Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
I like hamburger.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
Noodles. I like noodles. My mom cooking cookies ate very delicious.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah. And I could either watermelon in the summer, but, uh. In winter I don't like, I prefer to eat.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, because then Mum still make it.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且语法和表达简单。应给出主题句并用1-2句补充具体原因或描述,使用连接词使回答更自然。注意冠词(a hamburger)和词汇多样性。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is hamburgers because I love the combination of juicy meat and fresh vegetables. For example, I often choose a burger with cheese and avocado, which makes it more satisfying.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 表达混乱且语法错误多。应先用一句话回答,然后用一到两句具体描述童年喜好,并用连接词衔接。修正动词时态和词序,避免不相关词语(cookies与noodles混淆)。
Ví dụ: When I was young, I loved noodles because they were warm and comforting. My mother used to cook homemade noodle soup with vegetables and chicken, which tasted delicious.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答重复、含糊且逻辑不清。应直接说明季节性饮食差异,使用连接词(for example, in summer/in winter)并给出具体食物和理由,句子不要太冗长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I often eat fruits like watermelon to stay hydrated, while in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to keep warm.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 句子不完整且信息不足。应明确回答(yes/no)并解释原因,使用过去和现在对比的结构,提供具体例子和连接词使表达连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood because my mother used to make my favourite meals at home. Now I prefer different dishes, such as grilled chicken and salads, because I like healthier options.
× I like hamburger.
✓ I like hamburgers.
错误类型:可数名词的单复数。hamburger(汉堡包)是可数名词,当表示一般喜好时需用复数形式或使用不定冠词。建议:若泛指多种或习惯性喜欢,使用复数(hamburgers);若指单个可用a hamburger。示例:I like hamburgers. 或 I like a hamburger (表示此刻想要一个)。
× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> Student: Noodles. I like noodles. My mom cooking cookies ate very delicious.
✓ Noodles. I liked noodles. My mom's cookies were very delicious.
错误类型:过去时和句子结构错误。问题是谈论过去的喜好,谓语动词应使用过去时(liked)。另外,“My mom cooking cookies ate very delicious” 语序和时态错误,应将动词作被动或用名词所有格和系动词:My mom's cookies were very delicious(妈妈做的饼干很美味)。建议:谈过去用过去时;表达“妈妈做的饼干”可用'my mom's cookies' 或 'the cookies my mom cooked',并用were/was描述味道。示例:I liked noodles. The cookies my mom cooked were very delicious.
× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? -> Student: Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah. And I could either watermelon in the summer, but, uh. In winter I don't like, I prefer to eat.
✓ Yeah. I could eat watermelon in the summer, but in winter I prefer not to. (Or: I usually eat watermelon in summer, but in winter I prefer other foods.)
错误类型:代词/结构及动词搭配错误。原句缺少动词('could either watermelon' 中缺动词),'either' 用法不当。应使用动词短语 'eat watermelon' 或用一般现在表示习惯 'usually eat';表达相反意思用 'prefer not to' 或 'prefer other foods'。建议:补全动词,去掉多余的 'either' 或正确配对(either ... or ...),并根据习惯时态使用一般现在时。示例:I usually eat watermelon in summer, but in winter I prefer other foods.
× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? -> Student: Yeah, because then Mum still make it.
✓ Yes. It has changed because back then my mum used to make it.
错误类型:时态问题(现在完成与过去习惯)。问句用现在完成时询问从过去到现在的变化,回答应使用现在完成或表过去习惯的结构。原句 'then Mum still make it' 主谓不一致且时态错误,应使用过去时或 'used to' 表示过去常做的事,并注意第三人称单数 'make' 应为 'made' 或 'used to make'。建议:使用 'used to' 或过去式 'made' 来表达过去的习惯,并用 'has changed' 表示现在的变化。示例:Yes, it has changed because back then my mum used to make it.