Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details (taste and texture) using correct adjectives and comparatives. Avoid repetition and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is tiramisu. I enjoy it because the sweet mascarpone and the slight coffee bitterness create a pleasant balance. Also, the dessert has a light, creamy texture that melts in the mouth, which makes it especially enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Correct tense and sentence structure, use a clear topic sentence and link supporting details with a brief example. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure example relates directly to the point.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved tiramisu. I liked it because the mix of sweet cream and a hint of coffee bitterness gave it an interesting flavour. For example, my grandmother often made small portions for me after dinner, and I always looked forward to that treat.

Gợi ý: Good content and structure; improve accuracy and use linking words (for example, whereas, therefore) and more precise vocabulary. Make sentences more natural and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer cold foods such as ice cream or chilled salads, whereas in winter I like hot dishes like soups and stews because they are comforting and warming.

Gợi ý: Clarify the timeline and reason, use correct tenses and avoid repetition. Provide a concise topic sentence then one or two specific reasons why tastes changed, with a clear example.

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed as I grew older because my tastes became more adventurous. For example, I now appreciate more complex desserts like tiramisu, where the combination of sweet cream and coffee bitterness appeals to my developed palate.

× I love tiramisu cake definitely because I could feel a strong flavors and I could feel the balance between the sweetness and instead of bitter flavors.

✓ I definitely love tiramisu cake because I can taste strong flavors and I can feel the balance between sweetness and bitterness.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and modal/tense choice. 'could feel a strong flavors' mixes past modal 'could' with plural noun and article; correct to 'can taste strong flavors' (present ability) and remove 'a' before plural 'flavors'. 'Instead of bitter flavors' is incorrect phrase; use 'bitterness' as a noun to show contrast. Suggestion: use present tense 'can' for general tastes and match nouns/forms (singular/plural and noun form).

× I also feel is soft texture and the light is sweet and the texture is really good.

✓ I also feel its soft texture and its light sweetness; the texture is really good.

Errors: subject-verb agreement/possessive pronoun and word choice. 'I also feel is soft texture' lacks possessive pronoun and has incorrect word order; use 'its soft texture'. 'the light is sweet' is unclear; use 'its light sweetness'. Suggestion: include correct possessive pronouns and use concise noun phrases. 'Subject-verb agreement' category applies because sentence structure fails to link subject and predicate properly.

× When I were young, I really loved tiramisu because it has a wonderful balance between sweetness and a slight bitterness from the coffee, which makes the flavors very complex.

✓ When I was young, I really loved tiramisu because it had a wonderful balance between sweetness and a slight bitterness from the coffee, which made the flavors very complex.

Errors: tense consistency (present vs past). The clause 'When I were young' uses incorrect verb form 'were' for singular 'I' (should be 'was') and the description of the food should be in past tense to match 'loved' ('had' and 'made'). Suggestion: keep past tense throughout recounting past experiences and use 'was' for first person singular in simple past.

× It also has a soft creamy texture and the light and for example, my grandmother used to make a toast for me.

✓ It also had a soft, creamy texture, and, for example, my grandmother used to make toast for me.

Errors: subject-verb agreement/tense and article use. 'has' should be 'had' to match past context. 'the light' is incomplete and unclear; likely omitted word and should be removed. 'make a toast' is incorrect in this context—use 'make toast' (uncountable) or 'make a piece of toast'. Suggestion: maintain past tense and correct article use with 'toast'. 'Subject-verb agreement' applies due to tense mismatch.

× Yes, because I love the own flavor in each seasons in the years.

✓ Yes, because I love the unique flavor in each season of the year.

Errors: singular/plural and word choice. 'own flavor' is unnatural; use 'unique flavor'. 'each seasons' mixes 'each' (singular) with plural 'seasons'—use 'each season'. 'in the years' is redundant; use 'of the year' or omit. Suggestion: pair 'each' with singular and choose appropriate adjective.

× For example, in summer I really love to eat something colder like ice cream or something really cold.

✓ For example, in summer I really love to eat colder things like ice cream.

Errors: preposition/wordiness and repetition. 'eat something colder' is awkward; better 'eat colder things'. Repetition 'something really cold' is redundant. Suggestion: simplify and use plural 'things' to refer generally.

× But in winter I really love to eat soup because it's hot and warm.

✓ But in winter I really love to eat soup because it's hot and comforting.

Errors: tense is okay but adjective redundancy. 'hot and warm' is repetitive; use a more descriptive adjective like 'comforting' or 'warming'. Suggestion: avoid redundant adjectives and choose one that conveys meaning.

× Yes, my favorite food has changed when I was a child because when I grew up I could feel more flavors in this world and I changed my mind.

✓ Yes, my favorite food changed since I was a child because when I grew up I began to notice more flavors in the world and I changed my mind.

Errors: tense consistency and modal use. 'has changed when I was a child' mixes present perfect with a past time clause; use simple past 'changed since I was a child' or 'has changed since I was a child'. 'could feel more flavors' is better as 'began to notice more flavors'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use verbs that express gradual change (began to notice).

× For example, I taste something like tiramisuke and I could feel its balance between sweetness and bitter.

✓ For example, I tasted something like tiramisu and I could feel its balance between sweetness and bitterness.

Errors: verb -ing/verb forms and noun form. 'I taste' should be past 'I tasted' to match prior past context. 'tiramisuke' seems a misspelling—use 'tiramisu'. 'bitter' should be noun 'bitterness' to parallel 'sweetness'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and correct noun forms; check spelling.

× I love it.

✓ I love it.

No grammatical error. The sentence is correct and appropriately simple; no change needed.