy foods like biryani and noodles.

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Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Be specific and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the favourite food, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and vague phrases (e.g. "food", "no conservatives"). Use correct vocabulary like "preservatives."

Ví dụ: My favourite food is steamed fish. I prefer it because it is healthy and easy to digest; moreover, steaming preserves nutrients better than frying. For these reasons, I eat it regularly when I want a light, hygienic meal.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 44.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer naming specific childhood favourites, then add a brief reason or comparison using linking words. Avoid filler words and correct grammar (e.g. "sugary foods", "children").

Ví dụ: When I was young I loved sugary snacks, especially candy and chocolate. Because children often prefer sweet tastes, I used to choose sweets over savory snacks after school.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Respond directly and briefly, then explain with one clear example. Use linking words like "however" or "for example" and avoid hesitations and repetition.

Ví dụ: Not really; I usually eat whatever is available and suits my taste. For example, in winter I might choose hot soups, while in summer I prefer salads or cold noodles.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: This answer is clear but can be improved by adding a reason and a linking phrase to make the change logical. Use concrete examples and avoid vague phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. As a child I liked sugary drinks, but now I prefer spicy dishes such as biryani and spicy noodles because I have developed a stronger appreciation for bold flavours and spices.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× It is better to consume healthy foods, so I prefer healthy foods to consume.

It is better to eat healthy foods, so I prefer to eat them.

The original sentence is wordy and uses an awkward infinitive phrase 'healthy foods to consume.' Simplify by using the verb 'eat' and a pronoun to avoid repetition. Keep tense/purpose consistent. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Sentence structure errors

× One of the healthy foods which I like to consume is food.

One of the healthy foods I like is steamed vegetables.

The original sentence is nonspecific and repeats 'food.' Provide a specific noun and remove unnecessary relative pronoun 'which' for a reduced relative clause: 'foods I like.' Ensure clarity and natural wording. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Since it is a steamed food, it is safe to consume and hygienic.

Since it is steamed, it is safe to eat and hygienic.

'Steamed food' is acceptable but 'it is steamed' is more natural. Use 'eat' instead of 'consume' for spoken English, and place adjectives correctly. 'Hygienic' describes the food; word order adjusted for fluency. Grammar Problem Type ID: 13

Sentence structure errors

× No conservatives.

It has no preservatives.

The original phrase 'No conservatives' is incorrect word choice. The intended word is 'preservatives.' Provide a complete clause for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Past tense issue

× When I was young I preferred to consume some sugar sugary food items.

When I was young, I preferred to eat sugary food items.

Use 'eat' instead of 'consume' for natural spoken English and remove redundant 'sugar sugary.' Commas improve readability. The past tense 'preferred' is correct. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Umm, I I think most child would like sugary food items.

Umm, I think most children would like sugary food items.

Subject 'child' should be plural 'children' to agree with 'most.' Also remove the duplicated 'I.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

Sentence structure errors

× It is.

They are.

The fragment 'It is.' is unclear; referring back to 'sugary food items' (plural), use 'They are.' Ensure complete, matching pronoun number. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Incorrect use of relative clauses

× No, uh, I mostly eat anything which is available in front of me and my uh, taste preferences.

No, I mostly eat whatever is available and suits my taste preferences.

Use 'whatever' and 'suits' for natural expression. 'Which is available in front of me' is awkward; simplify. Maintain present habitual tense. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Sentence structure errors

× It heavily depends on my taste preferences.

It largely depends on my taste preferences.

'Heavily depends' is acceptable but 'largely depends' is more idiomatic. Keep present tense. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, I would eat anything at any time.

I can eat anything at any time.

'Would eat' suggests conditional; use 'can eat' or 'I will eat' to express general willingness. 'Can' fits the context of habitual ability. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, definitely.

Yes, definitely.

This sentence is fine as a short response; no grammatical correction needed. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

Tense and plural consistency

× In my childhood days I preferred sugary drinks and dishes, but now what I like the most is spicy foods like biryani and noodles.

In my childhood I preferred sugary drinks and dishes, but now I like spicy foods such as biryani and noodles.

Remove 'days' after 'childhood' for natural phrasing, and simplify 'what I like the most is' to 'I like.' Use 'such as' rather than 'like' for examples and keep plural consistency with 'spicy foods.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AvailableObtainable
BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
HealthyWell; Health-giving
SafeSecure; Unharmed; Cautious; Harmless
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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