Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
Well, one of my favorite food is Hong San Do that's a Yunnan cuisine and its ingredients are all coming from the abundant nature environment and it's has a abundant special taste and that that's made a great couple with the rice.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
Well, I like to eat snacks when I was young, especially for jello and chips. I prefer the cucumber flavored chips because it's have a very special taste and it tastes like a cucumber in your mouth.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, because there has distinctive food in the different seasons. And for example, because I am a Vietnam people in summer, we have a very famous food and ingredients called drinks. So at that time we also eat drinks, hot pot for our dinner and that's really delicious and uh, that have a really, uh.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. When I was little I prefer junk food which is unhealthy and and unhygienic because it tastes good and it's easy to take. But when I grow up I nowadays prefer a healthy and nutrient food like salad and fresh fish because now.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 答题时要更直接并注意语法与句子简洁。先给出主句说明喜好,然后用1-2句具体理由或描述,避免重复与冗长。例如注意单数/复数("one of my favorite foods"),减少填充词(如"that"重复),并使用连词(because, so)使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: One of my favorite dishes is Hong San Do, a Yunnan specialty. It uses fresh, natural ingredients and has a unique, rich flavor that pairs perfectly with plain rice.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答应保持时态一致并更精确地表达偏好。用过去时描述童年喜好(I liked),避免语法错误("it's have")。提供一两个具体原因或感受并用连词连接,使答案更连贯。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked snacks, especially jelly and chips. I particularly enjoyed cucumber-flavored chips because they had a refreshing taste that reminded me of fresh cucumber.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 答案需要更清晰的结构、准确用词与具体例子。先用一句话直接回答,然后给出具体季节和食物例子。注意国家/民族表达("I am Vietnamese"),不要混淆饮料与菜肴("drinks"用法不当)。减少填充词并用连词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes. In summer, Vietnamese people often eat light, cooling dishes such as cold noodle salads and fresh fruit, while in winter we prefer hot dishes like hot pot to keep warm.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 注意时态一致与句子完整。用过去时描述过去偏好(I preferred),现在时描述现在的喜好(I prefer)。补全原因并避免不必要重复("and and")。提供具体例子说明为何改变(健康、营养、方便等)。
Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I preferred junk food because it tasted good and was convenient. Now I prefer healthier options like salads and fresh fish because I care more about nutrition and overall well-being.
× Well, one of my favorite food is Hong San Do that's a Yunnan cuisine and its ingredients are all coming from the abundant nature environment and it's has a abundant special taste and that that's made a great couple with the rice.
✓ Well, one of my favorite foods is Hong San Do, which is a Yunnan cuisine. Its ingredients all come from the abundant natural environment, and it has an abundant special taste that goes great with rice.
错误类型:单复数问题(Singular and plural issue)。原因:短语“one of my favorite food”中“one of”之后名词应使用复数形式,因此应为“foods”。另外原句中“it's has”包含多余主谓结构,应为“it has”。建议:当使用“one of”结构时,确保后接名词复数;检查并去除多余的助动词或主语重复。
× Well, I like to eat snacks when I was young, especially for jello and chips.
✓ Well, I liked to eat snacks when I was young, especially jello and chips.
错误类型:现在时问题(Present tense issue)。原因:句子描述过去的习惯,应使用过去时“liked”而不是现在时“like”。建议:谈论过去的习惯时使用过去时,如“liked”或“used to”。
× I prefer the cucumber flavored chips because it's have a very special taste and it tastes like a cucumber in your mouth.
✓ I preferred the cucumber-flavored chips because they had a very special taste and tasted like cucumber in your mouth.
错误类型:主谓一致(Subject-verb agreement errors)和时态一致。原因:主语“chips”为复数,谓语不应使用“it's have”;此外句子在谈过去的喜好,应将动词改为过去时并使动词与主语一致。建议:复数主语用复数动词,时态要与上下文一致。
× Yes, of course, because there has distinctive food in the different seasons.
✓ Yes, of course, because there are distinctive foods in the different seasons.
错误类型:介词及结构使用错误(Incorrect use of prepositions)同时涉及存在句格式。原因:使用存在句时应用“There are”而非“there has”,且“distinctive food”在此语境下应为复数“distinctive foods”。建议:表示“有……(复数)”时用“there are + 复数名词”。
× And for example, because I am a Vietnam people in summer, we have a very famous food and ingredients called drinks.
✓ For example, because I am Vietnamese, in summer we have a very famous dish and ingredient called 'drinks'.
错误类型:代词/形容词使用错误(Incorrect use of pronouns)。原因:短语“I am a Vietnam people”应为形容词或名词单数形式“Vietnamese”或“a Vietnamese person”;“food and ingredients called drinks”表达混乱,应明确为“a famous dish/ingredient called 'drinks'”。建议:国籍用形容词形式(Vietnamese)或说“a Vietnamese person”;明确区分dish/ingredient。
× So at that time we also eat drinks, hot pot for our dinner and that's really delicious and uh, that have a really, uh.
✓ So at that time we also ate 'drinks' hot pot for our dinner, and it was really delicious.
错误类型:句子结构错误(Sentence structure errors)并含主谓不一致。原因:时态应为过去式,用“ate”;“that's really delicious”应与过去时一致为“it was really delicious”;“that have”主谓不匹配,应为“it had”或省略。建议:保持时态一致,确保主语和动词形式匹配,删除不必要的填充词。
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
✓ (This is the examiner's question — no correction needed.)
该句为考官提问,语法正确,无需修改。
× Yes, of course. When I was little I prefer junk food which is unhealthy and and unhygienic because it tastes good and it's easy to take.
✓ Yes, of course. When I was little I preferred junk food, which was unhealthy and unhygienic because it tasted good and was easy to get.
错误类型:现在时问题(Present tense issue)与词汇搭配。原因:描述过去的偏好应使用过去时“preferred”和“tasted”;“it's easy to take”不自然,改为“was easy to get”。建议:过去习惯用过去时;使用自然搭配如“easy to get/buy”。
× But when I grow up I nowadays prefer a healthy and nutrient food like salad and fresh fish because now.
✓ But when I grew up, I now prefer healthy and nutritious foods like salad and fresh fish.
错误类型:现在时问题(Present tense issue)和词性使用错误。原因:“when I grow up”应为过去式“when I grew up”;“nutrient food”应为形容词“nutritious”或名词短语“nutritious foods”;句尾“because now”不完整,应合并为“now”。建议:保持时态一致,使用正确形容词形式并完成句子结构。