Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
What the hell you ******* doing, Christian? Holy ****. ******* question is really terrible. You know, I really need like the potato, because the potato is really ******* good. Delicious, you know?
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
Come on man, what do what do? What do you let me use the often few words? **** you *****. Holy **** you know, so you ask me what's think of food you like?
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
That's really a fun question. Holy ******* ****. Jesus Christ. Oh my gosh. You know, I always, I never eat the different foods and the different times of the year because I always used the potato.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is **** man. Come on, you like ****. And the winner was a teenager. It was a tomato. And uh, nowadays I'm a young man, so I like a potato. Holy ******* ****. Jesus.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 请停止使用粗俗语言并直接回答问题。回答应以主题句开头,简洁说明你最喜欢的食物,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子来支持。例如说明口味、多久吃一次或喜欢的做法。保持自然用词、逻辑连贯并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is potatoes. I especially like them mashed because they are creamy and comforting, and I often have them with butter and herbs for a simple dinner.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 避免抱怨或人身攻击,直接作答并给出具体回忆。开头一句说明小时候喜欢的食物,然后用一两句描述具体原因或场景(谁做的、何时吃、味道如何)。使用连接词如“because”、“when”来使回答连贯。
Ví dụ: When I was young I loved tomatoes. My grandmother used to make fresh tomato salad for me, and I liked the sweet, tangy flavour that reminded me of summer.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 删去感叹和脏话,直接回答并用一两个具体例子说明是否随季节改变饮食。若有差异,说明哪些食物在何时吃;若无差异,说明原因并可举例。使用连接词如“however”或“because”。
Ví dụ: Not really — I tend to eat similar foods all year, mainly potatoes. However, in summer I also enjoy fresh salads and berries because they are lighter and seasonal.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 18.0Gợi ý: 不要使用粗鄙语言,清晰陈述是否改变并给出原因。开头一句回答是否改变,然后用一到两句解释原因(口味变化、健康、生活方式等)。可以比较过去和现在并用连接词如“but”或“because”。
Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred tomatoes because they were sweet and fresh, but now I prefer potatoes because I like their versatility and they feel more filling.
× What the hell you ******* doing, Christian?
✓ What the hell are you doing, Christian?
原句中缺少助动词“are”,这是一个主语(you)和动词之间的错误,属于代词/主语与谓语搭配问题。正确句子使用疑问句一般结构:助动词 + 主语 + 动词原形。建议在构成现在进行时的疑问句时总是加上适当的助动词(am/is/are)。
× You know, I really need like the potato, because the potato is really ******* good.
✓ You know, I really need potatoes, because potatoes are really good.
原句中使用了定冠词“the”与可数名词单数“potato”不匹配,而且语境表示一般喜好应使用复数或不定冠词。属于代词/冠词和数的一类问题(同时涉及单复数)。建议表达一般喜好时用复数(potatoes)或不定冠词加名词(a potato)。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young?
✓ What kind of food did you like when you were young?
该句原句无语法错误,过去时询问过去喜好,保持过去时态 no change needed。
× Come on man, what do what do? What do you let me use the often few words? **** you *****.
✓ Come on man, what do you mean? Can you let me use a few words?
原句中多处混乱与重复,句子结构不完整或使用了不自然的短语。属于句子结构错误。建议把口语表达整理为完整的疑问句或祈使句,例如“what do you mean?”和“Can you let me use a few words?”,并用“a few words”表示少量词语。
× so you ask me what's think of food you like?
✓ so you ask me what I think of the food I like?
原句中疑问从句结构错误,代词位置混乱。属于代词/从句结构问题。正确的宾语从句应为“what I think of ...”。建议从句中先放主语(I),再放动词(think)。
× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
原句语法正确,使用复数和短语“different times of the year”恰当,无需修改。
× I always, I never eat the different foods and the different times of the year because I always used the potato.
✓ I never eat different foods at different times of the year because I always eat potatoes.
原句时态和副词使用混乱:同时出现“always”和“never”造成逻辑矛盾;“used the potato”错误地使用了过去式和定冠词。属于现在时/副词位置及动词时态错误。建议表达习惯时用一般现在时(I always eat / I never eat),并用复数(potatoes)表示通常食物。
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
原句为考官提问,无语法错误,保持现在完成时与时间状语“since”搭配正确。
× My favorite food is **** man. Come on, you like ****. And the winner was a teenager. It was a tomato.
✓ My favorite food, man... when I was a teenager it was a tomato.
原句口语化且结构断裂,“the winner was a teenager”不合逻辑,属于句子结构错误。建议把想表达的意思合并为完整句子:说明当时身份(a teenager)时的喜好,用过去时表述。
× And uh, nowadays I'm a young man, so I like a potato.
✓ And uh, nowadays I'm a young man, so I like potatoes.
原句中“a potato”在表达一般喜好时不太自然,通常用复数形式表示常吃的食物(potatoes)或使用不定冠词表特指一颗土豆。属于现在时与数的使用问题。建议用复数来表达习惯性喜好。