Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is a pizza because I love its combination of a crispy based.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
I love the simple home cooked meals when I was young, especially my grandmother's chicken soup and rice because it was warm and comforting after school. I also enjoyed sweet snacks like fruit Jelly and homemade bicycles.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes I do in different foods dependent depending on the season. For example in summer I prefer light meals like salads and cold fruits such as watermelon tooth stay refreshed. Whereas in winter I chose oriented dishes like stress and rooted vegetables to keep warm and.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, my favorite food has a child since childhood. I used to love signatories like candy and cakes, but now I prefer healthier a patients such as grilled fish and salads because I've really nutrition more. For example, I told me all three in protein and vegetables.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并且语法正确。应直接陈述喜好,然后用一到两句具体描述原因,避免冗长或语法错误。注意名词单复数和短语搭配(例如 “crispy base” 而不是 “crispy based”)。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is pizza because I love the contrast between its crispy base and soft, cheesy topping. I especially enjoy pizzas with fresh tomatoes and basil, which make them taste light and flavorful.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和词汇需要改进,避免拼写或用词错误(如 “fruit jelly” 而不是 “fruit Jelly”,‘homemade biscuits’ 而不是 ‘bicycles’)。保持句子简洁并用连接词衔接细节。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked simple home-cooked meals, especially my grandmother's chicken soup with rice because it was warm and comforting after school. I also loved sweet snacks like fruit jelly and homemade biscuits.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答存在许多语法、拼写和词语搭配错误,应先用一句话直接回答,然后给出两个具体季节的例子,使用连接词并检查单词拼写(如 ‘depend on’, ‘to stay refreshed’, ‘root vegetables’)。不要超出五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do eat different foods depending on the season. In summer I prefer light meals such as salads and cold fruits like watermelon to stay refreshed. In winter I choose hearty dishes with meat and root vegetables to keep warm.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 句子含义不清,词汇大量错误(如 ‘signatories’, ‘patients’, ‘I've really nutrition’),需要重构回答:先肯定变化,再说明过去与现在的具体对比,并给出原因和例子。保持清晰、简短。
Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. I used to love sweets like candy and cakes when I was a child, but now I prefer healthier options such as grilled fish and salads because I pay more attention to nutrition. For example, I try to include protein and vegetables in every meal.
× My favorite food is a pizza because I love its combination of a crispy based.
✓ My favorite food is pizza because I love its combination of a crispy base.
问题类型:冠词与名词搭配错误。解释:英语中谈论一种食物时通常不用不定冠词“a”加可数名词“pizza”来泛指整个食物类别,应该直接用不可数形式“pizza”。此外原句中“based”是拼写或词类错误,正确应为名词“base”。建议:当泛指食物种类时去掉不定冠词,检查单词拼写与词性(base为名词)。
× I love the simple home cooked meals when I was young, especially my grandmother's chicken soup and rice because it was warm and comforting after school.
✓ I loved the simple home-cooked meals when I was young, especially my grandmother's chicken soup and rice because they were warm and comforting after school.
问题类型:时态与代词一致性错误。解释:句子先提到“when I was young”表示过去,应使用过去时“loved”。此外“meal(s)”和“soup and rice”都是复数或复合概念,指代时应使用复数代词“they”及复数动词“were”。建议:注意时间状语决定时态,代词要与先行词数一致;‘home-cooked’作复合形容词需连字符。
× I also enjoyed sweet snacks like fruit Jelly and homemade bicycles.
✓ I also enjoyed sweet snacks like fruit jelly and homemade biscuits.
问题类型:词汇使用错误(名词不当)。解释:原句中“Jelly”首字母无需大写,且“bicycles”与语境不符,应该是“biscuits”(饼干)或“cookies”。建议:选择与语境匹配的词并注意大小写;若指果冻可写“fruit jelly”,指自制饼干用“homemade biscuits/cookies”。
× Yes I do in different foods dependent depending on the season.
✓ Yes, I do, and I eat different foods depending on the season.
问题类型:代词/介词及句子结构混乱。解释:原句“in different foods dependent depending”重复且结构错误,正确表达为“eat different foods depending on the season”或“it depends on the season”。建议:使用短语“depending on”来表示“取决于”,并保持句子主谓完整。
× For example in summer I prefer light meals like salads and cold fruits such as watermelon tooth stay refreshed.
✓ For example, in summer I prefer light meals like salads and cold fruits such as watermelon to stay refreshed.
问题类型:句子结构与拼写错误。解释:原句中“watermelon tooth stay”拼写与词序错误,应为“watermelon to stay”表示“为了保持清爽”。建议:把目的短语用不定式“to + 动词”连接,并注意标点与拼写(tooth → to)。
× Whereas in winter I chose oriented dishes like stress and rooted vegetables to keep warm and.
✓ Whereas in winter I choose heartier dishes like stews and root vegetables to keep warm.
问题类型:时态错误与词汇错误。解释:这里谈论习惯性偏好应使用一般现在时“choose”而非过去“chose”。“oriented dishes”不合适,应为“heartier dishes”(更丰盛的菜肴),“stress”应为“stews”,并且“rooted vegetables”应为“root vegetables”。句末多余“and”应去掉。建议:描述常态用现在时,检查词汇拼写与搭配(stew, root vegetables, heartier)。
× Yes, my favorite food has a child since childhood.
✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since childhood.
问题类型:句子结构错误与词汇使用错误。解释:“has a child”明显是拼写或词序错误,应为“has changed”,表示“已经改变”。“since childhood”与现在完成时连用是正确的。建议:用“has changed since childhood”来表达自孩提时代以来有变化。
× I used to love signatories like candy and cakes, but now I prefer healthier a patients such as grilled fish and salads because I've really nutrition more.
✓ I used to love treats like candy and cakes, but now I prefer healthier options such as grilled fish and salads because I've been eating more nutritious food.
问题类型:时态与词汇使用错误。解释:“signatories”与“a patients”都是错误词汇,应为“treats”与“options”。“I've really nutrition more”语法混乱,意图应为“我一直吃更有营养的食物”,用现在完成进行时或现在完成时“I've been eating more nutritious food”。建议:使用正确词汇“treats/options/nutritious”,并用合适的完成时态表达持续的变化(have/been + 动词-ing)。
× For example, I told me all three in protein and vegetables.
✓ For example, I now include plenty of protein and vegetables in my meals.
问题类型:代词与句子结构错误,动词形式错误。解释:原句“told me all three in protein and vegetables”无意义且语序混乱。应表达“例如,我现在在我的餐食中包含大量蛋白质和蔬菜”,用现在时“include”并明确主语和宾语。建议:理清主语(I)和动词,使用正确动词“include”或“add”,并使用量词“plenty of”来表达“很多”。