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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

My favorite food is chicken because I think the chicken is very delicious and it's also famous in China, so I very like chicken.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

I like candy when I Yang because when I traveled I really like sweet food. So when I young I really like candy.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Not really because if I like example for chicken, if I like chicken I think I will like chicken ever.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I was change my favorite food when I young.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 表达要更自然、准确并注意句子结构。先直接回答(主题句),然后简要给出1-2个具体理由,避免重复和语法错误。例如把“I very like chicken”改为“I really like chicken”。

Ví dụ: My favourite food is chicken. I enjoy it because it's very tasty and widely eaten in China, so I grew up eating many different chicken dishes like kung pao and steamed chicken.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 注意时态和词汇使用,减少无关信息并提高连贯性。先用过去时表明童年喜好,然后给出具体例子或原因,避免拼写错误(Yang → young)。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked sweets, especially candy. I remember enjoying fruit-flavoured candies and chocolate after school, which made them my favourite treats.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 需要更清晰直接回答并用连词组织理由。使用简单句或复合句表达季节性饮食差异,如果没有变化也说明原因并举例。避免模糊词汇和重复。

Ví dụ: Not really. I tend to eat the same types of food year-round, especially chicken, because my family cooks it often. However, in winter we sometimes eat more soups and stews.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构和时态有误。应直接用肯定或否定回答并说明变化原因和细节,给出具体的对比。避免简单的语法错误(e.g. “I changed”或“My favourite food has changed”).

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to prefer sweets like candy, but now I prefer savoury dishes such as chicken and rice because I enjoy more balanced meals.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× My favorite food is chicken because I think the chicken is very delicious and it's also famous in China, so I very like chicken.

My favorite food is chicken because I think chicken is very delicious and it's also famous in China, so I really like chicken.

句子中使用了不正确的副词/形容词搭配。英语中“very like”是不正确的表达,表示“非常喜欢”应使用副词“really”或“very much”修饰动词“like”。此外,在说一般类别时通常不需要在“chicken”前加定冠词“the”。建议:把“the chicken”改为“chicken”,把“very like”改为“really like”或“like ... very much”。

6: Present tense issue

× I like candy when I Yang because when I traveled I really like sweet food. So when I young I really like candy.

I liked candy when I was young because when I traveled I really liked sweet food. So when I was young I really liked candy.

句子中时态混用且人称拼写错误。“when I Yang/young”是拼写错误,应为“when I was young”。描述过去的习惯或经历应使用过去时(liked, was)。此外第二个分句中“when I traveled I really like”也应用过去时“liked”。建议:把“Yang/young”改为“was young”,并把所有关于过去的动词改为过去式。

6: Present tense issue

× Not really because if I like example for chicken, if I like chicken I think I will like chicken ever.

Not really, because for example if I like chicken, I think I will always like chicken.

句子时态和词序混乱。“example for chicken”词序错误,应为“for example”。“I will like chicken ever”中“ever”用法不当,表示持续性要用“always”。另外条件句中现在/将来时表达应清晰:如果现在喜欢(if I like chicken),将来一般会一直喜欢(I will always like chicken)。建议:将“example for chicken”改为“for example”,将“ever”改为“always”,并调整标点与词序。

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I was change my favorite food when I young.

Yes, my favorite food changed when I was young.

句子中使用了错误的过去时结构。“I was change”是错误的被动/进行式混用,应使用简单过去式“changed”。此外“when I young”缺少系动词,应为“when I was young”。建议:把“I was change”改为“changed”,并补全“was”在“when I was young”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FamousWell known
SweetSugary; Fragrant; Dulcet; Pleasant
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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