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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

Well, my favorite food isn't pizza, uh, due to the fact that I'm Italian and for me, what the sense of fullness that I have with a pizza is something that nothing else can replace.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

When I was younger, I like, uh, mostly I think pasta with, uh, seafood. Umm, I was like in love with, uh, ice cream and uh, another fish that uh, I like the was.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Yes, my diet is completely changed over time. In fact, when I was young I was not used to eating tomato. But actually I completely changed my diet and I love every type of tomato. Tomato sauce or.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, when I was younger, umm, I was used to eating uh, pasta with pesto or just tomato sausage and but nowadays I, I prefer umm, umm, meal more elaborate and umm, like uh, uh, seafood.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Riduci le esitazioni e migliora la chiarezza della risposta. Inizia con una frase diretta che risponda alla domanda, poi aggiungi una ragione specifica usando connettori (because, so). Evita ripetizioni e parole superflue come "uh" o frasi confuse come "what the sense of fullness"; usa invece un'espressione chiara e naturalmente inglese come "the feeling of satisfaction". Mantieni la risposta entro 2-3 frasi per essere efficace.

Ví dụ: My favourite food is pizza because it gives me a great feeling of satisfaction and reminds me of home in Italy. I especially enjoy thin-crust pizza with fresh tomato and basil because of the strong, simple flavours.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Rendi la risposta più organizzata e correggi errori grammaticali (uso dei tempi). Inizia con una frase al passato semplice per indicare le preferenze passate, poi fornisci due o tre esempi chiari e specifici collegati con connettori (for example, also). Evita esitazioni e vaghezze come "another fish that I like the was" sostituendole con nomi concreti (e.g., "anchovies").

Ví dụ: When I was young, I mainly liked pasta with seafood. For example, I enjoyed spaghetti with clams and mussels, and I was also very fond of ice cream, especially chocolate and pistachio flavours.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Chiarisci la distinzione tra cambiamento nel tempo e variazione stagionale: la domanda riguarda le stagioni. Rispondi direttamente (Yes/No) e spiega con esempi stagionali concreti usando connettori (for example, in summer, in winter). Evita frasi incomplete come "Tomato sauce or." e fornisci frasi complete e specifiche sui cibi stagionali.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I eat more fresh salads and tomatoes, while in winter I prefer hearty dishes like soups and braised meats.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Rispondi in modo diretto e organizza il contenuto: prima conferma (Yes), poi descrivi cosa mangiavi prima e cosa preferisci adesso con dettagli specifici e collegamenti logici (now, whereas, because). Riduci le esitazioni e usa vocabolario preciso per "meal more elaborate" (e.g., "more elaborate dishes" or "more complex seafood dishes"). Limita la risposta a 2-3 frasi.

Ví dụ: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I often ate simple dishes like pasta with pesto or tomato and sausage, whereas now I prefer more elaborate meals, especially a variety of seafood dishes because I enjoy their delicate flavours.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, my favorite food isn't pizza, uh, due to the fact that I'm Italian and for me, what the sense of fullness that I have with a pizza is something that nothing else can replace.

Well, my favorite food isn't pizza, because I'm Italian and the sense of fullness I get from pizza is something nothing else can replace.

The original uses 'due to the fact that' awkwardly and mixes clauses. Replace with 'because' for clarity and correct preposition use: 'have with a pizza' is unnatural; use 'get from pizza'. Also remove redundant words for fluency. Suggestion: simplify causal clause and use correct preposition 'from' for source of feeling.

Present tense issue

× When I was younger, I like, uh, mostly I think pasta with, uh, seafood.

When I was younger, I liked mostly pasta with seafood.

The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the past tense 'liked' is required rather than present 'like'. Also remove filler words and extra commas for clarity. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits: 'I liked' or 'I used to like'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Umm, I was like in love with, uh, ice cream and uh, another fish that uh, I like the was.

I was really in love with ice cream and another fish that I liked.

Pronoun and word order are incorrect: 'another fish that I like the was' is ungrammatical. Use past tense 'liked' to match 'was', and place pronoun after the verb. Also replace colloquial fillers. Suggestion: reorganize as 'I was really in love with ice cream and another fish that I liked.'

Present tense issue

× Yes, my diet is completely changed over time.

Yes, my diet has completely changed over time.

Change over time is a present result of past change, so present perfect 'has changed' is appropriate rather than simple present 'is changed'. Suggestion: use present perfect for changes that occurred over a period up to now.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× In fact, when I was young I was not used to eating tomato.

In fact, when I was young I was not used to eating tomatoes.

Countable nouns like 'tomato' in general statements should be plural 'tomatoes' or use 'tomato' with an article or as an uncountable noun 'tomato' would require context. Suggestion: use plural for general food items: 'eating tomatoes'.

Sentence structure errors

× But actually I completely changed my diet and I love every type of tomato. Tomato sauce or.

But actually I completely changed my diet and now I love every type of tomato, even tomato sauce.

Fragment 'Tomato sauce or.' is incomplete. Also tense consistency: 'completely changed' (past) with present 'I love' is acceptable if you add 'now'. Combine fragments into a full sentence. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and connect ideas: 'now I love every type of tomato, even tomato sauce.'

Present tense issue

× Uh, yes, when I was younger, umm, I was used to eating uh, pasta with pesto or just tomato sausage and but nowadays I, I prefer umm, umm, meal more elaborate and umm, like uh, uh, seafood.

Yes, when I was younger I used to eat pasta with pesto or just tomato and sausage, but nowadays I prefer more elaborate meals, like seafood.

Use 'used to' + infinitive for past habitual actions: 'was used to eating' is possible but 'used to eat' is simpler. Also word order and articles were incorrect: 'tomato sausage' unclear—change to 'tomato and sausage'. Use plural 'meals' and adjective 'more elaborate' before noun. Remove fillers. Suggestion: restructure sentence: 'I used to eat... but nowadays I prefer more elaborate meals, like seafood.'

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