Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite food?
Thí sinh
My favorite food is AG, no matter how to cook it. Steamed egg, fried egg omelets, scrambled egg, all of them. I like it.
Giám khảo
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Thí sinh
When I was a young child, I prefer the food that is very sweet, such as the cakes and the bread or any dessert. And I still remember when I was in my university, I didn't have lunch and dinner. I I have my lunch and dinner with I don't know.
Giám khảo
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Thí sinh
Of course, uh, I'm tend to eat the food in season such as the fruit and vegetables, cause the fruit and vegetables in season has less, has less uh toxic and for different weather or the temperature I prefer.
Giám khảo
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Thí sinh
Of course I when I was a child, I prefer this sweet food, but when I grow up, I I don't like it. I I prefer noodles, which I hated when I was a child.
What is your favourite food?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接且语句更自然,避免重复。先给出主题句,然后补充一两条具体原因或例子,使用连接词让表达更连贯。例如把“no matter how to cook it”换成更自然的说法,并将具体做法列成短句。注意发音清晰。
Ví dụ: My favourite food is eggs. I enjoy them in many ways, such as steamed eggs, omelettes and scrambled eggs, because they are versatile and easy to prepare.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答应使用正确时态并保持句子完整。避免语无伦次的插入信息(如关于大学的部分)。先用过去时说明喜欢的食物,再给出具体例子和原因。若想补充回忆,清晰表达时间顺序并用连接词。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked very sweet foods, such as cakes, bread and desserts, because they tasted comforting. I remember eating a lot of sweets at birthday parties and family gatherings.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁且语法正确。说明习惯(吃应季食物)后,用一两条具体理由支持,避免含糊或重复。用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接原因,注意名词单复数和时态一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually eat seasonal foods, especially fruits and vegetables, because they taste better and are fresher. For example, I eat strawberries in spring and mangoes in summer.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并使用正确时态。先直接回答“yes/no”,然后简要比较过去与现在的喜好并给出原因或具体例子。避免重复词语和停顿。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred sweet snacks, but now I prefer noodles because they are filling and I like the variety of sauces and toppings.
× My favorite food is AG, no matter how to cook it.
✓ My favorite food is eggs, no matter how they are cooked.
主谓一致与代词使用:原句中“AG”似为“eggs”的错误拼写,且后半句使用被动更自然。需要将主语复数“eggs”与代词“they”对应,并用被动语态“are cooked”。建议使用复数名词并把后半句改为被动形式以保持语法一致。
× Steamed egg, fried egg omelets, scrambled egg, all of them.
✓ Steamed eggs, fried egg omelets, scrambled eggs — all of them.
单复数问题:列举可数食物时应使用恰当的复数形式(eggs),并用破折号或连词连接片段。建议将“egg”改为复数以匹配“一类食物”的概念。
× When I was a young child, I prefer the food that is very sweet, such as the cakes and the bread or any dessert.
✓ When I was a young child, I preferred foods that were very sweet, such as cakes, bread, or desserts.
时态和冠词问题:描述过去习惯要使用过去时“preferred”,名词也应使用复数“foods/cakes/desserts”或不加定冠词。原句混用现在时和过去时,且定冠词使用不当。建议把动词和名词都改为过去形式并去掉不必要的冠词。
× And I still remember when I was in my university, I didn't have lunch and dinner.
✓ And I still remember that when I was at university, I sometimes didn't have lunch or dinner.
时态与介词问题:地点短语应为“at university”,并且需要用更自然的副词“sometimes”来表达偶尔没吃饭,同时“lunch or dinner”比“and”更恰当。原句使用“in my university”不地道且语义需调整。建议改用“at university”和增加频率副词。
× I I have my lunch and dinner with I don't know.
✓ I don't know how I managed to have lunch and dinner.
句子结构错误:原句断裂且含糊不清。需要重构句子以表达“我不知道我是怎么吃到午饭和晚饭的”。建议使用“I don't know how I managed to...”来表示不确定的方式或原因。
× Of course, uh, I'm tend to eat the food in season such as the fruit and vegetables, cause the fruit and vegetables in season has less, has less uh toxic and for different weather or the temperature I prefer.
✓ Of course, I tend to eat seasonal foods such as fruits and vegetables, because seasonal fruits and vegetables have fewer toxins, and I prefer different foods in different weather or temperatures.
时态、单复数、连词与词序问题:不定式与现在时混用(“I'm tend”错误,应为“I tend”),“fruit and vegetables”需统一复数形式“fruits and vegetables”,谓语与主语要保持一致(“have fewer toxins”),连词“because”比“cause”更正式,句子需拆分以改善可理解性。建议去掉多余的语气词并调整主谓一致和词序。
× Of course I when I was a child, I prefer this sweet food, but when I grow up, I I don't like it.
✓ Of course. When I was a child, I preferred sweet food, but when I grew up, I didn't like it anymore.
第三人称单数/时态问题:描述过去的偏好应使用过去时“preferred”,而“when I grow up”应为过去式“when I grew up”,之后用过去时“didn't like”。原句时态混乱且重复“I”。建议统一使用过去时并删去重复词。
× I I prefer noodles, which I hated when I was a child.
✓ I prefer noodles, which I hated when I was a child.
重复词与单复数问题:删除多余的重复“I”。其他部分无复数错误,但保持时态一致(现在时表达当前偏好,which从句用过去时正确)。建议注意不要重复词语。