Food— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Remove repetition and tighten the response. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (taste, ingredients, memory) using linking words. Keep it under five sentences and avoid duplicated words like “but but.”

Ví dụ: My favourite food is my grandma’s lasagna. It tastes rich and comforting because she layers it with slow-cooked tomato sauce, creamy béchamel, and a blend of cheeses. Moreover, it reminds me of childhood dinners since she made it whenever our family gathered.

Gợi ý: Provide a complete, coherent answer: state past preference, contrast with present habit using a linking word, and give a specific reason and one example of current diet choices. Avoid incomplete sentence endings.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved burgers and other processed snacks. However, I avoid them now because they are unhealthy, so I follow a vegan diet that focuses on whole foods like legumes, vegetables, and grains.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and well-organised. To improve, add a brief specific example or reason for the seasonal choice and use a linking phrase to connect ideas smoothly. Keep to three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes. In summer I prefer light meals such as salads and fresh fruits because they are refreshing and hydrating. In winter I eat more soups and pasta since warm dishes are comforting and help me stay warm.

Gợi ý: Avoid short fragmented sentences and repetition. Give a single clear topic sentence, then two concise supporting details (specific flavours/ingredients and the memory). Finish the thought — don’t leave it trailing. Use linking words to make it coherent and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, my favourite food is still my grandma’s lasagna. It has a rich flavour from herbs like basil and oregano and a mix of cheeses, so it tastes incredible. Also, it reminds me of family gatherings from my childhood, which makes it special.

× I would say my grandma's lasagna is my favorite meal. This is because it not only tastes absolutely amazing but but every time I have it, it reminds me of my childhood since she used to make this meal every time I went.

✓ I would say my grandma's lasagna is my favorite meal because it not only tastes absolutely amazing but also reminds me of my childhood; she used to make it whenever I visited.

Problem types: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 20 (Incorrect adverb placement) and repeated word. The sentence contains a duplicated word ('but but'), an awkward clause order, and a redundant phrase ('every time' repeated). Suggest combining clauses with 'because' and using 'also' after 'but' for clarity, and replace 'every time I went' with 'whenever I visited' for natural phrasing.

× I used to love burgers and processed food in general. However, now I tend to avoid eating this kind of foods because they are harmful to our health. So now I am a vegan and try to eat.

✓ I used to love burgers and processed food in general. However, now I tend to avoid eating these kinds of food because they are harmful to our health. I am now a vegan and try to eat healthily.

Problem types: 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers) and 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'This kind of foods' is incorrect: use 'these kinds of food' or 'this kind of food'. The final clause 'try to eat' is incomplete and needs an adverb or object; 'try to eat healthily' completes the thought. Also move 'now' to a natural position: 'I am now a vegan.'

× Yes, in the summertime I prefer eating salads and fruits. However, in the winter I find myself eating more soups and pasta. I believe that having warm soup in winter is the best meal.

✓ Yes, in the summertime I prefer to eat salads and fruit. However, in the winter I find myself eating more soup and pasta. I believe that a warm bowl of soup in winter is the best meal.

Problem types: 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 1 (Singular and plural issue). 'Prefer eating' is acceptable but 'prefer to eat' is more natural. Use 'fruit' as an uncountable noun rather than 'fruits' in this context. 'Soups' and 'pasta' — use 'soup' (uncountable) or 'a bowl of soup' for natural phrasing. 'Having warm soup ... is the best meal' is awkward; 'a warm bowl of soup' is clearer.

× No, my favorite food, still the same. It is my grandma's lasagna. I love it because it tastes amazing. She uses many herbs, spices and condiments. So dazzling. It has a strong flavor also. I love it because it reminds me of my childhood and my.

✓ No, my favorite food is still the same: it is my grandma's lasagna. I love it because it tastes amazing. She uses many herbs, spices, and condiments, which make it dazzling and strongly flavored. I love it because it reminds me of my childhood and my family.

Problem types: 26 (Sentence structure errors), 23 (Sentence without a verb), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns). 'No, my favorite food, still the same.' lacks a verb; correct to 'is still the same.' 'So dazzling.' is a sentence fragment; combine with previous sentence. 'It has a strong flavor also.' is awkward; use 'strongly flavored' or 'which make it dazzling and strongly flavored.' The final fragment 'and my.' is incomplete; likely intended 'and my family' or 'and my grandmother.' Provide full noun to complete meaning.