Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is meat, vegetable such as. Potato. Green vegetable. Maybe have. And.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
In my children, I like very wild food. A little special. Or thought I? I can accept. Such as some special food.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yes, I can. In the winner. I can eat. Hot pot. The same. A bit. Hot food. In the summer, I can eat some.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I like the smile the same. My child. Because I think this foods a little special food is very good for me. So. I. Also like this folder. In my.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语言不连贯。首先应直接给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体描述喜欢的食物类型、原因或常吃的做法,使用连接词使句子更流畅。例如把“meat and vegetables”合并并具体说明喜欢的肉类和蔬菜,以及为什么喜欢。注意控制句子数量(最多5句)并避免断裂句。
Ví dụ: My favorite foods are meat and vegetables. I especially enjoy grilled chicken and roasted potatoes because they are flavorful and satisfying. I also like leafy greens like spinach for their freshness and health benefits.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 表达模糊且语法错误较多。应先明确回答过去的偏好(主题句),然后用具体例子说明“special”指的是什么(例如异国菜或辛辣食物),并说明原因。使用过去时态和连接词如“when I was young”或“for example”来组织信息。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I liked unusual or exotic foods. For example, I enjoyed spicy street snacks and dishes with strong flavors because they felt exciting and different from everyday meals.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含义可以理解但不连贯且用词错误(winter拼写和时态问题)。应直接回答并比较季节性饮食,用具体例子(如hot pot、cold salads)并用连接词(in winter/in summer/whereas)形成对比。保持句子简洁完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In winter I often have hot pot and other warm dishes to stay warm, whereas in summer I prefer cold salads and fruits to feel refreshed.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 表达不清且句子碎片化。应该直接回答(Yes/No),随后用一两句解释是否改变并给出原因或例子(例如健康、习惯、口味变化)。使用清晰的句子结构并避免重复或无意义的词。
Ví dụ: No, my favorite foods have not changed much since I was a child. I still enjoy the same special dishes because they are comforting and remind me of family meals.
× My favorite food is meat, vegetable such as. Potato. Green vegetable. Maybe have. And.
✓ My favourite foods are meat and vegetables, such as potatoes and green vegetables.
句子碎片化且名词单复数、并列结构混乱。应使用复数 forms(foods → foods 或去掉,meat 可为不可数但列举时用 vegetables 复数),并用连词连接并列项,避免断句。例如将相关名词合并为一个完整句子:My favourite foods are meat and vegetables, such as potatoes and leafy greens。
× In my children, I like very wild food.
✓ When I was a child, I liked very spicy food.
原句中 'children' 用法错误(children 是复数名词,语境应为单数时期表达),且时态应为过去式。把短语改为 'When I was a child' 表示过去,'spicy'(辣)可能为原意 'wild' 用词不当。时态一致改为 liked。
× A little special. Or thought I? I can accept.
✓ They were a bit unusual, but I could accept them.
原句为片段且语序不当。需把含义连成完整句:描述食物“有点特别,但我能接受”。同时时态改为过去(were, could),代词和指代也需明确(them 指代食物)。
× Or thought I? I can accept. Such as some special food.
✓ For example, some special dishes.
原句“Or thought I?” 不符合英语表达,且代词和结构混乱。应使用常见举例结构 'For example',并用复数 'dishes' 或 'foods' 来指代多种食物。时态根据上下文用过去或一般过去。
× Yes, I can. In the winner. I can eat. Hot pot. The same. A bit. Hot food. In the summer, I can eat some.
✓ Yes. In the winter I can eat hot pot and other hot foods; in the summer I eat cooler dishes.
原句断断续续、单词拼写错误(winner → winter),句子碎片化且时态和习惯表达不连贯。应合并为完整句并用正确拼写和连词,表达冬天吃火锅,夏天吃凉菜等对比。
× No, I like the smile the same. My child.
✓ No, my preference has stayed the same since I was a child; I still like the same foods.
原句语法和词汇混乱(the smile? My child.),缺少谓语和正确时态。用现在完成时 'has stayed' 表示从过去到现在持续的状态,或用 'since I was a child' 明确时间范围。
× Because I think this foods a little special food is very good for me.
✓ Because I think these foods are a little special and are very good for me.
原句 'this foods' 数量词和指示词不匹配(this 后应接单数或不可数),应改为 'these foods' 或 'this food';动词与主语也要一致(foods → are)。句子也需用并列连接清晰表达两层含义。
× So. I. Also like this folder. In my.
✓ So I also like these dishes.
原句为不完整片段,有拼写或词汇错误(folder → ? 应为 'dishes'),并且被不必要的停顿打断。应合并成完整句并使用正确名词以清晰表达喜好。