Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
And my favorite food is water ball. I love to eat water well it is made of. Susie Cornflour and also we use Umm chaat masla to make tart and water.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was young I like junk food most of the time but after sometime I realize junk food is not healthy healthy food so I used to keep avoid song food and I moved to. Those food is good for our health.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do eat different food at different times of the year because, uh, there are different season in a year and I love to eat food, uh, according to the air because in winter I love to eat too hot foods while in summer I love to eat those foods which are cold and helps to.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, my favorite food since since I was a child. When I become young my interests are since and my days are also a change in food. When I was child I used to eat junk food but now I love to eat healthy foods and I always eat healthy food.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Be concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence saying what your favourite food is, then give one or two specific details: what it is, main ingredients, and why you like it. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. "water ball" may be unclear; say the dish name clearly) and avoid filler words. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so".
Ví dụ: My favourite food is a snack called water balls, which are dumplings made from cornflour and filled with spicy chaat masala. I like them because they are soft and have a tangy, spicy flavour, and I usually eat them as a light meal or snack.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, use past tense for childhood, and explain the change with clear reasons. Provide one or two specific examples of junk food you ate and what you eat now. Use linking words like "but", "because", and "so" to make your explanation coherent. Keep sentences short and avoid repetition.
Ví dụ: When I was young, I ate a lot of junk food, such as chips and fast food, because it was convenient and tasty. However, I realised it was unhealthy, so now I avoid those foods and prefer home-cooked meals with vegetables and lean protein.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Be specific about seasons and give concrete examples of foods you eat in each season. Use linking phrases like "in winter" and "in summer" and finish your thoughts fully. Avoid fillers like "uh" and keep answers within five sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes. In winter I usually eat hot, hearty foods like soups and stews to keep warm, while in summer I prefer cold dishes such as salads, yogurt-based drinks, and fresh fruits because they refresh me.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer clearly that your preference changed and state reasons and examples for the change. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Keep it to two or three sentences: one stating the change and one explaining why, with specific examples of foods you preferred then and now.
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I often ate sweets and fast food, but now I prefer healthy meals like grilled fish, salads, and steamed vegetables because I care more about my health.
× And my favorite food is water ball.
✓ My favorite food is water balls.
The noun refers to a countable item served in plural form here; use plural 'water balls' to match meaning and natural usage. Also remove leading conjunction 'And' at sentence start if not continuing previous sentence.
× I love to eat water well it is made of.
✓ I love to eat them; they are made of water chestnut and cornflour.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and lacks clear structure. Separate into two clauses and use a pronoun 'them' to refer to 'water balls.' Provide a clear subject and verb in each clause.
× Susie Cornflour and also we use Umm chaat masla to make tart and water.
✓ They are made with cornflour and chaat masala to make sweet and savory water balls.
The original contains unclear word choices and ordering. Use correct ingredient names ('cornflour', 'chaat masala') and a clear verb 'made with'. Reorder words to convey intended meaning.
× When I was young I like junk food most of the time but after sometime I realize junk food is not healthy healthy food so I used to keep avoid song food and I moved to.
✓ When I was young, I liked junk food most of the time, but after some time I realized junk food is not healthy, so I avoided such food and changed my diet.
The context is past, so verbs must be in past tense: 'liked', 'realized', 'avoided', 'changed'. Also correct word choice 'after some time', 'such food', and complete the final clause to state what changed.
× Those food is good for our health.
✓ That food is good for our health.
'Food' is an uncountable noun treated as singular; use 'that' not 'those'. Use singular verb 'is'.
× there are different season in a year
✓ there are different seasons in a year
Plural noun 'seasons' is required. Also no additional preposition change needed, only plural form.
× I love to eat food, uh, according to the air because in winter I love to eat too hot foods while in summer I love to eat those foods which are cold and helps to.
✓ I like to eat according to the weather: in winter I prefer very hot foods, while in summer I prefer cold foods that are refreshing.
Use 'weather' not 'air'. Replace 'too hot foods' with 'very hot foods' and 'helps to' with clear phrase 'that are refreshing'. Improve word order and clarity.
× Yes, my favorite food since since I was a child.
✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child.
The original is incomplete and repetitive. To answer the question 'Has your favourite food changed?' say 'has changed since I was a child.' Use present perfect 'has changed' to link past to present.
× When I become young my interests are since and my days are also a change in food.
✓ As I grew older, my interests changed and my eating habits also changed.
Use past tense 'grew' and 'changed' to describe development over time. The original uses incorrect tense and awkward phrasing; replace with natural expressions 'grew older' and 'eating habits'.
× When I was child I used to eat junk food but now I love to eat healthy foods and I always eat healthy food.
✓ When I was a child, I used to eat junk food, but now I like to eat healthy foods and I always try to eat healthily.
Add article 'a' before 'child'. Use 'like' for current preference and 'try to eat healthily' or 'eat healthy foods' for natural phrasing. Use adverb 'healthily' to modify 'eat'.