Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 비교적 자연스럽지만 더 구체적인 이유와 약간의 문장 다양성이 필요합니다. 주제 문장을 유지하면서 이유(맛, 식감, 재료 등)를 간단히 덧붙이고 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요. 예: 'I especially like cheese kimbap because...'. 또한 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 유지해 응답을 풍부하게 하세요.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is kimbap, especially cheese kimbap. I like it because the melted cheese adds a creamy texture and a rich flavour, and the rice and vegetables make it quite satisfying.

Gợi ý: 과거 상황을 말할 때 시제와 문장 구조가 명확하지 않습니다. 과거 시제를 사용하고 이유와 한두 가지 구체적 예시(특정 요리나 맛)를 덧붙이세요. 연결어로 이유를 분명히 하고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved the food my grandmother made because I lived with her. For example, she cooked a mild soybean stew and homemade rice cakes that were comforting and full of flavour.

Gợi ý: 문장이 거의 이해하기 어려울 정도로 어순과 어휘 선택이 어색합니다. 질문에는 계절·행사별로 먹는 음식을 구체적으로 답해야 합니다. 먼저 주제 문장을 말하고, 명확한 예(설날에는 떡국, 추석에는 송편, 생일에는 케이크 등)를 연결어(because, for example)로 덧붙이세요. 문장은 2~3개로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes. I eat different foods for special occasions: for example, I eat tteokguk on New Year's Day and songpyeon during Chuseok. Also, I usually eat cake to celebrate my birthday.

Gợi ý: 의견은 분명하지만 문장이 중복되고 어순이 어색합니다. 먼저 간단한 주제 문장으로 직접 답한 뒤, 변화된 세부사항을 명확히 설명하세요(예: 'I preferred plain kimbap before, but now I prefer cheese kimbap'). 연결어를 사용해 비교를 명확히 하고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

Ví dụ: No, my favourite food has basically stayed the same — kimbap. However, when I was younger I preferred plain kimbap, while now I prefer cheese kimbap because I like the richer flavour.

× I like the food that my grandmother makes because I live with grandmother when I was young and so I think I like the grandmother's food.

✓ I liked the food that my grandmother made because I lived with my grandmother when I was young, so I think I liked my grandmother's food.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. The speaker refers to past situations (living with grandmother, liking food when young), so verbs should be in the past tense. Also 'grandmother' needs the possessive 'my' and 'makes' should be 'made' to match past. Use consistent past tense: 'liked', 'made', 'lived'. Additionally, remove the redundant article before 'grandmother's food'. Suggestion: Use consistent tense for past events and include appropriate possessive pronouns (my).

× I thought go at in the New Year's ceremony and I soon pian in Chuseok and I I usually the cake when I when my birthday.

✓ I go to the New Year ceremony, and I also sing during Chuseok, and I usually have cake on my birthday.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains many word order and word choice errors. 'thought go at' is incorrect; for habitual present actions use present simple 'I go to'. 'soon pian' seems to attempt 'song' or 'sing'; likely 'I also sing'. 'I I usually the cake when I when my birthday' missing verb and incorrect preposition: use 'I usually have cake on my birthday.' Suggestion: Break into clear parallel clauses, use correct verbs ('go', 'sing', 'have'), and correct prepositions ('to the New Year ceremony', 'during Chuseok', 'on my birthday').

× No, when I was a child I liked kimbap and now I like kimbap also. Actually I like the vegetable when I was young but I like the cheese kimbap now but it is also kimbap so I think I my favorite food doesn't change.

✓ No. When I was a child I liked kimbap, and now I like kimbap too. Actually, I liked vegetables when I was young, but I like cheese kimbap now. Since cheese kimbap is still kimbap, I think my favorite food hasn't changed.

The original mixes past and present inconsistently and has word order errors. Use past tense 'liked' for preferences in childhood ('when I was a child/young') and present tense 'like' for current preferences. 'the vegetable' should be plural or uncountable 'vegetables' and use 'liked vegetables'. 'I think I my favorite food doesn't change' has an extra pronoun and incorrect tense; use 'I think my favorite food hasn't changed.' Suggestion: Keep past for past preferences, present for current; correct article/number for 'vegetables' and remove redundant pronouns.