Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
Probably. I'd say dumplings especially. I like homemade dumplings because they remind me of family gatherings and its feeling is savory and the wrapper is soft which makes them taste really good.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When you were young? Since I was young, I have loved dumplings because of their delicious taste. When I was younger, I mainly liked them for the taste, but now I enjoy eating dumplings more for the family gatherings and the memories we share while making them together.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Oh definitely. In winter I usually go for dumplings or hot soup because they are filling and help me feel warm and comfortable. In summer I tend to lighter dishes like salads, yogurts, and sandwiches since they feel refreshing and less grassy.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Actually, no. Since I was a child I've always loved the dumplings, but my reasons have changed a little. When I was young I liked the meaning for the taste, but now I enjoy them because they bring my family together and remind me of warm holiday memories.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答自然,但有语法和表达小问题,应更简洁并用连词连接观点。注意代词和单复数(如“its feeling”不当),以及控制句子数量不超过5句。建议把主题句放前,随后用一到两句具体支持细节并用连词过渡。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is homemade dumplings. They remind me of family gatherings, and the savory filling combined with a soft wrapper makes them especially delicious. Moreover, we often make them together, which adds a warm, nostalgic feeling.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰且内容连贯,但开头有口误(重复提问句),且时态和表达可更精炼。建议先给主题句,然后用一两句对比过去和现在,用连词如“but”或“however”明确对比。
Ví dụ: I have liked dumplings since I was a child. At first I enjoyed them mainly for the taste, but now I appreciate them more for the family tradition and the memories we create when making them together.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答内容明确但用词和表达存在问题(如“less grassy”用法不当)。建议用更准确的形容词并用连接词增强流畅性。避免过多口语填充词,保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In winter I usually choose dumplings or hot soup because they are filling and keep me warm. In summer I prefer lighter dishes such as salads, yogurt and sandwiches because they feel refreshing.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答总体良好,但有语法和表达小问题(如“liked the meaning for the taste”不清晰)。建议先直接回答,然后用一两句具体说明变化原因,使用更恰当的短语如“liked them mainly for the taste”。
Ví dụ: No, my favourite food hasn't changed; it's still dumplings. However, my reasons have shifted: as a child I liked them mainly for their taste, but now I value the family time and holiday memories we share when making them.
× I like homemade dumplings because they remind me of family gatherings and its feeling is savory and the wrapper is soft which makes them taste really good.
✓ I like homemade dumplings because they remind me of family gatherings and their filling is savory and the wrapper is soft, which makes them taste really good.
句中出现了代词与名词的不一致(使用了 its 指代复数 dumplings),同时原文用的 feeling 不合适,应为 filling(馅料)。需要用复数代词 their 指代 dumplings,并把 which 从句前加逗号以连接两个并列描述。建议:用 their 指代复数名词,用 filling 表示“馅料”,并在 which 从句前用逗号。
× When you were young? Since I was young, I have loved dumplings because of their delicious taste.
✓ When I was young? Since I was young, I have loved dumplings because of their delicious taste.
考官问句为“What kind of food did you like when you were young?” 学生回复第一句错误地重复了考官问句但把主语写成 you,应为 I。此处是代词使用错误。建议:注意把代词改为与自己相关的第一人称 I。
× When I was younger, I mainly liked them for the taste, but now I enjoy eating dumplings more for the family gatherings and the memories we share while making them together.
✓ When I was younger, I mainly liked them for the taste, but now I enjoy eating dumplings more for the family gatherings and the memories we share while making them together.
句子整体时态使用合理(对比过去和现在),但需要注意保持时态一致:过去用 liked,现在用 enjoy 和 share。原句已正确,无需改动。此处给出说明以符合步骤要求:确认为时态问题类型但实际上正确。建议:继续保持过去与现在时的清晰对比。
× In summer I tend to lighter dishes like salads, yogurts, and sandwiches since they feel refreshing and less grassy.
✓ In summer I tend to eat lighter dishes like salads, yogurts, and sandwiches since they feel refreshing and less heavy.
原句短语 "tend to lighter dishes" 缺少动词,应为 "tend to eat lighter dishes",这是介词/短语搭配问题。此外用词 "grassy" 不合适,常用表达为 "heavy"(油腻/沉重)或 "filling" 的反义词。建议:在 tend to 后加动词 eat,并用更合适的形容词如 light/less heavy/refreshing 来表达夏季偏好。
× Actually, no. Since I was a child I've always loved the dumplings, but my reasons have changed a little.
✓ Actually, no. Since I was a child I've always loved dumplings, but my reasons have changed a little.
在英语中提到食物泛指时通常不加定冠词 the。原句中 "the dumplings" 不合适,应改为复数名词不加冠词 "dumplings"。这是冠词使用错误。建议:泛指某类食物时省略定冠词;只有特指时才用 the。