Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Good answer: clear topic sentence, relevant supporting details, and personal feeling. To improve, make sentences more varied and avoid small redundancy (e.g., “perfect mixture” and repeating similar adjectives). Add one specific detail (e.g., ingredient or when you usually eat it) and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I really like lasagna because of its layers of béchamel sauce and seasoned beef, which create a rich, comforting flavour. When I order it, I usually pick a portion with extra cheese, and it always lifts my mood after a long day.

Gợi ý: Answer has clear idea but contains grammar errors, vague phrasing, and incomplete ending. Improve by correcting tense and sentence structure, using a clear topic sentence, adding a specific detail (e.g., spices or how it was cooked), and finishing the thought. Use a linking word to show reason or result.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, my favourite was my mum’s chicken curry, which I always asked for on my birthday because she made it with coconut milk and fragrant spices. It was comforting and reminds me of family celebrations, so I still crave it sometimes.

Gợi ý: Good structure and relevant examples, but use more formal language (avoid 'wanna'), correct grammar, and add linking words to compare seasons. Be specific about dishes and when you prefer them to show richer content.

Ví dụ: Yes, I tend to eat different foods depending on the season. For example, during the rainy season I prefer hot soups like chicken tinola or stews, while in summer I enjoy cold treats such as mango sorbet and chilled fruit salads.

Gợi ý: Idea is clear but tense errors, awkward phrasing, and an incomplete final sentence reduce clarity. Improve by using correct past and present tenses, linking contrasting ideas with words like 'however' and 'therefore', and finish the explanation with a specific reason or example of healthier choices.

Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes have changed. I used to eat a lot of sweets like cakes and biscuits when I was younger; however, now I choose healthier options such as grilled fish and steamed vegetables because I want to maintain my energy and overall health.

× When I was there I have an extreme love for my mom's chicken dish that I had to request it every time on my birthday.

✓ When I was young I had an extreme love for my mom's chicken dish, and I had to request it every year on my birthday.

The original mixes past and present tenses ('When I was there' + 'I have') which is incorrect. Use past tense consistently: 'When I was young' (correct phrase) and 'I had an extreme love'. Also 'every time on my birthday' is awkward; use 'every year on my birthday' for clarity. Suggestion: keep past tense for childhood events and use clear time expressions. Grammar problem type's ID: 5

× This dish is very tasty and it's a mixture of meat and Curry sauce.

✓ This dish was very tasty and it was a mixture of meat and curry sauce.

The student is describing a past favorite, so past tense 'was' fits. 'Curry' should be lowercased unless part of a proper noun. Using past tense keeps consistency with the previous sentence about childhood. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use lowercase for common nouns. Grammar problem type's ID: 26

× I love eating this food as it gives me comfort and also.

✓ I loved eating this food because it gave me comfort.

The original ends with an incomplete phrase 'and also.' Remove the fragment and use 'because' to show reason. Match past tense to previous statements about childhood. Suggestion: avoid ending with unfinished conjunctions; complete the clause that follows. Grammar problem type's ID: 26

× Yes, I wanna try different flavors of dishes.

✓ Yes, I want to try different flavors of dishes.

'wanna' is informal spoken contraction and inappropriate for a formal test answer. Use 'want to' instead. Also present simple 'want' is appropriate for general preference. Suggestion: use standard forms in formal speaking or writing. Grammar problem type's ID: 4

× For rainy seasons I love eating soup or stewed vegetables.

✓ In the rainy season I love eating soup or stewed vegetables.

Use 'in the rainy season' or 'during the rainy season' rather than 'for rainy seasons'. 'The rainy season' is a specific period. Suggestion: use 'in' or 'during' plus singular 'season' when speaking generally about that period. Grammar problem type's ID: 11

× On summer I love to try cold dishes like ice creams or other desserts.

✓ In summer I love to try cold dishes like ice cream or other desserts.

Use 'in summer' or 'in the summer' rather than 'on summer'. 'Ice cream' is an uncountable noun in this context, so use singular form. Suggestion: use 'in' for seasons and treat 'ice cream' as uncountable unless specifying types or servings. Grammar problem_type_id: 11

× Yes, when I was young, I love to eat sweets like cakes, cookies and other desserts.

✓ When I was young, I loved to eat sweets like cakes, cookies, and other desserts.

The clause 'When I was young' requires past tense in the main verb. Change 'love' to 'loved' for tense consistency. Suggestion: match verb tense to time expressions. Grammar problem_type_id: 6

× However, when I get old, I had to be conscious about my health.

✓ However, as I got older, I had to be more conscious about my health.

The original mixes present 'get' with past 'had'. For past narrative, use 'got older' and 'had to be' or 'became more conscious'. Also 'be conscious about my health' is better as 'be more conscious about my health'. Suggestion: keep past narrative consistent and use comparative 'more' for emphasis. Grammar_problem_type_id: 5

× So I make sure that I'm preparing healthy food.

✓ So I make sure that I prepare healthy food.

Use present simple 'I prepare' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm preparing', which suggests an action happening right now. 'Make sure that I prepare' indicates ongoing habit. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and habits. Grammar_problem_type_id: 6

× I think it's important to be conscious about health because.

✓ I think it's important to be conscious about health because it affects long-term wellbeing.

The original ends abruptly with 'because.' Complete the reason after 'because.' Provide a clear result or explanation. Suggestion: always finish causal clauses and give a full reason. Grammar_problem_type_id: 26