Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (taste, ingredients, or memories). Avoid repetition and keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is Filipino cuisine, especially chicken adobo. I love it because the meat is tender and the soy‑vinegar sauce gives it a savory, slightly tangy flavor. I often eat it with steamed rice, which soaks up the sauce nicely.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repeating the same point; mention frequency or a short anecdote to enrich the response.

Ví dụ: When I was young, my favourite dish was my mother’s fried chicken. Because we only had it on special occasions, it felt like a treat, and I remember the crispy skin and juicy meat that made it so memorable.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then provide specific seasonal examples and use linking words (for example, during, when, because). Correct word choice and concise phrasing will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, during harvest season my family would prepare rice‑based delicacies, while in the rainy months we preferred warm soupy dishes. These seasonal foods depended on what ingredients were available.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear statement about whether your tastes changed, then explain reasons and give one specific comparison (e.g., types of food eaten before and now). Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' and avoid filler phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, my tastes changed. After I moved to the city I ate more fast food because it was convenient, so I tended to eat more meat and fewer vegetables. However, recently I’ve tried to return to healthier, home‑cooked meals similar to those I had as a child.

× My favorite food were Filipino food, especially one of the dishes that I love was adobo that that is one of my favorite because for me it really tastes good.

✓ My favorite food was Filipino food; especially one of the dishes I love is adobo, which is one of my favorites because it tastes really good to me.

The subject 'My favorite food' is singular, so the verb should be 'was' not 'were' (singular and plural issue). Also 'food' as a category is uncountable here, and 'one of the dishes' should pair with 'is' when describing a current preference. Combine clauses to avoid repetition and use 'which' to link the reason. Suggestion: match singular subjects with singular verbs and avoid redundant words.

× Meat tastes good with the soy sauce.

✓ Meat tastes good with soy sauce.

'The' before 'soy sauce' is unnecessary when speaking generally about a type of condiment. Use no article for an uncountable, general noun: 'soy sauce'. Suggestion: omit 'the' when referring to things in general.

× I still remember when I was young, one of my favorite food that my mom used to cook for us was fried chicken.

✓ I still remember when I was young; one of my favorite foods that my mom used to cook for us was fried chicken.

'One of my favorite' must be followed by a plural noun 'foods' because it refers to one item from a group. Suggestion: use plural after 'one of my'.

× For me, that was super delicious food that I love when I was a kid 'cause we rarely have that in our dinner table when I was a kid.

✓ For me, that was super delicious; I loved it when I was a kid because we rarely had it on our dinner table.

Mixed tenses and repeated time markers create a sentence structure error. Use past tense 'loved' and 'had' to match 'when I was a kid'. Remove repetition ('when I was a kid' appeared twice). Also use 'on our dinner table' rather than 'in'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and avoid repeating the same time phrase.

× I would say yes because back during my childhood my mom used to cut different variety of dish Filipino dishes especially it depends on the season.

✓ I would say yes because during my childhood my mom used to cook a variety of Filipino dishes, especially depending on the season.

Several issues: 'cut' is incorrect verb here; context requires 'cook' (verb choice, not in the list but corrected under present tense/structure). 'Different variety of dish Filipino dishes' is ungrammatical — use 'a variety of Filipino dishes.' 'Back during' is redundant; 'during my childhood' is sufficient. Suggestion: use 'used to cook a variety of Filipino dishes' and 'depending on the season' for clarity.

× If it's harvest season, we used to cook umm rice delicacies.

✓ If it was harvest season, we used to cook rice delicacies.

Mixing present 'it's' with past habitual 'used to' creates a tense mismatch; use past 'it was' to match 'used to.' Also remove filler 'umm.' Suggestion: keep conditional/time clause tense consistent with the main clause.

× Yeah, there's a lot of changes.

✓ Yeah, there are a lot of changes.

'There' with plural noun 'a lot of changes' requires plural verb 'are' not singular 'is/there's'. This is a 'there be' subject-verb agreement issue. Suggestion: use 'there are' for plural countable nouns.

× Growing up when I when I move into the city, I was more into fast food and I wasn't eating healthy foods.

✓ Growing up, when I moved into the city, I became more into fast food and I didn't eat healthy foods.

'Move' should be past 'moved' to match past context (present tense issue). Also use 'became' or 'was more into' and 'didn't eat' (simple past) rather than 'wasn't eating' for habitual past actions. Suggestion: keep past tense for events that happened in the past.

× And then I see that I always eat meat instead of vegetable compared to when I was young and even my taste buds.

✓ And then I noticed that I always ate meat instead of vegetables compared to when I was young, even changing my taste buds.

Pronoun/phrase issues and tense inconsistency: 'see that' should be past 'noticed' to match past context. 'Vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' when speaking generally. The phrase 'and even my taste buds' is incomplete; clarify as 'even changing my taste buds.' Suggestion: use correct verb tense and plural forms and make the final idea explicit.