Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접 답한 후 구체적이고 논리적인 세부 정보를 연결어로 자연스럽게 덧붙이세요. 반복되는 단어(예: "sweet sweet", "usually usually")를 피하고 시제와 문법을 올바르게 사용하세요. 또한 'baking' 동사 형태를 고쳐 문장을 명확히 하세요. 예: 주제문→이유→빈도/상황→예시 순으로 3문장 이내로 정리하세요.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is sweets, especially chocolate and candy. I enjoy them because sugary treats lift my mood and make me feel happy. For example, I often bake cakes with my friends at weekends and we share them while watching movies.

Gợi ý: 과거와 현재의 차이를 분명한 구조로 제시하세요(예: 'When I was young...' → 'Now...' ). 중복 표현과 불필요한 말(uhm, I think, repeated words)을 줄이고 과거형/현재형을 정확히 사용하세요. 구체적인 예시(어떤 매운 음식인지)를 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved sweet treats such as chocolate and candy. Now I prefer spicier dishes, like kimchi stew or spicy noodles, because I enjoy the stronger flavours.

Gợi ý: 문장을 직접적으로 시작하고 문법 오류를 고치세요('You saw ate'는 불필요). 계절별 음식 차이를 말할 때는 연결어(예: 'In winter... whereas in summer...')를 사용해 논리적으로 연결하세요. 구체적인 음식 이름과 이유(몸을 따뜻하게 한다 등)를 명확히 제시하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In winter I usually have hot soups or stews, such as chicken soup, because they keep me warm. In summer I prefer cold dishes like cold noodles or salads to feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접 'Yes' 또는 'No'로 답한 뒤 변화의 이유를 간결하게 설명하세요. 단어 선택과 발음 유사 단어(예: 'melatonin'은 음식이 아니므로 주의)를 정확하게 쓰고 문법(주어+동사)을 정리하세요. 성숙함을 언급할 때는 이유(입맛 변화, 경험 등)를 구체적으로 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I loved sweets like chocolate and candy, but now I prefer spicy dishes such as spicy dumplings because I have developed a taste for stronger flavours as I grew older.

× So umm, when I eat sweet food and that's that makes me feel very better and very happy.

✓ So umm, when I eat sweet food it makes me feel much better and very happy.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun/reference and redundant words. 'That's that makes' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it makes'. Use 'much better' not 'very better'. Improve fluency by removing redundancy. Suggestion: Use 'when I eat sweet food, it makes me feel much better and very happy.'

× So I usually usually baking a cake or chocolate with my friends.

✓ So I usually bake cakes or make chocolate treats with my friends.

Present habitual action needs base verb 'bake' with 'usually', not 'baking'. Also pluralize 'cake' to 'cakes' for general activity and 'make chocolate treats' is more natural. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines: 'I usually bake cakes with my friends.'

× When I was young I think I definitely like sweet sweet treat or food but like chocolate or candies.

✓ When I was young I definitely liked sweet treats or foods like chocolate and candies.

Talking about past preference requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Remove duplicated words and use 'treats' plural. Connect examples with 'like'. Suggestion: Use past simple for past habits: 'I definitely liked sweet treats like chocolate and candy.'

× But right now I I think I like more umm more hot spicy food.

✓ But right now I think I prefer hot, spicy food.

Redundancy 'I I' and 'more umm more' should be removed. Use 'prefer' or 'like' in present tense. Add comma between adjectives 'hot, spicy'. Suggestion: Say 'Right now I prefer hot, spicy food.'

× You saw ate different foods at different times.

✓ I eat different foods at different times of the year.

The original has wrong subject 'You saw' and past tense 'ate' conflicting with general habit. Replace with correct subject 'I' and present simple 'eat' for habitual actions. Add 'of the year' to match question. Suggestion: 'I eat different foods at different times of the year.'

× Example when in winter I usually eat sweet or hot soup because they keeps my body warm and in summer I think I it's cold noodles or salad.

✓ For example, in winter I usually eat sweet or hot soup because it keeps my body warm, and in summer I eat cold noodles or salad.

Use 'in winter' not 'when in winter'; 'they keeps' is incorrect agreement—use singular 'it keeps' for 'soup'. Remove extraneous 'I think I it's' and use 'eat' for summer. Maintain parallel structure. Suggestion: 'In winter I usually eat hot soup because it keeps me warm; in summer I eat cold noodles or salad.'

× When I was a young, I think I like sweet chocolate or candy, but right now I think I more love spicy food like melatonin or spicy dumpling.

✓ When I was young, I liked chocolate and candy, but now I prefer spicy foods like spicy dumplings.

Don't use 'a' before 'young'—use 'young' alone. Use past tense 'liked' for childhood. 'More love' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer' or 'love more'. 'Melatonin' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'seasoning' or remove it. Use plural 'dumplings'. Suggestion: 'When I was young, I liked chocolate and candy, but now I prefer spicy foods like spicy dumplings.'

× Yeah, it changed me. My I think my I'm matured.

✓ Yes, my tastes have changed. I think I have matured.

'It changed me' is informal; better 'my tastes have changed'. 'My I think my I'm matured' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use present perfect 'have matured' to indicate change up to now. Suggestion: 'My tastes have changed. I think I have matured.'